Views— Part 1 Informe

Sugerencia: Be more natural and concise, correct grammar and vocabulary, and avoid redundancy. Start with a clear topic sentence, then add one or two specific supporting details using linking words. Check verb tenses and article use (e.g., “a breathtaking view,” “when I encounter,” “watch the waves”).

Ejemplo: I don’t take many photos these days. I used to photograph every breathtaking view, but now I prefer to stay present and enjoy the moment because it helps me notice small details. For example, when I visit the coast I usually sit and watch the waves rather than taking pictures.

Sugerencia: Clarify and simplify the response. Use one clear topic sentence, then add specific reasons with correct vocabulary and linking words. Avoid repetition and unclear phrases. Replace fragmented ideas with concrete examples (e.g., ‘quiet fields,’ ‘less traffic,’ ‘birdsong’).

Ejemplo: I prefer rural views to urban ones because I enjoy the peaceful atmosphere and open fields. For example, I like walking on country paths, listening to birdsong, and breathing fresh air, which is more relaxing than the noise and crowds of cities.

Sugerencia: Make the answer direct and grammatical. Begin with a clear statement, then give one or two specific reasons using correct tense and phrasing. Avoid filler phrases like “you know” and repetitive clauses. Mention concrete aspects that create a sense of belonging (e.g., familiar landscapes, culture, memories).

Ejemplo: I prefer views in my own country because they feel familiar and comfortable. For example, the landscapes, local customs, and memories from growing up in Vietnam give me a strong sense of belonging that I don’t feel in other countries.

× Not really. I used to take photos whenever I encounter A breathtaking view, but now I prefer to immerse myself in the scene because it helps me notice more details and feels more relaxed.

✓ Not really. I used to take photos whenever I encountered a breathtaking view, but now I prefer to immerse myself in the scene because it helps me notice more details and makes me feel more relaxed.

Mix of past and present verb forms and incorrect verb form after 'used to'. 'Used to' requires the base/past meaning, so 'encounter' should be past 'encountered'. Also 'feels more relaxed' is incorrect because the subject is 'it' (the action) or 'I' — better: 'makes me feel more relaxed.' Use consistent tense and correct verb agreement. Grammar problem type ID: 10

× I used to take photos whenever I encounter A breathtaking view, but now I prefer to immerse myself in the scene because it helps me notice more details and feels more relaxed.

✓ Not really. I used to take photos whenever I encountered a breathtaking view, but now I prefer to immerse myself in the scene because it helps me notice more details and makes me feel more relaxed.

Capitalization and article: 'A breathtaking view' should be 'a breathtaking view' (lowercase 'a'). Use 'a' before a singular, countable noun that is nonspecific. Also fixed verb forms as above. Grammar problem type ID: 17

× For example, when I visit the coast, I usually sit and watch the ways rather than photographing them.

✓ For example, when I visit the coast, I usually sit and watch the waves rather than photograph them.

Wrong word 'ways' should be 'waves' (word choice) and after 'rather than' use the base verb 'photograph' for parallel structure. Also 'watch the waves' is the correct preposition/phrase. Grammar problem type ID: 11

× I prefer rural views rather than urban ones because I enjoy the I enjoy the peaceful atmosphere and some winner very fields rather than the hustle and bustle cities.

✓ I prefer rural views to urban ones because I enjoy the peaceful atmosphere and the wide fields rather than the hustle and bustle of cities.

Use 'prefer X to Y' rather than 'prefer X rather than Y.' Remove repetition 'I enjoy the I enjoy the'. 'Some winner very fields' is garbled; likely intended 'wide fields.' Add 'the' before 'hustle and bustle' and 'of' before 'cities' for correct noun phrase. Grammar problem type ID: 16

× So I think that and your symbol length is walking on the streets and listening to song.

✓ So I think that my favourite thing is walking in the streets and listening to music.

Original sentence is ungrammatical and contains nonsensical fragments 'and your symbol length.' Rephrase to a coherent idea: 'my favourite thing is walking in the streets and listening to music.' Use 'in' or 'along' the streets and plural 'music' or 'songs.' This fixes sentence structure and clarity. Grammar problem type ID: 26

× I prefer views in my own country rather than another one because, you know, I was familiar and comfortable with them.

✓ I prefer views in my own country rather than in another one because, you know, I am familiar and comfortable with them.

Tense mismatch: 'was familiar' should be 'am familiar' when expressing a current preference. Also add 'in' before 'another one' for parallel prepositional phrases. Grammar problem type ID: 6

× When I live in Vietnam, like my country that I was born and raised in, and when I live in Vietnam, I must say that I have a sense of belonging rather than another country.

✓ Having lived in Vietnam, the country where I was born and raised, I must say that I have a greater sense of belonging there than in another country.

Original repeats 'when I live in Vietnam' and has awkward structure. Change to a past participle phrase 'Having lived in Vietnam' or 'Because I was born and raised in Vietnam' and compare 'a greater sense of belonging there than in another country.' This corrects redundancy and clarifies comparison. Grammar problem type ID: 26}]}-------------</ReportGrammarArguments>