Views— Part 1 Informe

Sugerencia: Your answer is short and contains grammatical mistakes and unclear phrasing. Give a direct topic sentence that clearly answers the question, then add one or two specific supporting details using linking words. Keep it natural and concise (no more than 5 sentences).

Ejemplo: Yes, I enjoy taking photos of different views. For example, I like photographing city skylines at sunset because the light creates interesting colors and reflections. Also, I often take pictures of mountain landscapes when I travel since they feel peaceful and dramatic.

Sugerencia: The answer is unclear and contains incorrect words. Start with a clear preference statement, then give specific reasons and a linking word to connect ideas. Use relevant vocabulary (urban, rural, scenery, atmosphere).

Ejemplo: I prefer rural views to urban ones because the countryside is quieter and has more natural beauty. For instance, fields, forests, and winding rivers make relaxing and picturesque scenes that I enjoy photographing.

Sugerencia: The sentence has incorrect word choice. State your preference clearly and support it with a specific reason and an example. Use linking words like because or for example to make your answer coherent.

Ejemplo: I prefer the views in my own country because I know the best spots and feel a stronger connection to the places. For example, I often visit a nearby lake that changes with the seasons and always offers new photo opportunities.

× Yes, I didn't like just like picture of different view.

✓ Yes, I don't just like pictures of different views.

The original sentence has multiple issues: incorrect tense and auxiliary (said 'didn't like' conflicts with present preference), unnecessary repetition 'just like', missing plural forms 'picture'->'pictures' and 'view'->'views', and incorrect word order. Use present simple 'don't' for habitual preference, place 'just' before the verb if emphasizing, and make nouns plural when speaking generally. Suggestion: 'I don't just like pictures of different views.'

× I prefer you to rural MBA.

✓ I prefer rural areas to urban ones.

The original sentence uses incorrect pronouns and nonsensical words ('you', 'MBA'). The question asks preference between urban and rural areas. Use the structure 'prefer A to B' and correct nouns: 'rural areas' and 'urban ones'. Also maintain parallel noun forms. Suggestion: 'I prefer rural areas to urban ones.'

× I prefer using my own country.

✓ I prefer views in my own country.

The student used 'using' incorrectly and omitted 'views', which makes the sentence unclear. The question asked whether they prefer views in their own or other countries; use 'in' to indicate location and include the noun 'views'. Also use 'prefer' followed by noun phrase rather than 'using'. Suggestion: 'I prefer views in my own country.'