Views— Part 1 Informe

Sugerencia: Be concise, correct grammar and use natural phrasing. Start with a clear topic sentence, then give one or two specific supporting details using linking words. Avoid repetitions and wrong words (e.g., 'truffle').

Ejemplo: Yes, I enjoy taking photos of different views. For example, when I explore new places like parks or villages, I often photograph landscapes and local architecture because they capture the character of the area.

Sugerencia: Give a clear position and specific reasons. Use linking words (however, because) and avoid filler words. Correct unclear phrases ('history plays', 'real aerial areas') and provide one or two concrete examples.

Ejemplo: It depends, but I usually prefer urban areas because cities like London offer diverse architecture and historical landmarks. For instance, I enjoy photographing ornate facades and busy streets because they show both history and modern life.

Sugerencia: State your preference clearly and explain why with specific details. Use correct tense and vocabulary (e.g., 'I prefer', 'my country', 'abroad'). Mention concrete contrasts and examples to support your opinion.

Ejemplo: I prefer views in my own country because many cities mix historical and modern buildings. For example, in my city you can see centuries-old churches next to contemporary glass towers, which makes the scenery very interesting for photography.

× Yes I'm really into take pictures of different views especially when you are truffle and explore and explore in new place such as parks or uh, especially new village.

✓ Yes, I'm really into taking pictures of different views, especially when I travel and explore new places such as parks or new villages.

Use of 'into' requires verb in -ing form (gerund). 'take' should be 'taking'. Also corrected pronoun and verbs: 'you are truffle' is likely 'I travel'; 'explore and explore' redundant; 'new place' should be plural 'new places'. Suggestions: use gerund after 'into', use first person consistently, avoid repetition, and match plurality.

× Honestly, it depends. Sometimes I prefer urban areas, especially like London, I take, I can't take pictures, umm, uh, like history plays. So uh, umm, real aerial areas, uh, I kind of enjoy when you, when you, when I walk around so.

✓ Honestly, it depends. Sometimes I prefer urban areas, especially cities like London; I like to take pictures of historical places. I also enjoy rural areas when I walk around.

Fixed awkward verb forms and unclear phrases. Replaced 'I take, I can't take pictures' with 'I like to take pictures' (use infinitive after 'like'). 'history plays' likely 'historical places'. 'real aerial areas' corrected to 'rural areas'. Removed repeated fragments. Suggestion: use clear infinitive ('to take') after 'like', choose correct nouns ('places' not 'plays'), and avoid repetition.

× I preferred a few years in my car and on country because it's mixed between historical building and modern building, especially real real. It is a considered urban area and many visitor visit.

✓ A few years ago I preferred travelling in my car around the countryside because it is a mix of historical and modern buildings. Some areas are considered urban and many visitors come.

'I preferred a few years' is incorrect; use 'A few years ago I preferred' to indicate past time. 'on country' should be 'around the countryside' or 'in the countryside'. 'it's mixed between' -> 'it is a mix of'; noun plurals: 'building' -> 'buildings'; 'real real' unclear, removed; 'It is a considered urban area' -> 'Some areas are considered urban'; 'many visitor visit' -> 'many visitors come' (plural noun and correct verb). Suggestions: use time expressions 'a few years ago', ensure plural forms for countable nouns, and match subject-verb agreement.