Views— Part 1 Informe

Sugerencia: Câu trả lời có ý chính phù hợp nhưng nhiều lỗi ngữ pháp và dùng từ khiến ý nghĩa chưa rõ. “it’s depend” nên sửa thành “it depends”, “it’s have me remember” thành “it helps me remember”, và “photography” cần dùng dạng động từ “photograph” hoặc cụm “take photos of”. “Different blades” và “interesting play” không phù hợp ngữ cảnh; nên dùng “different views” và “interesting places”. Hãy mở đầu trực tiếp bằng sở thích, sau đó nêu lý do và một ví dụ cụ thể. Có thể dùng từ nối như “because” và “especially when”.

Ejemplo: Yes, I really enjoy taking pictures of different views because they help me remember special places and moments. Whenever I travel, I usually take photos of landscapes, especially mountains and lakes. I often do this with my friends, so the pictures also remind me of the fun we had together.

Sugerencia: Câu trả lời chưa thể hiện rõ sự lựa chọn giữa thành thị và nông thôn, đồng thời có nhiều cụm từ không tự nhiên như “pole area”, “strict texture” và “easy stress”. Nên chọn một phương án ngay câu đầu, chẳng hạn “I prefer rural views”. Sau đó giải thích bằng các chi tiết cụ thể như núi, cánh đồng, không khí yên tĩnh; nếu muốn so sánh, hãy dùng “whereas” hoặc “unlike”. Cần sửa “take photo” thành “take photos” và tránh các câu rời rạc như “I appreciate.”

Ejemplo: I prefer rural views because they are more peaceful and less crowded than urban areas. I especially enjoy taking photos of green fields, mountains, and small villages. By contrast, city views are often dominated by tall buildings and busy streets, although they can also be attractive at night.

Sugerencia: Ý tưởng chính là thích phong cảnh quê hương, nhưng câu trả lời còn nhiều lỗi về từ vựng, cấu trúc và số ít/số nhiều. “I really brief a view” nên sửa thành “I prefer the views”, “beautiful landscape” thành “beautiful landscapes”, và “mountain rival” có thể là “mountain rivers”. Hãy dùng câu đầy đủ với chủ ngữ, động từ rõ ràng; đồng thời sắp xếp các địa điểm theo cách tự nhiên. Câu trả lời nên nêu quan điểm, lý do và các ví dụ cụ thể như núi, sông và kiến trúc truyền thống.

Ejemplo: I prefer views in my own country, particularly those in my hometown. It has beautiful landscapes, including mountains, rivers, and traditional architecture. I enjoy photographing these places because they reflect my country’s culture and give me a strong sense of connection to my home.

× It’s depend on different blades.

✓ It depends on different views.

The subject it is third-person singular, so the present-tense verb needs the ending -s: depends, not depend.

× I like taking photo.

✓ I like taking photos.

The noun photo is countable and is used generally here, so it should be plural: photos.

× Because it’s have me remember interesting play and moment.

✓ Because it helps me remember interesting places and moments.

The subject it requires a third-person singular verb. The correct form is helps, not have. The plural nouns places and moments are also needed for general meaning.

× When I travel, I often photography landscape with my friend.

✓ When I travel, I often photograph landscapes with my friend.

Photography is a noun, but a verb is required after I often. The correct present-tense verb is photograph. Landscape should be plural because the speaker generally photographs more than one landscape.

× I like pole area and rural view.

✓ I like urban areas and rural views.

When talking about types of places and scenery in general, the countable nouns area and view should be plural: areas and views.

× Because they are different in country.

✓ Because they are different from each other and from the views in the countryside.

When expressing a difference, different should normally be followed by from. The comparison should clearly identify what the views are different from.

× Either I strict texture and cityscape and I often take photo of building an easy stress well in this countryside.

✓ I especially like the textures and cityscapes, and I often take photos of buildings and peaceful scenery in the countryside.

The original sentence has an unclear structure and several ideas are incorrectly joined. Use a clear subject and verb for each idea, and connect the ideas with and.

× I often take photo of building.

✓ I often take photos of buildings.

Both photo and building are countable nouns used generally, so both should be plural: photos and buildings.

× I appreciate.

✓ I appreciate these views.

The verb appreciate normally needs an object. Adding these views completes the sentence and makes the meaning clear.

× Now I really brief a view in my hometown.

✓ Now I really prefer the views in my hometown.

The question asks about views in general, so the plural noun views is more appropriate than the singular noun a view.

× There are many different and beautiful landscape.

✓ There are many different and beautiful landscapes.

The quantifier many must be followed by a plural countable noun. Therefore, landscape should be landscapes.

× Enjoy taking landscape photo here seeing the area has mountain, mountain rival and traditional architecture.

✓ I enjoy taking landscape photos here because the area has mountains, mountain rivers, and traditional architecture.

The original sentence lacks a clear subject and incorrectly combines several clauses. Adding I and because creates a complete and logical sentence.

× The area has mountain, mountain rival and traditional architecture.

✓ The area has mountains, mountain rivers, and traditional architecture.

Mountain is a countable noun used after has to describe several natural features, so it should be plural: mountains. The plural form rivers is also needed when referring to more than one river.

× Please give me lots of photo.

✓ It gives me lots of photo opportunities.

Lots of must be followed by a plural countable noun. The natural expression here is lots of photo opportunities, not lots of photo.