Views— Part 1 Informe

Sugerencia: Cải thiện ngữ pháp cơ bản, phát triển câu chủ đề rõ ràng và thêm chi tiết cụ thể có liên kết logic. Tránh tiếng ồ/ừ lặp lại và cấu trúc không hoàn chỉnh. Nên dùng 2–3 câu: nêu lý do chính, một hoặc hai chi tiết minh họa, và kết luận ngắn gọn.

Ejemplo: Yes, I enjoy taking pictures of different views because they capture the beauty of a place. For example, I often photograph sunsets and city skylines to remember the colours and atmosphere. These photos help me share my experiences with friends.

Sugerencia: Trả lời trực tiếp, dùng câu chủ đề rõ ràng và cung cấp lí do cụ thể với liên từ để mạch lạc. Hạn chế lỗi từ vựng và cấu trúc như 'St.' hay 'detention'. Nên nói 2–3 câu: lựa chọn của bạn và lí do kèm ví dụ.

Ejemplo: I prefer views in urban areas because I enjoy the energy and architecture of cities. For instance, famous landmarks and busy streets make interesting photos with varied subjects. Also, city lights at night create dramatic pictures.

Sugerencia: Trả lời rõ ràng (không chỉ 'yes'), sửa ngữ pháp (số ít/ số nhiều, giới từ), và mô tả chi tiết cụ thể về địa điểm hoặc cảnh vật. Dùng liên từ để liên kết ý và cung cấp ví dụ minh họa. Giữ 2–3 câu ngắn gọn.

Ejemplo: I prefer views in my own country because Vietnam has many beautiful landscapes and diverse scenery. For example, I enjoy photographing mountain ranges and coastal areas that show local colours and culture. These scenes remind me of home and are meaningful to capture.

× Yes, because take picture of different view to, uh, the have a picture. It's beautiful and uh, many wonder inner destruction in a have a picture lie lie more and a.

✓ Yes, because I like to take pictures of different views. They are beautiful, and having a photograph helps me remember the scenery.

The original sentence has multiple sentence structure and subject-verb issues (fragmented clauses, missing subjects and verbs, and unclear phrases). You must supply subjects (I/they), correct verb forms (like to take, help), and separate ideas into clear sentences. Suggestion: form complete sentences, use plural forms for countable nouns (pictures, views), and state one idea per clause. Grammar problem type ID:26

× I like the view in urban area because have many city and St. in many detention I and location famous and uh the picture in a urban area have uh me uh, likely.

✓ I like views in urban areas because there are many cities and famous locations; urban areas often make interesting pictures.

Errors include missing determiners and prepositions, omitted verbs, and incorrect noun forms. Use plural forms for general statements (views, urban areas), include 'there are' for existence, and use correct prepositions and articles ('in urban areas', 'famous locations'). Also avoid fragments; combine clauses with conjunctions or punctuation. Grammar problem type ID:11

× Yes, I very prefer the on country because country have many view beautiful and uh sky.

✓ Yes, I strongly prefer my own country because it has many beautiful views and skies.

Problems: incorrect adverb placement and choice (very prefer -> strongly prefer), missing possessive or demonstrative (own country), subject-verb agreement (country have -> it has), and adjective order (beautiful views). Fix by using appropriate adverb, correct verb agreement, and natural word order. Grammar problem type ID:26

× I like to picture a wonder in a many location in Vietnam in a wood.

✓ I like to take pictures of wonderful places in many locations in Vietnam, such as in the countryside.

Original uses incorrect singular/plural forms and awkward nouns ('a wonder', 'a many location', 'in a wood'). Use plural count nouns (places, locations), correct verb phrase (take pictures of), and natural collocations (in the countryside). Also clarify meaning by replacing vague words with specific ones. Grammar problem type ID:1