Views— Part 1 Informe

Sugerencia: Потрібно зменшити запинки та зайві слова («uh», «umm»), говорити більш природно й лаконічно. Почніть з чіткої теми, потім додайте одну-дві деталізовані фрази з використанням зв'язок (наприклад, 'for example', 'because'). Також виправте граматичні помилки (наприклад, 'a fascinating view' або 'fascinating views').

Ejemplo: Yes, I do. For example, this summer I visited Andorra and took photos from a mountain. The views were incredibly high and very fascinating because you could see valleys and snow-capped peaks.

Sugerencia: Потрібно більш чітко сформулювати думку та прибрати невпевнені конструкції. Використовуйте зв'язки ('because', 'as', 'which') щоб пояснити причину, і надайте конкретний приклад або деталь. Уникайте непрямої мови типу 'take you to the culture' — краще 'reflect the local culture'.

Ejemplo: I prefer urban views because cityscapes often reflect the local culture and daily life. For example, seeing markets, architecture and street art can tell you a lot about a country's traditions and people.

Sugerencia: Варто уникати роз'єднаних фраз і запинок, узгоджувати іменники та артиклі ('views', 'the River'). Додавайте конкретні деталі коротко і зв'язно: назва річки, що вона робить, як краще спостерігати види. Також перевірте граматику при використанні напрямків (Left Bank, Right Bank) і говоріть не більше 3–4 речень.

Ejemplo: I prefer views in my own country because we have beautiful landscapes, mountains and rivers. For example, the Dnipro River in Kyiv divides the city into the Left and Right Banks, and traveling by metro from the Left Bank offers great panoramic views of the river and skyline.

× this summer I was in Andorra and I took pictures, umm, uh, from the mountain.

✓ This summer I was in Andorra and I took pictures from the mountain.

The original sentence includes filler words but the main issue is not past participle; however to follow the list, the sentence is corrected by removing unnecessary commas and fillers. Suggestion: keep verb tense simple 'was' and 'took' are correct; avoid extra commas and fillers for clarity.

× It was really high and fascinating view.

✓ It was really high and a fascinating view.

The sentence misses the article 'a' before 'fascinating view'. Also 'high' describes the mountain, while 'a fascinating view' needs an article. Use 'a' for singular countable nouns.

× I prefer the first one because the urban areas can take you to the culture to it talks about people and I think that you can look through it and know about this culture and country more.

✓ I prefer the former because urban areas can introduce you to the culture; they show how people live, and I think you can learn more about that country's culture.

The original uses unclear pronouns and awkward phrasing ('take you to the culture to it talks about people', 'look through it'). Replace 'the first one' with 'the former' or 'urban areas' for clarity, use 'introduce you to the culture' and 'they' to refer back to 'urban areas'. Use 'learn more about' instead of 'know about ... more'.

× I prefer view in my country 'cause we have beautiful landscapes and mountains and rivers.

✓ I prefer views in my country because we have beautiful landscapes, mountains, and rivers.

'View' should be plural 'views' when speaking generally. Use 'because' instead of informal ''cause'. Add commas in a list. 'In my country' is correct placement.

× For example, we have in Kiev River Dupre, which, uh, divides, uh, the city on Left Bank and right bank.

✓ For example, in Kyiv we have the Dnipro River, which divides the city into the Left Bank and the Right Bank.

Prepositions and word order were incorrect. Use 'in Kyiv' and the correct river name 'Dnipro' (commonly used English form). Use article 'the' with river name and with 'Left Bank'/'Right Bank'. Use 'divides the city into' rather than 'divides the city on'.

× So if you go from the Left Bank by metro, you can see the fascinating view.

✓ So if you go from the Left Bank by metro, you can see a fascinating view.

Add article 'a' before 'fascinating view'. The conditional structure 'if you go ... you can see' is correct. Use 'a fascinating view' to refer to one of many views.