Views— Part 1 Informe

Sugerencia: Be more concise and natural: start with a clear topic sentence, then give one or two specific supporting details using linking words. Avoid filler words like “umm” and incomplete phrases. Also correct minor grammar and finish sentences fully.

Ejemplo: Yes, I enjoy taking pictures of different views because I like to capture beautiful scenes and remember them later. For example, I often photograph beaches and sunsets, since the colors and reflections create memorable photos.

Sugerencia: Organize the answer with a clear comparison: give a topic sentence stating it depends, then use linking words (however, while, because) to contrast urban and rural advantages. Use plural/singular correctly and avoid vague phrases like “or something.”

Ejemplo: It depends on the situation. Urban areas are better for cultural activities, for example you can visit museums, concerts and theaters; however, rural areas are more peaceful and help me relax, so I prefer them for holidays.

Sugerencia: Clarify your reasoning and correct grammar. State your preference clearly, then explain the reason with logical, specific details and linking words. Avoid repetition and unclear phrases like “more possible, more impossible to she views.”

Ejemplo: I prefer views in other countries because I can see different landscapes and cultures. Also, travel abroad sometimes offers more opportunities to visit new places, whereas visiting some domestic sites is difficult for me due to visa issues or other travel restrictions.

× Yes, I like taking pictures of different views because when I see something beautiful, something stunning, I want to capture it and look back on it after.

✓ Yes, I like taking pictures of different views because when I see something beautiful or stunning, I want to capture it and look back on it later.

The original uses 'something beautiful, something stunning' which is redundant and awkward; replace with 'something beautiful or stunning' for correct coordination. Also 'after' is informal and unclear; use 'later' to indicate looking back in time. This corrects misuse of coordinating nouns and adverb choice and improves natural -ing phrase usage by keeping 'taking pictures' as a gerund phrase.

× Umm, especially when I see a beach or sea or sunsets. I wanna.

✓ Especially when I see a beach, the sea, or a sunset, I want to take a picture.

The original sentence fragments lack a clear main verb and use informal 'wanna.' Combine fragments into a single complete sentence with parallel nouns: 'a beach, the sea, or a sunset.' Use 'I want to take a picture' instead of 'I wanna' to be grammatically correct and explicit.

× It depends, in urban areas you can experience more thing, you can go a museum, you can go concerts, theaters or something.

✓ It depends. In urban areas you can experience more things: you can go to museums, concerts, theaters, or similar events.

'More thing' is uncountable/incorrect quantifier use; it should be 'more things.' Also articles and plural forms are needed: 'go to museums' not 'go a museum.' 'Or something' is vague; 'or similar events' is clearer. Punctuation split improves clarity.

× It depends, in urban areas you can experience more thing, you can go a museum, you can go concerts, theaters or something.

✓ It depends. In urban areas you can experience more things: you can go to museums, concerts, theaters, or similar events.

Missing preposition 'to' before 'museums' and inconsistent verb-object structure: 'go concerts' should be 'go to concerts.' Adding 'to' corrects the verb-preposition collocations.

× But in rural areas it helps you relax and I prefer rural areas with my people.

✓ But rural areas help me relax, and I prefer to visit rural areas with my family or friends.

'It helps you relax' shifts person awkwardly; keep speaker perspective with 'help me relax.' 'My people' is informal and unclear; specify 'my family or friends.' Pronoun agreement and clarity improved.

× Umm for relaxing but urban areas to live.

✓ I prefer rural areas for relaxing, but urban areas are better to live in.

Original is a fragment lacking verbs. Provide full clauses: 'I prefer rural areas for relaxing' and 'urban areas are better to live in.' This fixes sentence structure and comparison.

× I prefer views in other countries because seeing other countries more possible, more impossible to she views in my country because the visa process or the other processes.

✓ I prefer views in other countries because it is more possible to see them abroad than in my country because of the visa process and other procedures.

The original mixes incorrect comparative expressions ('more possible, more impossible') and an unclear pronoun 'she views.' Use impersonal 'it is more possible to see them abroad than in my country' and 'because of the visa process and other procedures.' This corrects tense/aspect by using present simple to state preference and general truth, fixes pronoun misuse, and clarifies cause with 'because of.'