Views— Part 1 Informe

Sugerencia: Be clearer and more concise. Start with a direct topic sentence (Yes, I do), then give one or two specific reasons with linking words. Avoid filler words (umm) and repetition; use correct tense and simple grammar (e.g., "I used to" not "I only use").

Ejemplo: Yes, I do. I enjoy photographing different views because it helps me capture memories with my family. For example, I used to carry a small camera on trips so I could look back at the places we visited.

Sugerencia: Answer directly and organize your ideas. Begin with a clear stance (I prefer rural/urban or it depends) then explain why using specific details and linking words (however, on the other hand). Avoid contradictory or confused descriptions (rural areas usually have fewer buildings and people).

Ejemplo: I usually prefer rural views because I like natural landscapes and quiet scenery. However, I also photograph urban areas sometimes because the architecture and busy streets provide interesting subjects.

Sugerencia: Give a clear answer and support it with specific examples. Start with a topic sentence (I prefer views in my own country) then add two concrete details (beaches, mountains) and a brief reason. Remove hesitations and repetition.

Ejemplo: I prefer the views in my country, the Philippines, because we have diverse scenery such as beautiful beaches and high mountains. For example, I often photograph coastal sunsets and mountain trails when I travel around the islands.

× Yes, I like taking pictures with different views, umm especially so before I only use my camera, I to take a picture and so that I have installed install it in my memory along with my family and now yeah, I have.

✓ Yes, I like taking pictures of different views. Especially before, I only used my camera to take pictures so that I could store them in my memory with my family, and now I still do.

The original sentence misuses verb forms and structure. 'I to take a picture' is incorrect; use the infinitive 'to take pictures' or the past 'used my camera to take pictures.' 'Have installed install it in my memory' mixes present perfect and base form; 'store them in my memory' or 'could store them' is correct. Also split into clearer sentences. Suggestion: use correct verb forms (used, to take, store) and simple sentence structure. (grammar problem type ID:10)

× It depends sometimes when in my because since I have I really like views in rural area with different buildings, cars and a lot of people.

✓ It depends. Sometimes I prefer rural areas because I really like the views there, with different buildings, cars, and many people.

The sentence has tense and structure problems: 'since I have I really like' is ungrammatical. Use present simple for preferences ('I prefer', 'I like') and correct noun number 'rural areas' or 'the rural area' and use 'many people' for countable plural. Suggestion: separate ideas into sentences and use present simple for general preferences. (grammar problem type ID:5)

× But I also like having picture of urban area.

✓ But I also like having pictures of urban areas.

Article and count errors: 'having picture' should be plural 'having pictures' or 'a picture'. 'Urban area' should be plural 'urban areas' or use 'the urban area'. Suggestion: match singular/plural and include articles when needed. (grammar problem type ID:22)

× It depends I like the views in my country in the Philippines since in a in our in my country we have different beaches, umm mountains, different landscape that I can we can take a picture umm but and all.

✓ It depends. I like the views in my country, the Philippines, because we have many beaches, mountains, and different landscapes where we can take pictures.

The original is repetitive and ungrammatical: 'since in a in our in my country' repeats phrases; 'landscape' should be plural 'landscapes'; 'that I can we can take a picture' mixes pronouns and tense. Suggestion: remove repetition, use plural nouns for countable features, and use relative clauses correctly ('where we can take pictures'). (grammar problem type ID:26)