Views— Part 1 Informe

Sugerencia: Expand the answer with a clear topic sentence and one or two specific supporting details. Use a linking word if you add more information. Avoid single-word replies—give reasons or an example to sound natural and engaging.

Ejemplo: Yes, I do. I enjoy photographing different views because it helps me remember places and moods. For example, I often take pictures of sunsets by the river to capture the colors and calm atmosphere.

Sugerencia: Start with a clear topic sentence stating your preference, then give specific reasons and one short example. Improve grammar and word choice (e.g., 'rural' not 'rulers', 'tall buildings' not 'big buildings of our own places'). Keep it within 3–4 sentences and use linking words like 'because' or 'for example'.

Ejemplo: I prefer urban views because tall buildings and city skylines look impressive, especially at night. For example, when I visit a high viewpoint, the lights and geometry of the streets make for dramatic photos.

Sugerencia: Give a concise topic sentence and follow with two specific supporting details or an example. Remove fillers like 'umm' and avoid repeating words (e.g., 'really, really'). Use linking words such as 'because' and 'for example' to connect ideas and be more precise about locations or experiences.

Ejemplo: I prefer views in my own country because it has a wide variety of landscapes. For example, I enjoy photographing the mountain ranges in the north and the clear lakes in the valleys, which offer different moods and colors throughout the year.

× I prefer the views and scenarios in urban places more than I do in the rulers one because the building, the big buildings of our own places, it's just amazing to look at.

✓ I prefer the views and scenes in urban places more than I do in rural ones because the buildings in our city are just amazing to look at.

Incorrect preposition/word choice: 'rulers one' is incorrect and should be 'rural ones'; 'scenarios' is an odd word choice here, 'scenes' or 'views' is better. Also 'the building, the big buildings of our own places' is awkward; use 'the buildings in our city'. Suggestion: use correct word forms and simple prepositions; replace 'in the rulers one' with 'in rural ones' and 'scenarios' with 'scenes'.

× They're really breathtaking.

✓ They are really breathtaking.

The original uses the contraction 'They're' which is acceptable conversationally, but in writing clarity: 'They are' matches plural subject 'buildings/scenes'. Ensure verb 'are' agrees with plural subject. Suggestion: keep 'They are' for clarity; if keeping contraction, ensure context supports it.

× And if you're on a building high.

✓ And if you're on a tall building.

Awkward word order: 'a building high' is ungrammatical in English. Adjectives should precede nouns: 'a tall building'. Suggestion: use adjective before noun or use a relative clause: 'if you're on a building that is high'.

× I'd say that I prefer the scenarios in my own country, as my country is really, really beautiful on its own.

✓ I'd say that I prefer the scenes in my own country, because my country is truly beautiful on its own.

'Scenarios' is an odd collocation here; 'scenes' or 'views' is more natural. 'As' is acceptable but 'because' is clearer for causal connection. 'really, really' is repetitive; use 'truly' for more natural speech. Suggestion: choose natural collocations and avoid unnecessary repetition.

× It has umm, different mountains and rivers and breathtaking lakes and valleys, which is just so beautiful to capture.

✓ It has various mountains and rivers and breathtaking lakes and valleys, which are just so beautiful to capture.

Number agreement and pronoun reference: 'which is' refers back to plural list 'mountains and rivers and lakes and valleys' and should be 'which are'. Also 'different' is vague; 'various' is better. Suggestion: make relative pronoun agree with plural antecedent and use more precise adjectives.