Parks— Part 1 Informe

Sugerencia: Be more natural and grammatically accurate. Start with a clear topic sentence, avoid repetition and filler words, use correct verb forms and concise adjectives. Add one brief supporting detail (what you did or why you enjoyed it) using a linking word.

Ejemplo: Yes, I liked going to parks as a child. I often played on the swings and climbed trees, which was exciting and helped me make friends.

Sugerencia: Reduce fillers and combine ideas into one coherent sentence. Use correct phrasing (e.g., "going to the park helps me breathe fresh air and relax") and add a brief specific example of an activity you do there, with a linking phrase.

Ejemplo: Yes, I still enjoy going to the park because it lets me breathe fresh air and relax; for example, I usually sit on a bench and read a book for half an hour.

Sugerencia: Make your response concise and correct word choice ("parks" not "parking"). Start with a clear opinion, then give two short, specific reasons linked with a connector like "because" or "and". Avoid repetition and improve sentence flow.

Ejemplo: Yes, I would. More parks would give people more places to relax and exercise, and they would improve the city’s air quality and community life.

Sugerencia: Eliminate fillers, use correct verb forms and provide specific reasons. Start with a direct statement, then add details about what attracts you, using linking words like "because" or "for example." Correct plural/singular errors ("shops and places to drink").

Ejemplo: I would like to visit Central Park in Chengdu because it is famous and reportedly has many shops and cafés where I can try local snacks and relax.

× I really enjoyed to going to go go into the park as a child.

✓ I really enjoyed going to the park as a child.

The verb 'enjoy' is followed by a gerund (-ing form), not an infinitive. Remove the extra words 'to' and duplicate 'go'. Suggestion: use 'enjoyed going' and keep the object 'the park'.

× It's so much fun and excited.

✓ It was so much fun and very exciting.

'Fun' is a noun/adjective describing the experience, while 'excited' describes a person. Use 'exciting' to describe the park experience. Also match tense to previous sentence ('did' -> past). Use an adverb like 'very' for emphasis if needed.

× Yes, I still like going to the park, umm, because uh, going to park can help me to, uh, absorb more fresh air and relax.

✓ Yes, I still like going to the park, because going to the park can help me absorb more fresh air and relax.

Countable singular nouns like 'park' require the definite article 'the' when referring to a specific park type previously mentioned. Also remove unnecessary 'to' after 'help' (help + base verb). Reduce filler words. Maintain present tense for habitual actions.

× Yes, I would like to see more parking my city because more park means you I have more place to go and and more parks can also provide a space for people to relax and do some exercise.

✓ Yes, I would like to see more parks in my city because more parks would mean I have more places to go, and parks can also provide space for people to relax and exercise.

Several article and plural issues: use plural 'parks' and 'places'. Add preposition 'in' before 'my city'. 'Parking' is incorrect; use 'parks'. Also fix sentence structure and remove extra words 'you I'. Use conditional/modal 'would mean' or simple present 'mean' for general statement. 'Do some exercise' can be simplified to 'exercise'.

× MMM I would like go to the Central Park in Chengdu.

✓ I would like to go to Central Park in Chengdu.

After 'would like' use the infinitive 'to go'. Also use the proper name 'Central Park' without 'the' when it is the official name, unless the local usage requires 'the'. Remove filler 'MMM'.

× The park is very famous in Chengdu and everyone said there have many shop and place to drink.

✓ The park is very famous in Chengdu, and everyone says there are many shops and places to get a drink.

Use present tense 'says' for general statements. 'There are' is required for plural existence. Use plural nouns 'shops' and 'places'. Use a natural phrase 'places to get a drink' instead of 'place to drink'.