Views— Part 1 Informe

Sugerencia: Cải thiện: hãy trả lời trực tiếp, tránh từ lấp đầy (uh, just) và lỗi ngữ pháp. Dùng câu chủ đề ngắn gọn, sau đó cung cấp 1–2 chi tiết cụ thể (ví dụ: địa điểm, cảm xúc khi chụp). Chú ý danh từ số nhiều/ít và trật tự tính từ (ví dụ: "very big mountains", "a very blue sky"). Sử dụng liên từ đơn giản để nối ý (e.g., "because", "and").

Ejemplo: Yes, I enjoy taking pictures of different views, especially natural landscapes. For example, I like photographing huge mountain ranges and the deep blue sky because they look dramatic in photos. I also try to capture long rivers at sunrise since the light makes the scene more peaceful.

Sugerencia: Cải thiện: tránh lặp từ và sửa cấu trúc ngữ pháp (ví dụ: "in rural areas"). Trả lời ngắn gọn rồi giải thích với 1–2 lý do rõ ràng, dùng liên từ để mạch lạc (ví dụ: "because", "so"). Thêm ví dụ cụ thể hoặc cảm giác cá nhân để cụ thể hóa nội dung (ví dụ: "I enjoy the quiet mornings and green fields").

Ejemplo: I prefer views in rural areas because they feel more connected to nature and are usually quieter. For example, I enjoy photographing green fields and quiet country roads at sunrise because the light and silence create a peaceful atmosphere.

Sugerencia: Cải thiện: sử dụng cấu trúc mạch lạc hơn và sửa lỗi số nhiều ("other countries"). Bắt đầu bằng câu chủ đề, rồi nêu 1 lý do cho từng lựa chọn ngắn gọn. Có thể đưa ví dụ so sánh để phong phú nội dung.

Ejemplo: I prefer both, because each country offers different kinds of beauty. For instance, my country has familiar landscapes and local traditions that I appreciate, while other countries offer new scenery and cultural experiences that inspire my photography.

× Just I like taking pictures of different views, especially length, uh, nature views like an A very big, enormous, uh, mountains or a very blue and a vast sky or a very long rivers.

✓ I just like taking pictures of different views, especially natural ones, such as very big, enormous mountains, a very blue and vast sky, or very long rivers.

The original sentence has incorrect word order and redundant articles; 'Just I' should be 'I just'. 'length' is wrong word choice for 'natural' or 'landscape'. 'nature views' is nonstandard; use 'natural views' or 'natural scenes'. Articles are incorrect: 'an A very big' is wrong and 'mountains' should not have 'a'. Make the list parallel: use plural or singular consistently and remove extra fillers ('uh'). Keep adjectives in correct order and remove unnecessary determiners. Suggestion: practice forming subject + adverb + verb (I just like...), choose correct nouns (natural views), and keep items in a parallel list (very big mountains, a very blue sky, very long rivers).

× I prefer views in rural area because in rural area you could feel that the that area, it is very connected with the nature.

✓ I prefer views in rural areas because in rural areas you can feel that the area is very connected with nature.

Use plural 'rural areas' (or 'the rural area') for general statements; this is a preposition/article issue. 'In rural area' is incorrect—use 'in rural areas' or 'in the countryside'. 'Could' is okay but 'can' is more natural for general ability. 'Connected with the nature' should be 'connected with nature' (no article). Also remove repeated words 'the that'. Suggestion: use correct prepositions and articles: 'in rural areas' or 'in the countryside', and omit 'the' before uncountable nouns like 'nature'.

× So when you take views in there, you could feel like you are talking to the nature, you are connected to the nature.

✓ So when you take pictures there, you can feel like you are talking to nature; you feel connected to it.

'Take views in there' is unnatural—use 'take pictures there'. 'The nature' is incorrect; 'nature' is uncountable and needs no article. 'You are connected to the nature' becomes 'connected to it' to avoid repetition. Also 'could'→'can' is more natural for general truths. Suggest practicing correct pronoun reference ('it' for 'nature') and avoiding unnecessary articles with uncountable nouns.

× And also I prefer you there because it is like very beautiful, very green.

✓ Also, I prefer being there because it is very beautiful and very green.

'I prefer you there' is incorrect pronoun use; it should be 'I prefer being there' or 'I prefer it there'. The sentence 'it is like very beautiful' is informal; remove 'like'. Use 'and' instead of comma to link adjectives. Suggestion: use correct verb forms after 'prefer' (prefer + noun/gerund) and avoid 'like' as filler.

× To me, every country has views that are very beautiful in their own ways. So I prefer both views in my own country and views in other country.

✓ To me, every country has views that are very beautiful in their own way. So I prefer both views in my own country and views in other countries.

'In their own ways' should be 'in their own way' because 'every country' is singular and requires singular reference. 'Views in other country' needs plural 'other countries' or 'another country' and appropriate article. Maintain number agreement between subject and pronoun. Suggestion: ensure pronouns and verbs agree with singular subjects ('every country... its/its own way') and use plural for general statements ('other countries').