Views— Part 1 Informe

Sugerencia: Shorten and organize your answer: start with a clear topic sentence, give one or two specific reasons with linking words, and avoid vague phrases and unnecessary capitalization. Use more natural collocations (e.g., "capture memories" or "take photos").

Ejemplo: Yes, I do. I often take photos whenever I travel or attend events like parties and weddings because photos help me capture memories. For example, at my sister’s wedding I took many pictures that help me remember the day and feel peaceful when I look back.

Sugerencia: Be concise and specific: state a clear preference or say you like both, then give one contrasting detail for each with linking words (e.g., "on the one hand... on the other hand..."). Avoid repetition and tense errors.

Ejemplo: I like both urban and rural views. On the one hand, I enjoy urban scenes because of the tall buildings and lively streets; on the other hand, I love rural landscapes for their calm fields and natural beauty, so I take photos in both settings.

Sugerencia: Give a direct answer then justify with a specific reason or example. Avoid redundant disclaimers and repetitive phrasing. Use linking words like "because" or "for example" and correct word order (e.g., "my own country").

Ejemplo: I prefer photographing views in my own country because I know the best spots and I feel a strong connection to those places. For example, there is a coastal town near my home with dramatic cliffs and sunsets that I always photograph when I visit.

× I like to take pictures of different views when I go somewhere and I visit at any party and any wedding, I will definitely take pictures because this creates a lot of good memories and all the things which we get a Peace of Mind after that.

✓ I like to take pictures of different views when I go somewhere, and if I visit a party or a wedding, I will definitely take pictures because they create many good memories and give us peace of mind afterward.

Pronoun and article misuse: 'this' is singular but refers to plural 'pictures', so use 'they'. 'any party and any wedding' is awkward; use 'a party or a wedding'. 'all the things which we get a Peace of Mind' is incorrect; use 'give us peace of mind afterward'. Also adjust articles and word order for natural English.

× Well, I prefer to take views of urban and rural areas both because both are very beautiful and fascinated when I went to rural areas in my past and when I went to urban areas in my past, I will definitely take all the pictures, which is looking beautiful at that time.

✓ Well, I prefer to take photos of both urban and rural areas because both are very beautiful and fascinating. When I went to rural or urban areas in the past, I definitely took all the pictures that looked beautiful at the time.

Mixed tense and adjective errors: 'fascinated' should be 'fascinating' to describe areas. Tenses were inconsistent: use past tense 'went' and 'took' for past events, not 'will definitely take'. 'which is looking beautiful' is incorrect; use 'that looked beautiful'. Also 'views' replaced with 'photos' for natural collocation.

× Well, first of all, in my view I like to prefer views of my own country and I didn't say that other countries didn't have any good view.

✓ Well, first of all, I prefer the views of my own country, but I am not saying that other countries do not have good views.

Pronoun and redundancy: 'in my view I like to prefer' is redundant; use 'I prefer'. Negative construction 'didn't say that other countries didn't have any good view' is awkward and double negative; use 'I am not saying that other countries do not have good views'. Also adjust article 'views' plural.

× But if I want to take pictures and if I want to take a good view, I like to prefer my country, own country because it is very beautiful and there are many places which we have to take views of.

✓ But if I want to take good pictures, I prefer my own country because it is very beautiful and there are many places worth photographing.

Wordiness and incorrect structure: 'I like to prefer' is redundant; use 'I prefer'. 'take a good view' is incorrect collocation; use 'take good pictures' or 'photograph good views'. 'my country, own country' is repetitive; use 'my own country'. 'places which we have to take views of' is awkward; use 'places worth photographing'.