Views— Part 1 Informe

Sugerencia: 답변은 직답으로 시작했지만 문법적 오류와 반복이 있어 자연스럽지 못합니다. 문장을 간결하게 정리하고, 중복된 표현을 제거하세요. 또한 이유를 더 구체적으로 제시하고 접속사로 문장 흐름을 개선하세요. 예: ‘I like taking pictures because…’로 시작해 구체적 사례(특정 장면, 감정 변화)를 하나 추가하세요.

Ejemplo: Yes, I enjoy taking photos of different views because it helps me notice details I might otherwise miss. For example, when I photograph a city skyline at sunset, I focus on the changing colors and how light reflects off buildings, which makes me appreciate the scene more.

Sugerencia: 답변이 선호를 분명히 했지만 문법 오류(중복 'I', 어색한 어순)와 미완성 문장이 있습니다. 이유를 더 구체적으로 설명하고 연결어를 사용해 문장을 완성하세요. 감정 묘사와 구체적 요소(소리, 색깔, 구성)를 추가하면 더 설득력 있습니다.

Ejemplo: I prefer rural views, such as mountains and national parks, because the abundant trees and wildflowers create a peaceful atmosphere. For instance, the fresh air, bird songs and wide-open spaces help me relax and take more thoughtful photographs.

Sugerencia: 의도를 잘 전달하려 했지만 문법 오류와 반복이 심합니다('views' 과다사용, 시제·수 일치 오류). 간단한 주제문 후 구체적 이유와 예를 들며 구조화하세요. 예: ‘I prefer views abroad because… For example…’ 형식으로.

Ejemplo: I prefer views in other countries because they often offer landscapes and cultural scenes that are unfamiliar to me. For example, I once visited a coastal village abroad where the architecture and local markets provided unique photo opportunities I couldn't find at home.

× By taking pictures of different views I can see more widely and I can see what I didn't see in my site, so I like it.

✓ By taking pictures of different views, I can see more broadly and notice things I did not see at the site, so I like it.

'see more widely' is unnatural; use 'see more broadly' or 'see more' to describe expanding perspective. 'what I didn't see in my site' mixes past contraction and noun choice: 'didn't' is acceptable but contract avoided in formal speech; 'site' is incorrect for 'place' or 'on the site' so use 'at the site' or 'in that place'. Use 'notice things I did not see' for clarity. Also add comma after introductory clause.

× I prefer views in rural areas, for example, I love taking pictures in mountains or national parks because they have many trees, plants, flowers.

✓ I prefer views in rural areas; for example, I love taking pictures in the mountains or in national parks because there are many trees, plants, and flowers.

Use articles 'the mountains' when speaking generally about mountain areas. 'in mountains' is incorrect; use 'in the mountains'. Also list items need commas and a coordinating conjunction before the last item. Use 'there are' to introduce plural existence rather than 'they have' which is acceptable but less natural here; this touches on 'There be issue' but primary error is quantifier/article usage.

× I I think those greens I feel very calm and.

✓ I think those greens make me feel very calm.

Sentence has repetition 'I I' and incomplete structure 'those greens I feel very calm and.' It needs a verb linking cause and effect: 'make me feel'. Remove trailing 'and'. 'Greens' as a noun is informal; 'greenery' or 'green spaces' is better, but 'those greens' is acceptable colloquially.

× I prefer views in other countries because in the views in other country gives me a whole new different views because they had very different sceneries landscape.

✓ I prefer views in other countries because the views there give me a completely different perspective, as they have very different landscapes.

Original has multiple preposition errors: 'in the views in other country' is redundant and 'other country' needs plural or article. Use 'the views there' to refer back to 'other countries'. 'gives me a whole new different views' mixes singular/plural and unnecessary words; 'give me a completely different perspective' is clearer. 'they had' mixes past tense; use present 'they have'. 'sceneries landscape' is incorrect collocation; use 'landscapes' or 'scenery'.