Views— Part 1 Informe

Sugerencia: Be more concise and coherent. Start with a clear topic sentence, then give one or two specific reasons with linking words. Correct grammar (e.g., "scenes" or "landscapes" instead of "views of pictures") and avoid repetition.

Ejemplo: Yes, I do. I prefer taking photos of landscapes rather than people because scenery helps me remember places and moments. For example, a photo of a mountain I visited last year always brings back the feeling of that trip, so I often photograph views to preserve memories.

Sugerencia: Organize the answer with a clear preference sentence then support it with specific reasons and examples. Reduce filler words (uh, you know) and improve phrasing (e.g., "not new to me").

Ejemplo: I usually prefer urban views. Since I grew up in the countryside, natural scenes feel familiar, so I enjoy cityscapes more because they offer historical buildings and interesting architecture. For example, I love photographing old urban streets with traditional shops and monuments.

Sugerencia: Clarify your preference and give a balanced, concise explanation. Fix grammar and word choice (e.g., "in my own country"), avoid contradictions (you say you like exploring new things but prefer home), and provide a specific example.

Ejemplo: I prefer taking photos in my own country because it’s easier to travel freely and revisit places without visa or logistical issues. However, I also enjoy photographing abroad when I can, for instance photographing the architecture in Italy gave me fresh perspectives I couldn't find at home.

× Yes, definitely. Compared with taking photos of people, I prefer to take photos, different pictures of views, because I think it's that when you saw it, you just forget it.

✓ Yes, definitely. Compared with taking photos of people, I prefer to take photos of views because when you see them you can go back to those moments.

The original sentence has multiple structural problems: redundant phrases, awkward word order, and incorrect tense. 'Different pictures of views' is redundant; 'photos of views' is sufficient. 'I think it's that when you saw it, you just forget it' mixes tenses and is unclear. Use present tense 'when you see them' to match general truth and 'you can go back to those moments' to express the benefit. Suggestions: remove redundancy, keep consistent present tense for general statements, and use clear subject-object references ('them' referring to photos).

× But taking views of pictures you can when you just go back to those moments.

✓ Taking pictures of views lets you return to those moments.

This fragmentary sentence has incorrect word order and unnecessary words. 'Taking views of pictures' is incorrect word order; correct is 'taking pictures of views'. 'You can when you just go back' is ungrammatical. Use a concise clause 'lets you return to those moments' to express capability. Suggestion: simplify and place verb near subject for clarity.

× Most of the time I prefer, uh, urban views because, you know, I was born in the countryside, so I saw many of like natural views in rural areas.

✓ Most of the time I prefer urban views because I was born in the countryside, so I saw many natural sights in rural areas.

The clause 'I was born' is correct in past, but 'so I saw many of like natural views' is awkward: 'saw' is past tense which can work, but 'many of like' is incorrect. Use 'saw many natural sights' or 'have seen many natural sights'. Suggestion: remove filler words ('uh', 'you know') and tighten phrasing; consider present perfect 'have seen' if implying experience up to now.

× So it's kind of like just not a new thing, but I prefer urban because it has a lot of historical attractions.

✓ So it's not really new to me, but I prefer urban views because they have many historical attractions.

The original mixes informal fillers and has a pronoun reference issue: 'it has a lot of historical attractions' where 'it' is unclear—use plural 'they' to refer to 'urban views' or say 'urban areas'. Also 'kind of like just not a new thing' is informal and ungrammatical. Suggestion: use clearer phrasing: 'not really new to me' and ensure pronoun agrees with noun.

× I prefer to view the, uh, prefer to see the views than in the other country because, you know, since when you are your country, you can just say, oh, whatever, whenever you want.

✓ I prefer to see views in my own country rather than in other countries because when you are in your country you can go whenever you want.

This sentence contains redundancy ('prefer to view the, uh, prefer to see'), misplaced prepositions, and incorrect clause 'since when you are your country'. Correct preposition is 'in your country'. Remove fillers and simplify. Also change 'say, oh, whatever, whenever you want' to 'go whenever you want' for clarity. Suggestion: avoid repeating verbs, use correct prepositions, and keep clauses concise.

× But in other countries it's kind of just you have a lot of limitations such as a post code or visa, something like that.

✓ But in other countries you often have many limitations, such as needing a passport, a visa, or dealing with postal codes.

The original uses 'a post code' incorrectly and lists items awkwardly. 'Post code' is a British term but context suggests administrative limitations; 'passport' is more appropriate. Also the phrase 'it's kind of just you have' is ungrammatical. Suggestion: use 'you often have many limitations' and list specific items correctly ('passport', 'visa').

× And I like to explore new things.

✓ I like to explore new things.

This sentence is grammatically fine except for the leading conjunction 'And' in formal writing. The content is acceptable in spoken response. Suggestion: omit 'And' at the beginning for a cleaner sentence.