Views— Part 1 Informe

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Part 1

Examinador

Do you like taking pictures of different views?

Candidato

Well, yes, I like taking pictures of different wheels. I think nature wheels are very legacy and they make good photos, so I often take photos when I go hiking. For example, last week I took many sea pictures and I shared them with my friends.

Examinador

Do you prefer views in urban areas or rural areas?

Candidato

Well, I prefer Rob areas because they are peaceful and the sandway is beautiful so I can like sleep. For example, I like working in the countryside and the taking photos of the field and the mountains

Examinador

Do you prefer views in your own country or in other countries?

Candidato

Well, I prefer wheels in my own country because they are more familiar and meaningful to me. For example, I like walking by the local mountains and rivers because they remind me of home and family and I go there quite often.

Evaluación

Total

Total: 5.0Fluidez y coherencia: 5.5Pronunciación: 5.0Gramática: 5.0Recurso léxico: 5.0

Part 1

Do you like taking pictures of different views?

Puntuación: 48.0

Sugerencia: 先直接回答问题,再补充一个具体原因和经历。注意区分“views”(景色)和“wheels”(车轮);“legacy”不适合描述自然景色,可以用“beautiful”或“stunning”。“Sea pictures”可改为“photos of the sea”,并避免重复使用“take pictures/photos”。

Ejemplo: Yes, I do. I especially enjoy photographing beautiful landscapes because they make memorable pictures. I often take photos when I go hiking; last week, I took some pictures of the sea and shared them with my friends.

Do you prefer views in urban areas or rural areas?

Puntuación: 35.0

Sugerencia: 需要清楚说明你喜欢城市还是乡村景色。答案中的“Rob areas”和“sandway”意思不明确;如果你想说乡村,可使用“rural areas”“scenery”或“landscape”。补充具体理由时,可以提到乡村安静、空气清新,以及田野或山脉等景物;同时注意语法,如“taking photos of the fields and mountains”。

Ejemplo: I prefer rural views because they are peaceful and the scenery is beautiful. The open fields and mountains help me relax, and I enjoy taking photos of them when I visit the countryside.

Do you prefer views in your own country or in other countries?

Puntuación: 68.0

Sugerencia: 回答结构清楚,也提供了个人理由和例子。注意“wheels”应为“views”;“walking by the local mountains and rivers”不太自然,可以说“walking near the local mountains and rivers”。结尾可用连接词把熟悉的景色与家庭回忆联系起来,并避免句子过长。

Ejemplo: I prefer the views in my own country because they feel familiar and meaningful to me. For instance, I often walk near the local mountains and rivers, which remind me of home and my family.

Gramática

13: Incorrect use of adjectives or adverbs

× I think nature wheels are very legacy and they make good photos, so I often take photos when I go hiking.

✓ I think nature wheels are very beautiful and they make good photos, so I often take photos when I go hiking.

“Legacy”通常表示“遗产”或“传统”,不适合用来描述景色,也不能自然地与“very”搭配。这里应使用可以描述景色、且适合由“very”修饰的形容词,例如“beautiful”。

17: Incorrect use of the definite article

× For example, I like working in the countryside and the taking photos of the field and the mountains

✓ For example, I like working in the countryside and taking photos of the field and the mountains.

“the countryside”是常见固定表达,因此要保留“the”;但“taking photos”中的“taking”是与“working”并列的动名词,不应在前面加“the”。并列结构应保持一致:“working … and taking …”。

Vocabulario

Beautiful— Attractive
Different— Dissimilar; Distinct; Unusual
Good— Fine; Virtuous; Well-behaved; Right; Capable
Many— Numerous; A great/good deal of
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