Views— Part 1 Informe

Sugerencia: Cümleniz karışık ve tekrarlamalar mevcut; daha kısa, doğrudan ve düzgün dilbilgisi kullanmalısınız. Konu cümlesiyle başlayın, ardından 1–2 kısa destekleyici cümle ekleyin. Bağlaçları (for example, such as, because) doğru ve yerinde kullanın. Ayrıca zaman uyumuna dikkat edin (I like / I liked). Örneğin; gereksiz tekrarları çıkarın ve ‘aesthetic videos’ yerine bağlama uygun kelime kullanın (e.g., landscapes, scenes).

Ejemplo: Yes, I enjoy taking photographs of different views. For example, I often capture mountain landscapes and river scenes because I like their colours and textures. I also try to compose shots that look aesthetically pleasing.

Sugerencia: Cevabınız çelişkili ve tekrarlar içeriyor; başlangıçta ‘urban areas’ dediğiniz halde örnekler kırsal öğeler (springs, mountains) gösteriyor. Net ve tutarlı olun: tercih nedeninizi açıkça belirtin ve örnekleri tercihinizle uyumlu seçin. Bir konu cümlesi kurun, sonra bir neden ve bir örnek verin. Dilbilgisi olarak ‘I take photos’ kullanılmalı.

Ejemplo: I prefer urban views because I enjoy the dynamic architecture and street scenes. For example, I like photographing historic buildings and busy markets that show the city's character.

Sugerencia: Cevabınızda ana fikir mevcut ama cümle yapısı ve zaman kullanımı hatalı. ‘Both’ dediğinizde nedenlerini kısa ve net verin. Seyahat ve keşif gibi sebepleri belirtirken düzgün bağlaçlarla bağlayın ve doğru fiil biçimi kullanın (I travel / I have travelled / I want to take photos). Ayrıca gereksiz tekrarları kaldırın.

Ejemplo: I enjoy photographing views both in my own country and abroad because travelling lets me discover new scenes and cultures. For instance, I take pictures of familiar landscapes at home and colourful street scenes when I visit other countries.

× Actually, I liked taking pictures of different different views, such as the beautiful landscape or beautiful the view or something that it is, for example, it can it may be mountains or springs and so and I like the aesthetic videos and I think I am very well.

✓ Actually, I like taking pictures of different views, such as beautiful landscapes or other scenes; for example, they may be mountains or springs. I also like aesthetic videos and I think I take good photos.

The student used past tense 'liked' inconsistently when talking about a habitual preference; present simple 'like' is correct. There are also redundancy and word order problems; repeated words and 'beautiful the view' are incorrect. 'It can it may be' is redundant; use 'they may be' to refer to 'views'. 'I think I am very well' is incorrect for ability; use 'I think I take good photos' or 'I am doing well' depending on meaning. Suggestions: use present simple for habits, avoid duplicate words, ensure pronoun agreement (use 'they' for plural 'views'), and use appropriate expressions to describe ability or quality of photos.

× For example I taking a photo of the different views, for example the springs or the mountains and that's why I like the I prefer the views in urban areas.

✓ For example, I take photos of different views, such as springs or mountains, and that's why I prefer views in urban areas.

The fragment 'I taking' is incorrect because after subject 'I' you must use the base verb 'take' for simple present, not the -ing form. Use present simple 'take' to express habitual actions. Also remove repeated 'for example' and extra 'the' before 'I prefer'. Suggestions: use 'I take' for regular activities, avoid repetition, and keep articles consistent.

× I prefer both of them because we traveled another country, other countries and discovered the new things and that's why I want to view in our country or I want to taking photo in other countries.

✓ I prefer both because we travel to other countries and discover new things, and that's why I want to take photos both in our country and in other countries.

The student mixed past tense 'traveled' with general preference; use present simple 'travel' for habitual or general statements. 'Travel to another country, other countries' is awkward; use 'travel to other countries'. 'I want to taking photo' is incorrect: after 'want to' use the base verb 'take', not the -ing form. Also 'view in our country' is incorrect usage; use 'take photos in our country' or 'see sights in our country'. Suggestions: keep tense consistent (present simple for general habits), use correct verb form after 'want to' (base form), and use clear collocations like 'travel to' and 'take photos'.