Views— Part 1 Informe

Sugerencia: Reduce hesitation and repetition, and make the response more concise with a clear topic sentence and one or two specific supporting details. Use linking words to connect ideas and avoid filler words like “umm” and incomplete phrases.

Ejemplo: Yes — I enjoy photographing wide landscapes, such as meadows, open fields and mountain ranges. I find these scenes calming because their scale and natural colors create a peaceful mood, and they often capture interesting light and textures.

Sugerencia: Start with a direct topic sentence, remove filler and duplicate phrases, and give one specific reason or example to support your preference. Use a linking phrase to make the reason flow logically from the topic sentence.

Ejemplo: I prefer rural views because their open landscapes and natural features make me feel more connected to nature. For example, seeing rolling hills or a quiet river in a photo instantly relaxes me and reminds me of outdoor walks.

Sugerencia: Avoid negative or dismissive comments about your own country; be specific about what attracts you to other countries’ scenery. Replace fillers with clear comparative language and give one concrete example of a feature you admire.

Ejemplo: I prefer views from other countries like Greenland or Ireland because they feature dramatic coastlines and vast, untouched landscapes. For instance, Greenland’s ice formations and Ireland’s rugged cliffs offer dramatic contrasts and textures that I find especially striking compared with the tropical scenery back home.

× Yes I do, I prefer to take pictures of vast landscapes such as meadows, fields or umm, a group of mountains 'cause I feel like there is.

✓ Yes, I do. I prefer to take pictures of vast landscapes such as meadows, fields, or a group of mountains because they feel more relaxing and calming when you look at the picture.

The original sentence contains an incomplete clause 'I feel like there is' which lacks a verb and subject to complete the idea (sentence structure error but must be fixed using present participle reasoning). The corrected sentence replaces the unclear clause with 'they feel more relaxing and calming' to refer to 'landscapes' (plural) and uses the present simple 'feel' to describe a general state. Also added commas for clarity and replaced informal '’cause' with 'because'. Suggestion: ensure that clauses have a clear subject and verb and that plural nouns are matched with plural verbs and pronouns. Note: This correction addresses a present participle/verb form and sentence-completion issue to make the meaning grammatically complete.

× I prefer views in rural areas, especially UMM with a beautiful landscape of the environment because I feel like I feel connected to the world in some way just by looking at the pictures.

✓ I prefer views in rural areas, especially those with beautiful landscapes, because I feel connected to the world in some way just by looking at the pictures.

The original uses 'UMM' (filler) and the phrase 'a beautiful landscape of the environment' is awkward and uses a singular noun while referring to plural 'views'; pronoun and noun reference is unclear. The corrected sentence uses 'those' to correctly refer to 'rural areas' and changes to plural 'landscapes' to match. Also removed the duplicate 'I feel' and filler. Suggestion: use clear pronouns that match the noun they refer to and avoid redundant phrases; ensure singular/plural agreement between pronouns and nouns.

× I prefer views from other countries such as Greenland or Ireland because their nature is more abundant and it's, uh, amazing scenery.

✓ I prefer views from other countries such as Greenland or Ireland because their natural scenery is more abundant and amazing.

The original mixes 'their nature is more abundant' and 'it's amazing scenery' which mismatches pronouns and references. 'Nature' and 'scenery' should be combined into a single clear noun phrase. The corrected sentence uses 'their natural scenery' to combine meaning and removes the impersonal 'it' to maintain agreement. Suggestion: keep noun references consistent and avoid switching pronouns that confuse the subject.

× Umm, compared to my country, Thailand, umm, there's not much to be seen as such.

✓ Compared to my country, Thailand, there is not much to see.

The original 'there's not much to be seen' is wordy and the phrase 'as such' is unnecessary. 'There's' (there is) is acceptable but more natural to use 'there is not much to see' in this context. Also removed filler 'umm'. Suggestion: use concise constructions and the correct infinitive 'to see' after 'much' rather than passive 'to be seen' when describing availability of sights.