Views— Part 1 Informe

Sugerencia: Be more concise and correct grammar. Start with a clear topic sentence, then give one or two specific supporting details using linking words. Avoid repetitions (e.g., “picture” and “photograph” used repeatedly) and tense errors. Aim for 2–3 sentences, use past participle correctly (“have visited”) or simple past where appropriate, and prefer natural phrases like “capture memories.”

Ejemplo: Yes, I love taking photos of beautiful views. For example, whenever I visit a special place I try to capture it to preserve the memory, because photos help me remember the atmosphere and feelings of that trip.

Sugerencia: Give a clear topic sentence and follow with one or two specific reasons using linking words (e.g., “because” or “for example”). Correct word choice (“culture” not “creature”) and grammar (subject-verb agreement). Keep it concise and avoid fillers like “uh.”

Ejemplo: I prefer rural views because they show more of the local culture and daily life. For example, in villages you can see traditional houses and people working outdoors, which feels more authentic than the crowded city.

Sugerencia: Answer directly and correct tense and grammar. Begin with a clear statement, then explain with specific reasons and one example. Avoid unclear phrases (“a lot of you”) and redundant remarks about age. Use plural/singular agreement (e.g., “it has different architecture”).

Ejemplo: I prefer views in other countries because they offer different architecture and ways of life. For instance, when I visit cities abroad I notice unique buildings and street scenes that are quite different from those in my hometown, so it feels more interesting.

× Of course, I really like to take a picture or the photograph of the the view, especially the place that I have been visit before, just for like once in a lifetime then I have been there.

✓ Of course, I really like to take pictures or photographs of the view, especially of places that I have visited before, just to capture the memory of having been there once in a lifetime.

Errors: duplicate 'the', incorrect article use ('a picture' vs plural 'pictures' when speaking generally), wrong verb form 'have been visit' should be present perfect 'have visited', and awkward phrase 'to picture my good memory' corrected to 'to capture the memory'. Suggestion: use plural nouns for general preferences, use correct present perfect form 'have visited' for experiences, remove duplicate words, and use natural collocations such as 'take pictures' and 'capture the memory'.

× I would say the rural area because or the rural area, I think it show more, uh, a creature or the lifestyle of P the local, the real local people who live there, not just like the big city or the urban area, that civilization.

✓ I would say rural areas because I think they show more of the culture and the lifestyle of the real local people who live there, not like in a big city or an urban area.

Errors: inconsistent pronouns and number agreement ('the rural area' then 'it show' — subject-verb disagreement), incorrect word 'creature' instead of 'culture', stray characters 'P', awkward article use. Suggestion: use plural 'rural areas' to talk generally, make subject and verb agree ('they show'), replace incorrect words with 'culture', and remove extraneous words for clarity.

× Uh, another country definitely because I'm have seen a lot of you, uh, in my city since I was born.

✓ Uh, another country definitely because I have seen a lot in my city since I was born.

Errors: incorrect auxiliary 'I'm have' (mixing 'I am' and 'have'), unnecessary word 'you'. Use present perfect 'have seen' with 'since' to indicate an action continuing from the past to present. Suggestion: use 'I have seen' and remove extraneous words.

× So it's similar. It's not much different as I was born because it's despite like 20 years.

✓ So it's similar; it hasn't changed much since I was born, despite about 20 years passing.

Errors: incorrect comparative structure 'not much different as I was born', tense and connector mistakes. Use present perfect 'hasn't changed' with 'since' to link past to present, and express time span clearly as 'about 20 years'. Suggestion: use 'hasn't changed much since I was born' and 'despite about 20 years' or 'after about 20 years'.

× So I prefer the city abroad because it have the different architecture and different lifestyle of people there.

✓ So I prefer cities abroad because they have different architecture and different lifestyles.

Errors: subject-verb disagreement ('it have' should be 'they have'), article misuse ('the city abroad' is awkward when speaking generally), and noun number issues ('lifestyle of people' simplified to plural 'lifestyles'). Suggestion: use plural 'cities abroad' and ensure verb agrees ('they have'), and use plural nouns where appropriate.