Views— Part 1 Informe

Sugerencia: Be concise and correct grammar. Start with a clear topic sentence, then give one or two specific supporting details using linking words. Correct verb forms and avoid repetition. For example, say you like photographing landscapes, mention a specific subject (e.g. caves or parks), and explain why briefly (e.g. colors, atmosphere).

Ejemplo: Yes, I enjoy taking pictures of different views. For example, I often photograph caves and park landscapes because their textures and lighting create dramatic photos, so I try to capture them during golden hour.

Sugerencia: Give a direct answer first, use correct vocabulary (urban/rural) and provide one clear reason with a specific example. Use linking words like 'because' or 'so' to connect ideas and avoid vague phrases. Fix common errors (e.g. 'liberal area' -> 'rural areas').

Ejemplo: I prefer rural areas because I enjoy natural scenery and quiet surroundings; for instance, I like walking along country paths where I can photograph fields and small streams.

Sugerencia: Answer directly and give a concise reason with a specific example. Avoid repetition and correct grammar (e.g. 'prefer to go to' → 'prefer visiting', 'metro park' may be unclear — say 'national parks' or 'city parks'). Use linking words like 'because' and one supporting detail about what you like (scenery, atmosphere).

Ejemplo: I prefer views in my own country because I find familiar parks and national reserves more relaxing; for example, I often visit the large city park near my home to enjoy its ponds and tree-lined paths.

× Of course, I really prefer to taking a picture of the main cave, especially I I love to love to go to the park.

✓ Of course, I really prefer taking a picture of the main cave, especially because I love to go to the park.

The verb 'prefer' should be followed by the gerund form without 'to' (prefer doing). The original had 'prefer to taking' which mixes infinitive marker and gerund. Also there was a duplicated phrase 'I I love to love to'; I removed the duplication and made 'especially because I love to go to the park' to clarify meaning. Suggestion: use 'prefer + -ing' (prefer doing something) or 'prefer to + base verb' but not both together.

× When I go to the park, I usually take a picture.

✓ When I go to the park, I usually take pictures.

The original 'take a picture' is grammatically possible but sounds odd with 'usually' as a habitual action; the plural 'pictures' fits habitual or repeated actions. Suggestion: use plural for repeated actions or keep singular if referring to a single, specific photo.

× There are many beautiful scenery to take a picture.

✓ There is much beautiful scenery to photograph.

'Scenery' is an uncountable noun and requires singular verb 'is' and not 'are'. Also 'many' pairs with countable nouns; use 'much' with uncountable nouns. Finally 'to take a picture' is awkward here; use the verb 'to photograph' or 'to take pictures'. Suggestion: use 'there is much scenery' or 'there are many beautiful scenes' depending on countability.

× I prefer you in liberal area because I like the beautiful natural scenery so I can more.

✓ I prefer rural areas because I like the beautiful natural scenery and I can see more of it.

The original uses incorrect pronoun 'you' and incorrect word 'liberal' instead of 'rural'. 'I can more' is incomplete; you need a verb and object, e.g., 'I can see more of it.' Suggestion: choose correct vocabulary ('rural') and complete clauses with a verb and object.

× I can see more beautiful little area so I'd like to.

✓ I can see more beautiful little areas, so I'd like to.

Mixing singular 'area' with 'more' (which implies plural) is incorrect; use plural 'areas'. Also the clause ends abruptly; I retained 'so I'd like to' but it is vague—better to complete the thought: 'so I'd like to visit them.' Suggestion: match number between quantifier 'more' and noun.

× I'd like to experience many rural schools.

✓ I'd like to experience many rural scenes/places.

The word 'schools' is likely incorrect in context; 'rural schools' doesn't match 'views'. Use a noun that fits 'views', such as 'scenes' or 'places'. Suggestion: choose vocabulary aligned with topic (views/scenery).

× I believe that there are many beautiful beautiful views in my country, so I prefer to go to a beautiful metro park in my country.

✓ I believe there are many beautiful views in my country, so I prefer to go to a local metro park.

The repetition 'beautiful beautiful' is redundant; remove the duplicate. 'Prefer to go to a beautiful metro park in my country' is wordy and repetitive; 'local metro park' is more natural. Suggestion: avoid repeated adjectives and redundant phrases.

× It makes me relax and calm.

✓ It makes me feel relaxed and calm.

Use the adjective 'relaxed' after 'feel' to describe a state. 'Makes me relax' is possible but unnatural here; 'makes me feel relaxed' is idiomatic. Suggestion: use 'feel + adjective' to describe emotional/physical states.

× I really prefer go to my park.

✓ I really prefer going to my park.

After 'prefer' use the gerund form ('going') or the infinitive without mixing forms. The original omitted the gerund marker and so is ungrammatical. Suggestion: use 'prefer going' for general preference or 'prefer to go' for specific situations.