Views— Part 1 Informe

Sugerencia: Answer the question directly and use more natural grammar. Say “I own a camera” instead of “I own camera,” and replace “I've never got trouble without taking it” with “I always take it with me.” Avoid repetition such as “how to how to training,” and explain one or two specific skills you learned, such as composition or photo editing. Use a linking word such as “because” to connect your preference with your reason.

Ejemplo: Yes, I really enjoy taking pictures of different views, and I always carry my camera with me. When I was in high school, I joined the photography club, where I learned about composition and photo editing. Since then, I’ve especially enjoyed photographing beautiful landscapes and city scenes.

Sugerencia: State your preference clearly at the beginning: “I prefer rural views.” The phrases “lull area,” “flash green landscapes,” and “pure sky” are unclear or unnatural; use “rural areas,” “lush green landscapes,” and “clear skies.” Avoid repeating “take a photo” and “the photograph,” and provide a specific reason or example to make the answer more effective.

Ejemplo: I prefer views in rural areas because they are peaceful and full of natural beauty. For example, I love taking pictures of lush green fields, clear rivers, and wide-open skies. These photos often look more impressive because they show the landscape in its natural state.

Sugerencia: Answer directly by saying whether you prefer views in Japan or abroad. Replace unclear expressions such as “I've never traveled a blow” and “Japanese boots” with “I haven’t traveled abroad” and “views in Japan.” Avoid repeating “train,” and explain your choice with a specific example. Use linking words such as “because” and “for example” to make the answer coherent.

Ejemplo: I prefer views in my own country, Japan, because I enjoy seeing how the scenery changes from season to season. Different regions have their own attractions, such as beaches, mountains, and traditional towns. I often take trains to these places and photograph the landscapes, so I can build a collection of images from across Japan.

× Actually I own camera and I've never got trouble without taking it.

✓ Actually, I own a camera, and I've never had trouble without taking it.

The singular countable noun camera needs the indefinite article a. Use a before a singular countable noun when mentioning one nonspecific item.

× I learned many skills from the teacher and how to how to training by using PC.

✓ I learned many skills from the teacher, including how to train using a PC.

After how to, use the base form of the verb, not the -ing form. Therefore, how to training should be how to train.

× I learned many skills from the teacher and how to how to training by using PC.

✓ I learned many skills from the teacher, including how to train using a PC.

PC is a singular countable noun in this context, so it needs the article a: a PC.

× I learned many skills from the teacher and how to how to training by using PC.

✓ I learned many skills from the teacher, including how to train using a PC.

The original sentence combines learned many skills and how to train in an unclear structure. Use including to introduce the specific skill that was learned.

× I like a lull area view because which has a very flash green landscapes or there are pure water, pure sky, pure air.

✓ I like views in rural areas because they have very fresh green landscapes, and there is pure water, pure sky, and pure air.

Because should be followed by a complete clause. The combination because which is incorrect here. Use because they have to connect the reason clearly to views.

× I like a lull area view because which has a very flash green landscapes or there are pure water, pure sky, pure air.

✓ I like views in rural areas because they have very fresh green landscapes, and there is pure water, pure sky, and pure air.

Which cannot function as the subject in this structure after because. Use the subject pronoun they to refer to views.

× I like a lull area view because which has a very flash green landscapes or there are pure water, pure sky, pure air.

✓ I like views in rural areas because they have very fresh green landscapes, and there is pure water, pure sky, and pure air.

Landscapes is plural, so it cannot follow the singular article a. Use either a very fresh green landscape or very fresh green landscapes. The plural form views also fits the general meaning better.

× I like a lull area view because which has a very flash green landscapes or there are pure water, pure sky, pure air.

✓ I like views in rural areas because they have very fresh green landscapes, and there is pure water, pure sky, and pure air.

Water is an uncountable noun, so use there is, not there are. There are is used with plural countable nouns.

× And if I take a photos, the photograph shows its beauty more and more.

✓ And if I take photos, the photographs show their beauty more and more.

Photos and photographs are plural nouns, so they should not be preceded by the singular article a. The plural subject photographs also requires the plural pronoun their.

× And if I take a photos, the photograph shows its beauty more and more.

✓ And if I take photos, the photographs show their beauty more and more.

Do not use a before the plural noun photos. The article a can only be used with a singular countable noun.

× And if I take a photos, the photograph shows its beauty more and more.

✓ And if I take photos, the photographs show their beauty more and more.

The plural subject photographs takes the plural verb show, not the singular verb shows.

× I've never traveled a blow so I like Japanese boots because they have four seasons and the very different aspects depending on the local area.

✓ I've never traveled abroad, so I like Japan because it has four seasons and very different aspects depending on the local area.

The definite article the is unnecessary before the general plural noun phrase very different aspects. Use very different aspects when speaking generally rather than referring to specific aspects already identified.

× So I take a train train and take photos and collect it.

✓ So I take a train, take photos, and collect them.

Them is the correct plural object pronoun because it refers to photos. It is used for a singular noun, whereas photos is plural.