Views— Part 1 Informe

Sugerencia: Be more concise and clear: start with a direct topic sentence, then give one or two specific supporting details using linking words. Avoid vague phrases like “more profound like it.” Focus on precise vocabulary (e.g., angles, perspectives, expressions).

Ejemplo: Yes, I enjoy taking photos of different views. For example, shooting the same building from various angles often reveals new lines and shadows, and photographing people from different perspectives can capture varied expressions and moods.

Sugerencia: Answer directly then give specific, coherent reasons with correct vocabulary and linking words. Replace unclear or awkward phrases (e.g., “the green feels how animals graze”) with clear descriptions and avoid unnecessary repetition. Limit to two supporting details.

Ejemplo: I prefer rural views because they offer peaceful natural scenery and scenes of daily life. For instance, I like watching farmers working in the fields and animals grazing on the grass, which makes the landscape feel authentic and calming.

Sugerencia: Give a direct answer, then support it with two specific reasons and avoid hesitation. Use clear linking words like “because” and “for example,” and provide a brief explanation of why a place was memorable.

Ejemplo: I prefer views in my own country because it has a rich variety of landscapes and cultural sites. For example, I enjoy visiting hill stations for their cool climate and the Ram temple in Uttar Pradesh impressed me because of its architecture and the peaceful atmosphere.

× Yes, I like taking pictures from my perspective because if an object is seen at different views or from different angles, I think it is more profound like it.

✓ Yes, I like taking pictures from my perspective because if an object is seen from different views or from different angles, I think it seems more profound.

The original uses 'at different views' and 'more profound like it' which are ungrammatical. 'Seen from different views' is the correct prepositional phrase and 'seems more profound' correctly uses a linking verb with the adjective. Suggestion: use 'seen from' for viewpoints and 'seems' to link subject and adjective.

× It doesn't need to be only an object, I think it applies for people also.

✓ It doesn't need to be only an object; I think it applies to people as well.

The original uses 'applies for people also' which is incorrect; the correct collocation is 'applies to people' and 'as well' is a more natural adverbial. Also two independent clauses should be separated by a semicolon or full stop. Suggestion: use 'applies to' and 'as well' or 'also'.

× I prefer you views from rural areas because the green feels how animals graze and how the farmers work.

✓ I prefer views from rural areas because you can see how animals graze and how the farmers work.

The phrase 'I prefer you views' is ungrammatical; likely intended 'I prefer views' or 'I prefer rural views'. 'The green feels how animals graze' is incorrect; use 'you can see how' to describe observable actions. Suggestion: remove extraneous pronoun 'you' and use 'you can see' to describe visuals.

× I think it's just the best thing we can see because the sweat, the soil, the animals moaning or or happily.

✓ I think it's simply the best thing to see because of the sweat, the soil, and the animals, whether they are moaning or behaving happily.

Original has 'just the best thing we can see' (awkward) and 'the animals moaning or or happily' (missing verb for 'happily' and repetition 'or or'). Use 'simply' and 'because of' to explain reasons; include verbs or participial phrases to describe animals' states. Suggestion: use parallel structure and include verbs or participles for clarity.

× I prefer views in my country because it has so many places such as temples and uh, beautiful hill stations.

✓ I prefer views in my country because it has many places such as temples and beautiful hill stations.

The sentence is mostly correct but 'so many' is informal; removing 'so' improves formality and the filler 'uh' should be omitted. No prepositional error here except clarity: 'views in my country' is acceptable. Suggestion: remove fillers and unnecessary intensifiers for clarity.

× The most uh, sightseeing experience for me was the Ram temple in Uttar Pradesh.

✓ My most memorable sightseeing experience was visiting the Ram temple in Uttar Pradesh.

Original 'The most sightseeing experience for me' is ungrammatical. Use 'my most memorable sightseeing experience' and include 'visiting' to indicate the action. Remove filler 'uh'. Suggestion: use possessive 'my' and an adjective like 'memorable' and include a gerund to show the activity.