Views— Part 1 Informe

Sugerencia: Cải thiện ngữ pháp cơ bản và cấu trúc câu: sửa lỗi về thì, chia động từ và mạo từ (ví dụ: “I'd like taking” nên là “I like taking” hoặc “I'd like to take”). Tránh lặp từ không cần thiết và làm câu rõ ràng hơn bằng cách mở đầu bằng câu chủ đề, sau đó dùng liên từ để thêm thông tin. Thêm chi tiết cụ thể (ví dụ: loại cảnh bạn thích, lý do cụ thể) và giới hạn độ dài câu không quá 4-5 câu.

Ejemplo: Yes, I enjoy taking photographs of different views. I especially like landscapes at sunset because the warm light creates dramatic colors and long shadows. For example, I often shoot beaches or city skylines during golden hour to capture vibrant skies. I then share my best shots on social media so friends can see them.

Sugerencia: Cải thiện phát âm/điền từ và trật tự từ: loại bỏ lặp từ, sửa các cụm miêu tả để chính xác hơn (ví dụ “crowded, bustling and dusty” là tốt nhưng cần nối hợp lý). Bổ sung câu chủ đề rõ ràng, rồi giải thích vì sao bạn thích thành phố với ví dụ cụ thể (ví dụ hoạt động, địa điểm). Tránh câu thiếu chủ ngữ hoặc từ không rõ “rural E peace”.

Ejemplo: I prefer urban views because I enjoy the busy atmosphere. The crowded streets, tall buildings and lively cafes give me interesting subjects to photograph. For instance, I like capturing street performers and neon signs at night because they show the city's character. In contrast, rural scenes feel quieter and less exciting to me.

Sugerencia: Cải thiện độ rõ ràng và chính xác của thông tin: tránh tiếng lắp (uh, um) trong câu trả lời và dùng tên địa điểm chính xác (ví dụ 'Ha Long Bay'). Mở đầu bằng câu chủ đề ngắn gọn, sau đó nêu lý do cụ thể và một ví dụ về nơi bạn chụp ảnh. Nên thêm liên từ để câu mạch lạc và không quá nhiều câu phụ.

Ejemplo: I prefer views in my own country because I live near Ha Long Bay, which has stunning limestone karsts and seascapes. I often take boat trips there to photograph the islands at sunrise. These local scenes are convenient to visit and always popular when I post them on social media.

× Yes, absolutely. I'd like taking pictures of different views because is very beautiful or is various.

✓ Yes, absolutely. I'd like taking pictures of different views because they are very beautiful and varied.

The verb phrase 'I'd like' should be followed by the infinitive (to take) or a gerund when expressing preference but not 'I'd like taking' in this context; better: 'I like taking' or 'I'd like to take'. Also 'is' is singular but the subject is 'views' (plural), so use 'they are'. 'Various' modifies 'views' so use 'varied' or 'various' with a noun. Suggestion: say 'I like taking pictures of different views because they are very beautiful and varied.'

× I think when we taking photos in the sunset is very good idea to to my my side to everyone sees my pictures.

✓ I think taking photos at sunset is a very good idea because everyone can see my pictures.

Use the gerund 'taking' correctly without 'we' in this clause: 'when we taking' is incorrect; use 'taking photos at sunset' or 'when we take photos at sunset'. 'In the sunset' should be 'at sunset'. 'Is very good idea' needs an article: 'is a very good idea'. 'to my my side to everyone sees my pictures' is unclear; intended meaning likely 'so everyone can see my pictures'. Suggestion: 'I think taking photos at sunset is a very good idea because everyone can see my pictures.'

× I prefer views in urban areas, although is the crowded, bustling and and dusty, but I like it.

✓ I prefer views in urban areas, although it is crowded, bustling and dusty, but I like it.

The phrase lacks a subject before 'is': use 'it is' to refer to urban areas in general. Avoid doubling 'and and'. 'The crowded' is incorrect here; use 'crowded' without 'the'. Suggestion: 'although it is crowded, bustling and dusty, I still like it.'

× I like the the the noise and the the atmosphere in the urban areas.

✓ I like the noise and the atmosphere in urban areas.

There are repeated words ('the the the' and 'the the') which are redundant and ungrammatical. Also 'in the urban areas' can be 'in urban areas' for general reference. Remove duplicates and keep one definite article if needed. Suggestion: 'I like the noise and atmosphere in urban areas.'

× By contrast, the rural E peace.

✓ By contrast, the countryside is peaceful.

Original fragment lacks a verb and has unclear words ('E peace'). Need a complete clause: subject and verb. 'Rural' as an adjective needs a noun like 'rural areas' or 'countryside'. Use adjective 'peaceful' to describe it. Suggestion: 'By contrast, the countryside is peaceful.'

× So I think the urban area more.

✓ So I prefer urban areas more.

Sentence is missing a verb. Use 'prefer' to express preference: 'I think the urban area more' is ungrammatical. Also use plural 'urban areas' for generalization. Suggestion: 'So I prefer urban areas more.'

× Yes, I prefer views in my country because I live in the beautiful city, uh, is has the hat, long Bay and many, many, uh, beautiful scenery.

✓ Yes, I prefer views in my country because I live in a beautiful city; it has Ha Long Bay and many beautiful sceneries.

Use article 'a' before 'beautiful city'. The clause 'is has the hat, long Bay' mixes words and lacks proper nouns capitalization and spacing; likely meant 'it has Ha Long Bay'. Use 'it' as the pronoun for the city. 'Scenery' is an uncountable noun; 'many beautiful sceneries' is possible but better 'many beautiful views' or 'many beautiful scenic spots'. Suggestion: 'I live in a beautiful city; it has Ha Long Bay and many beautiful views.'

× Uh, when I live there, I can take many photos to post in the Facebook or many social networks.

✓ When I live there, I can take many photos to post on Facebook and other social networks.

Preposition use: 'post in the Facebook' should be 'post on Facebook'. Also 'many social networks' can be 'other social networks'. Tense 'when I live there' is acceptable if speaking hypothetically about living there; if referring to current residence use 'where I live'. Suggestion: 'Where I live, I can take many photos to post on Facebook and other social networks.'