Views— Part 1 Informe

Sugerencia: Your answer is clear and relevant with a personal reason, but it contains hesitation and repetition (“I think... putting, I think”) and some informal fillers (“like”, “makes me like feel”). To improve, remove hesitations, reduce repetition, and use more precise vocabulary (e.g., “scenery” instead of “sceneries”, “relaxing” instead of “relieve myself”). Keep the response concise (max 3–4 sentences) and use one linking phrase to connect ideas.

Ejemplo: Yes, I love taking photos of different views. Collecting images of landscapes and cityscapes helps me relax, and I enjoy looking back through my albums. Moreover, photographing scenery encourages me to notice details I might otherwise miss.

Sugerencia: You answered directly and gave reasons, but there are grammar issues and short, fragmented sentences (“rapid paced” should be “rapid-paced” or “fast-paced”; tense inconsistency: “liked” → “have liked”). Combine ideas into smoother sentences and add one specific example to make the answer more vivid. Use a linking phrase when moving from general preference to reason.

Ejemplo: I prefer urban views because I’m a fast-paced person who enjoys the energy of city life. For example, I find the bustling streets and illuminated skyline inspiring, and I have admired city skylines since I was a child.

Sugerencia: The response conveys preference and feeling, but includes informal hedging (“It's kind of bad to say”), capitalization errors (“Night Lights”), grammar issues (subject–verb agreement: “lights... make me feel”), and filler words (“like”). Avoid unnecessary hedges, correct grammar, and give a clear specific detail or brief example of what you like about European views.

Ejemplo: I prefer views in other European countries because the historic architecture combined with modern skylines creates a magical atmosphere. For instance, the illuminated buildings and narrow streets in cities like Prague make me feel as if I’m in a dream.

× I think putting, I think collecting different pictures of different sceneries, landscapes, like scrolling them through my album makes me like feel better or it's a kind of way to relieve myself.

✓ I think collecting different pictures of various sceneries and landscapes, and scrolling through them in my album makes me feel better; it's a way to relieve stress.

The original contains awkward and incorrect use of gerunds and fillers ('putting', 'like feel'). Combine gerunds logically: 'collecting' and 'scrolling' function as noun-like activities. Remove redundant 'putting' and unnecessary 'like'. Use 'makes me feel better' (subject 'collecting...and scrolling' requires singular verb 'makes'). Replace 'relieve myself' with 'relieve stress' for natural English. Suggested improvement: simplify gerund phrases, avoid fillers like 'like', ensure verb agrees with compound gerund subject.

× I see myself as a rapid paced person.

✓ I see myself as a fast-paced person.

'Rapid paced' is incorrect collocation; the correct adjective is 'fast-paced'. This is a present-tense statement describing a general characteristic, so keep present tense. Improve vocabulary choice and hyphenate compound adjective before a noun. Suggested improvement: use common collocations ('fast-paced') and hyphenate compound adjectives.

× And the skyline.

✓ And the skyline is something I like a lot.

The fragment 'And the skyline.' lacks a verb and is incomplete. Transform into a full sentence with third-person singular verb 'is' to match subject 'the skyline'. Suggested improvement: avoid sentence fragments; include a verb to complete the thought.

× The city skyline is just, it's something I liked a lot since I was a child.

✓ The city skyline is just something I have liked a lot since I was a child.

The original mixes present tense ('is') with past simple 'liked' and 'since' which requires present perfect ('have liked') to indicate a state continuing to present. Use present perfect 'have liked' for actions/states from past until now. Suggested improvement: use present perfect with 'since' for ongoing states.

× I love the city skyline, the tall buildings and Night Lights just makes me like feel like I'm dreaming.

✓ I love the city skyline, the tall buildings, and the night lights; they just make me feel like I'm dreaming.

'Night Lights' should be lowercased as 'night lights' (not a proper noun). Subject 'the city skyline, the tall buildings, and the night lights' is plural, so verb must be 'make' not 'makes'. Remove filler 'like' before 'feel'. Replace 'just makes me like feel' with 'they just make me feel' and ensure pronoun 'they' refers back to plural subject. Suggested improvement: match plural subjects with plural verbs, avoid fillers, and use correct capitalization for common nouns.

× Do you prefer views in your own country or in other countries?

✓ Do you prefer views in your own country or in other countries?

No correction needed; preposition 'in' is acceptable for 'views in country'. Suggested improvement: none.