Views— Part 1 Informe

Sugerencia: Make the response more natural and concise: start with a clear topic sentence, avoid awkward phrases and redundancy, and add one short specific detail using a linking word. Also limit to 3–4 sentences and correct grammar (e.g., “one of the great experience” → “a great experience”).

Ejemplo: Yes, I enjoy taking photos of different views. For example, I use a wide-angle lens to capture sweeping landscapes because it shows more of the scene. I find each lens reveals different details, which makes photography exciting.

Sugerencia: Give a direct comparison with clear grammar and linking words. Begin with a topic sentence stating your preference (or that you like both), then contrast them using linking words such as “whereas” or “on the other hand.” Use specific examples and correct plural/singular forms.

Ejemplo: I prefer both urban and rural views because they offer different experiences. Rural views are raw and peaceful, with old buildings and wide fields, whereas urban views are lively, with modern architecture and busy streets. For instance, I enjoy the calm of a village sunrise but also the energy of a city skyline at night.

Sugerencia: Respond with a clear, grammatical topic sentence stating your preference or conditional choice. Avoid repetition and filler words; use linking words like “however” or “also” to connect ideas. Provide one or two concise specific reasons or examples for both options and keep it within 3–4 sentences.

Ejemplo: It depends on my mood: I enjoy views both in my own country and abroad. Visiting other countries lets me see different cultures and landscapes I haven't seen before, such as tropical beaches or alpine villages. At the same time, I appreciate my country’s familiar landscapes, like its rolling hills and historic towns.

× Yes, I love clicking pictures of different views.

✓ Yes, I love taking pictures of different views.

Native speakers usually use the verb 'take' with 'pictures' rather than 'click' in this context. 'Clicking' is understandable but less natural; 'taking pictures' is the standard collocation. Suggestion: Use common verb-noun collocations (take pictures, make a photo) to sound natural.

× Every camera lens has a different view of observing things, and I think it's one of the great experience to click one of those pictures.

✓ Every camera lens gives a different perspective, and I think it's a great experience to take one of those pictures.

Problems: 'view of observing things' is awkward and not idiomatic; 'gives a different perspective' is clearer. 'one of the great experience' is ungrammatical — 'experience' needs to be countable here with 'a' or changed to 'an experience' without 'one of'. Also 'click' -> 'take'. Suggestion: Use idiomatic phrases like 'gives a different perspective' and correct article usage: 'a great experience'.

× Well, I think urban areas are rural areas view.

✓ Well, I think urban and rural areas offer different views.

The original sentence has incorrect structure and is confusing. It seems the student intended to compare urban and rural views. Rewriting to 'urban and rural areas offer different views' fixes structure and clarity. Suggestion: Keep comparisons parallel and concise: 'A and B offer different X'.

× Both are absolutely different in their own respectives.

✓ Both are completely different in their own respects.

'Absolutely different' is slightly informal but acceptable; the main errors are 'respectives' (incorrect plural) and word order. Use 'in their own respects' or 'in their own ways.' Suggestion: Use the correct plural 'respects' and prefer 'completely different' or 'very different'.

× Rural area of views are very unpolished and raw and they give you experience of how it was in the history whereas urban area views gives you more insightful view.

✓ Rural views are unpolished and raw, and they give you a sense of how things were in the past, whereas urban views give you more insight.

Multiple issues: 'Rural area of views' and 'urban area views' are ungrammatical; use 'rural views'/'urban views'. 'they give you experience of how it was in the history' should be 'a sense of how things were in the past'. Subject-verb agreement: 'views gives' -> 'views give'. 'more insightful view' should be 'more insight' or 'a more insightful view'. Suggestion: Simplify noun phrases (use 'rural views') and ensure subject-verb agreement.

× I prefer we were in my own country as well in another countries depending on my mood.

✓ I prefer to be in my own country or in other countries depending on my mood.

Errors: 'I prefer we were' is incorrect pronoun/verb combination; should be 'I prefer to be'. 'as well in another countries' is ungrammatical and has number disagreement: 'another countries' -> 'other countries'. Suggestion: Use infinitive after 'prefer' for states ('prefer to be') and match singular/plural ('other countries').

× It's really great to experience new culture and explore the area around in the different country.

✓ It's really great to experience a new culture and explore the area around you in a different country.

Missing article: 'a new culture' not 'new culture' when singular. 'in the different country' should be 'in a different country'. Also add 'you' after 'around' to be natural. Suggestion: Use articles with singular countable nouns and 'a different country' for non-specific reference.

× You get to see more nature around you get to see something that you haven't seen in your own country as well.

✓ You get to see more nature around you and things you haven't seen in your own country.

Run-on sentence and repetition of 'get to see'. Combine with 'and' and remove redundancy for clarity. Suggestion: Avoid repeating the same phrase; combine clauses with conjunctions.

× And in my own country.

✓ And in my own country, it's beautiful.

Fragment: 'And in my own country.' lacks a verb or complement. Attach to the next clause or complete it. Suggestion: Ensure each sentence has a subject and a verb.

× It's it's beautiful. It's it's has wonderful landscape. The.

✓ It's beautiful. It has a wonderful landscape.

Errors: Repetition 'It's it's' is disfluent. 'It's has' is ungrammatical—use 'It has'. 'The.' is a stray fragment. Clean short sentences: 'It's beautiful. It has wonderful landscapes.' Suggestion: Remove repetitions, ensure correct subject-verb structure, and avoid stray fragments.