Views— Part 1 Informe

Sugerencia: Be more concise and grammatical. Start with a clear topic sentence, avoid hesitations and repetition, and give one or two specific examples with linking words. Correct verb forms and articles (e.g., "I like taking pictures" not "I like to taking picture"). Keep answer within 2–4 sentences.

Ejemplo: Yes, I love taking pictures of different views. For example, when I travel I often stop to photograph mountain vistas because the light and clouds create dramatic scenes, and I also take close-up shots of interesting details to remember the place.

Sugerencia: Answer directly and fix grammar and word choice (e.g., "away from the hustle and bustle of city life"). Use linking words (firstly, additionally) and give concrete reasons or a short example. Avoid vague phrases like "summarize me."

Ejemplo: I prefer views in rural areas because they are away from the hustle and bustle of city life. Additionally, the landscapes are more varied and peaceful, for example, I enjoy walking beside quiet lakes and photographing wide open fields that feel refreshing.

Sugerencia: Give a clear topic sentence and support it with specific, concise details. Avoid repetition (e.g., "cloudy cloudy") and correct grammar (e.g., "especially in the mountains", "the beaches also have many beautiful views"). Use one or two vivid examples to illustrate your preference.

Ejemplo: I prefer views in my own country because it offers diverse natural scenery. For example, our mountains often have dramatic cloud formations that make for great photos, and our beaches provide wide sandy shores and clear sunsets that I enjoy photographing.

× Definitely, I like to taking picture whenever see something is so breathtaking and mesmerizing.

✓ Definitely, I like taking pictures whenever I see something that is breathtaking and mesmerizing.

The verb 'like' followed by another verb should use the -ing form without 'to' (gerund), so 'like taking' not 'like to taking'. 'Picture' should be plural as a countable noun in this general statement. Also 'whenever see' is missing the subject 'I' and needs a relative particle 'that' to connect the clause. Improve by removing 'to' before the -ing verb, pluralizing countable nouns in general statements, adding the subject, and using 'that' to link descriptive clauses.

× I'm, I'm, I'm, uh, keen on photographer, so I'd like to take picture of mine and for example, when I go on travel, I will when I, when I see a.

✓ I'm keen on photography, so I'd like to take my own pictures; for example, when I travel, I take pictures when I see something noteworthy.

The noun 'photographer' is a person; the correct noun for the hobby is 'photography'. 'Take picture of mine' is ungrammatical; use 'take my own pictures' or 'take pictures of my own'. 'Go on travel' should be 'travel' or 'go on a trip'. The sentence was also fragmented and repetitive; combine and simplify into complete clauses. Use subject-verb agreement and correct noun forms.

× I would definitely prefer rural areas because they are away from hustle and bustle from of city life.

✓ I would definitely prefer rural areas because they are away from the hustle and bustle of city life.

The fixed expression is 'the hustle and bustle of (something)'. The original wrongly repeated 'from' and omitted the definite article 'the'. Use 'away from the hustle and bustle of city life' to follow the standard collocation and include the article.

× Also, the landscapes and the scenery as very beautiful in rural areas.

✓ Also, the landscapes and the scenery are very beautiful in rural areas.

The sentence used 'as' where the verb 'are' is required to form the predicate. Ensure subject-verb linking with the correct form of 'to be' for plural subjects ('landscapes and scenery' treated collectively), and use 'very beautiful' as the adjective phrase.

× Moreover, I like it because they have beautiful and refreshing atmosphere which summarize me.

✓ Moreover, I like them because they have a beautiful and refreshing atmosphere that rejuvenates me.

Pronoun reference was unclear: 'I like it' doesn't match plural 'they'; use 'them' to refer to 'rural areas' or 'landscapes'. 'Atmosphere' is a singular noun and needs an article 'a'. 'Which summarize me' is incorrect: 'summarize' is wrong verb; use 'rejuvenates' or 'refreshes' to convey the intended meaning and match singular subject 'atmosphere'. Also use 'that' for defining clauses.

× I would prefer views in my own country.

✓ I prefer views in my own country.

The original 'I would prefer' suggests conditional or hypothetical. Since the question asks a general preference, simple present 'I prefer' is more natural. Use simple present to state habitual preferences.

× My country is full of mesmerizing and stunning scenery specially in mountain.

✓ My country is full of mesmerizing and stunning scenery, especially in the mountains.

'Specially' is less natural here; 'especially' is the correct adverb. 'Mountain' should be plural 'mountains' when speaking generally. Add a comma before the adverbial phrase for clarity.

× The mountain looks so beautiful and the cloudy cloudy scene in mountains are so stunning.

✓ The mountains look so beautiful, and the cloudy scenes in the mountains are so stunning.

Subject-verb agreement: if referring to 'mountains' use plural verb 'look'. The phrase repeated 'cloudy cloudy' is redundant; use 'cloudy scenes'. 'Scenes in mountains are' needs an article 'the' before 'mountains' or 'the mountains' and ensure plural agreement.

× And the beach also have so much beautiful sceneries and views.

✓ And the beach also has so many beautiful scenes and views.

Subject-verb agreement: 'the beach' is singular and requires 'has' not 'have'. 'So much' is used with uncountable nouns; use 'so many' for countable nouns like 'scenes' or 'views'. 'Sceneries' is rare; use 'scenes' or 'landscapes' instead.