Views— Part 1 Informe

Sugerencia: Reduce repetition, give a clear topic sentence, and add one specific example or reason using a linking word. Aim for 2–3 sentences, correct grammar (e.g., remove duplicate words, use possessive forms), and more natural phrasing.

Ejemplo: Yes, I enjoy photographing different views because it helps me express my emotions and relax. For example, when I photograph a sunset at the beach, I focus on the warm colors and the calm waves, which always makes me feel peaceful.

Sugerencia: Avoid stuttering and word repetition. Start with a clear topic sentence stating your preference, then briefly explain why using a linking word and a specific detail to support your choice.

Ejemplo: I prefer both urban and rural views because each offers different photographic opportunities. For instance, cityscapes provide dramatic architecture and night lights, whereas rural areas offer natural landscapes and quiet scenes that highlight texture and color.

Sugerencia: Correct word choice and grammar (use 'prefer' not 'prepare', singular/plural forms, and possessives). Give a concise topic sentence then one specific supporting detail or example with a linking word for clarity.

Ejemplo: I prefer views both in my own country and abroad because I enjoy discovering familiar landscapes as well as new scenery. For example, at home I like photographing national parks for their lush forests, while abroad I enjoy capturing unique cultural landmarks that I haven't seen before.

× Yes, I like taking pictures of different views because because it helps me to express my feeling and also it helps me to be more comfortable.

✓ Yes, I like taking pictures of different views because it helps me express my feelings and it also makes me feel more comfortable.

Repeated word 'because' is redundancy (sentence structure error but focus on pronoun/adjective issues). 'my feeling' should be plural 'my feelings' because feelings are generally plural. 'helps me to express' is acceptable but 'helps me express' is more natural. 'helps me to be more comfortable' is awkward; use 'makes me feel more comfortable' to use correct verb and pronoun structure. Suggestion: remove duplicate 'because', change 'my feeling' to 'my feelings', and use 'makes me feel more comfortable' for natural phrasing.

× It's so interesting to also know what's behind story of that view.

✓ It's also interesting to know the story behind that view.

Word order is incorrect ('what's behind story of that view' is ungrammatical). Use noun phrase 'the story behind that view' and place 'also' before 'interesting' or after 'It's'. Suggestion: reorder words to 'the story behind that view' and move 'also' for natural flow.

× I I prefer both because as a person who loves photography, I would love to visit those two areas.

✓ I prefer both because, as a person who loves photography, I would like to visit both types of areas.

Repeated 'I I' is a duplication error. 'those two areas' is vague; 'both types of areas' or 'both urban and rural areas' is clearer. 'would love' is acceptable but 'would like' is slightly more neutral; either is fine. Suggestion: remove duplicate 'I', replace 'those two areas' with 'both types of areas' or specify 'urban and rural areas'.

× I prepare. I prepare both because I love to explore other countries but also my countries has a beautiful view like nature.

✓ I prefer both because I love to explore other countries, but my country also has beautiful natural scenery.

'I prepare' is incorrect; likely intended 'I prefer'. 'my countries has' has two problems: 'countries' plural while referring to 'my country' (singular), and subject-verb disagreement ('countries has' incorrect). 'has a beautiful view like nature' is awkward; use 'has beautiful natural scenery' or 'beautiful views of nature'. Suggestion: change 'I prepare' to 'I prefer', use singular 'my country' with verb 'has' to agree, or restructure to 'my country also has beautiful natural scenery'.

× It can help people to be feeling well.

✓ It can help people feel better.

'to be feeling well' is awkward and not the usual collocation. 'feel better' is the natural phrase. Also 'it can help people' is fine but 'feel better' conveys improvement in wellbeing. Suggestion: use 'feel better' instead of 'to be feeling well'.