Parks— Part 1 Informe

Sugerencia: Be concise and directly answer the question with a clear topic sentence, then add one or two specific supporting details. Avoid grammar mistakes (tense, pronouns) and irrelevant phrases. Use linking words (for example, because, so) to connect ideas and keep sentences under five. Focus on clarity: say when, why, and one memory or activity.

Ejemplo: Yes, I loved going to parks as a child because they made me feel peaceful and relaxed. For example, my mother would take me there every Sunday and I remember playing on the swings and walking in the gardens, which helped me feel calm after a busy week.

Sugerencia: Start with a clear topic sentence, then give one specific reason and an example. Correct verb forms and article use (e.g., “the parks,” “gives me an environment”). Use linking words like 'because' or 'when' to make the answer coherent and keep it within three sentences.

Ejemplo: Yes, I still enjoy going to parks because they help me relax and stay active. For example, when I feel stressed I go for a 30-minute walk in the park, which clears my mind and keeps me fit.

Sugerencia: Give a direct answer and one clear reason with a specific benefit. Avoid vague phrases like 'nature substances' and repetition. Use correct nouns and articles, and a linking word such as 'because' or 'so' to connect your reason to the answer.

Ejemplo: Yes, I would like to see more parks in my city because parks improve air quality and give people a place to relax. For instance, more neighbourhood parks would allow families to exercise and spend time outdoors without travelling far.

Sugerencia: Answer directly and give specific details about the park and why you want to visit. Fix place names and prepositions (e.g., 'the park in Chandigarh' or 'a park near the Atlanta Mall'). Use one linking phrase like 'because' and limit to three sentences.

Ejemplo: Yes, I would like to visit the Rock Garden in Chandigarh because I have heard it is very beautiful and unique. I also want to try its walking paths and see the sculptures, and I think the park’s facilities would make a pleasant day trip.

× Definitely, yes, I like to go to the parks in my childhood as a it give me a sense of peace and relaxation when I was a child and I came to know about him by my mother when he when she stated that you that I like to go to parks for my physical activities and other several loans.

✓ Definitely. Yes, I liked going to parks in my childhood because they gave me a sense of peace and relaxation, and my mother told me that I liked going to parks for physical activities and other reasons.

The student mixes present tense with past-tense context. Childhood experiences should be described in the past tense. 'I like to go to the parks in my childhood' should be 'I liked going to parks in my childhood.' Singular/plural and pronoun errors also occur ('it give' -> 'they gave'; 'him' and 'he' are wrong references). Suggestion: Use past tense verbs (liked, gave, told) for past experiences and ensure pronouns agree with their antecedents (parks -> they).

× Definitely yes I like to go to parks till now as whenever I feel stressed and upset I like to go to parks for some physical activities that keeps my body fit and whenever I move to parks it give me a environment of peace that relax my mind.

✓ Definitely. Yes, I still like going to parks because whenever I feel stressed and upset I go there for physical activities that keep my body fit, and being in parks gives me a peaceful environment that relaxes my mind.

The student mixes forms and has subject-verb agreement issues with present tense. Use present simple consistently for habitual actions: 'I still like going', 'whenever I feel', 'physical activities that keep', 'gives me', 'relaxes my mind.' Also use 'a peaceful environment' (article and adjective order) and avoid 'move to parks' which is unnatural; use 'go there' or 'being in parks.'

× Certainly yes, I like to see more parks in my city as the parks are the symbols of nature and the nature substances should be in a more quantity in every area as a nature provide peace and comfortability to every person and this would be the more in quantity.

✓ Certainly. Yes, I would like to see more parks in my city because parks are symbols of nature, and natural areas should be more abundant in every neighbourhood since nature provides peace and comfort to everyone.

The student misuses articles and some nouns: 'the parks are the symbols' is better as 'parks are symbols' (general statement). 'The nature substances' is incorrect; use 'natural areas' or 'green spaces.' 'In a more quantity' is ungrammatical; use 'more abundant.' 'Comfortability' is nonstandard; use 'comfort.' Suggestion: Use plural or uncountable nouns correctly for general statements and choose standard collocations (green spaces, more abundant).

× Yes, in the future I want to go to the park in the Chandigarh as it is famous in and located in Atlanta Mall.

✓ Yes, in the future I want to go to the park in Chandigarh because it is famous and is located near Atlanta Mall.

Prepositions are incorrect or unnecessary: 'in the Chandigarh' should be 'in Chandigarh' (no article for city names) and 'famous in and located in Atlanta Mall' is wrong. Use 'famous' (no preposition) and 'located near Atlanta Mall' or 'located at Atlanta Mall' depending on exact meaning. Suggestion: Use correct prepositions for places (in Chandigarh, located near/at).

× I want to go there as I have heard a lot of about the park as there are a lot of amenities that are provided to the traveller and the tourist.

✓ I want to go there because I have heard a lot about the park and that many amenities are provided for travellers and tourists.

The phrase 'heard a lot of about' is incorrect; correct is 'heard a lot about.' 'A lot of amenities' is acceptable but 'that are provided to the traveller and the tourist' is awkward and uses incorrect articles and singular/plural. Use 'many amenities' and plural 'travellers and tourists' and preposition 'for.' Suggestion: Use 'heard a lot about' and match quantifiers and plurality correctly (many amenities, travellers and tourists).