Views— Part 1 Informe

Sugerencia: Be more concise and natural. Start with a clear topic sentence, avoid repetition, and add one or two specific supporting details using linking words. Keep the answer to at most 4–5 sentences and correct minor grammar (e.g., “a photographer lover” → “a photography enthusiast”).

Ejemplo: I really enjoy taking photographs of different views because photography has been my hobby since childhood. For example, I often photograph waterfalls and the plants and animals around them, which helps me capture natural colours and textures. Overall, nature photography relaxes me and improves my composition skills.

Sugerencia: Answer directly with a clear topic sentence and then give specific reasons using linking words. Remove filler words like “uh” and avoid repeating earlier statements. Use plural agreement correctly (e.g., “I prefer views in rural areas”).

Ejemplo: I prefer views in rural areas because there is more unspoilt nature. For instance, I enjoy photographing mountains, waterfalls and village landscapes, which give me opportunities to capture wildlife and lush greenery. Consequently, rural scenes offer more variety for my photography.

Sugerencia: Give a clear preference or say you like both, then explain with a specific reason and one clear example. Fix grammar and sentence structure (e.g., “one of my most favorite country” → “one of my favourite countries” and clarify the Kashmir reference). Keep it concise and logical.

Ejemplo: I enjoy views both at home and abroad because each place offers unique scenery. For example, at home I love Kashmir for its valleys and lakes, while abroad I would like to photograph Switzerland’s alpine panoramas because the snowy peaks and clean lakes create striking compositions.

× If I tell you this that I am a photographer lover, I love photography a lot.

✓ If I tell you this, I am a photography lover and I love photography a lot.

The phrase 'photographer lover' is incorrect; 'photography lover' or 'lover of photography' is correct. Also 'If I tell you this that' is ungrammatical; use 'If I tell you this,' or simply 'I'm a photography lover.' Use pronoun/phrase structure correctly and remove the unnecessary 'that'. Suggestion: say 'I'm a lover of photography' or 'I love photography.'

× I used to take pictures of nature since my childhood and I love taking pictures of both nature waterfalls, specifically the plants and the animals.

✓ I have been taking pictures of nature since my childhood, and I love taking pictures of waterfalls, plants, and animals.

'Used to' plus 'since' is incorrect for an action that started in the past and continues; use present perfect continuous or present perfect ('have been taking' or 'have taken'). Also the list was awkwardly punctuated ('both nature waterfalls' is wrong). Use commas between items and remove 'both' when listing more than two items. Suggestion: use 'I have been taking pictures since my childhood' and list items clearly.

× I prefer a views in the rural areas because I believe the nature is definitely present over there.

✓ I prefer views in rural areas because I believe nature is definitely more present there.

'A views' mixes singular article with plural noun; use 'views' without 'a' or use 'a view' for singular. 'The rural areas' can be 'rural areas' in general. 'The nature' is unnatural here; use 'nature' without 'the'. Also 'over there' is informal; 'there' is sufficient. Suggestion: remove incorrect article and 'the' before uncountable nouns.

× And I mentioned you earlier that I love nature.

✓ And I mentioned to you earlier that I love nature.

The verb 'mention' requires a preposition 'to' when indicating the person who was told: 'mentioned to you' or use 'I mentioned earlier that I love nature.' Suggestion: say 'I mentioned earlier that I love nature' or 'I told you earlier that I love nature.'

× I love to take pictures of mountains, waterfalls, animals, plants, greenery and uh, specifically the village.

✓ I love to take pictures of mountains, waterfalls, animals, plants, and greenery, and specifically scenes of village life.

The sentence lists items then ends with 'specifically the village,' which is unclear and ungrammatical. Clarify by specifying 'scenes of village life' or 'the village.' Ensure parallel structure in the list and remove filler 'uh.' Suggestion: keep parallel nouns and clarify the final item.

× I prefer views in my own country as well as in other countries as well.

✓ I prefer views in my own country as well as in other countries.

The phrase repeats 'as well' redundantly. 'Views' is fine plural. Remove duplicate 'as well.' Suggestion: say 'in my own country as well as in other countries.'

× One of my most favorite country to visit and to get a view of it in Switzerland as I belong to a state where Kashmir, one of the cities in my state is known as the most.

✓ One of my favorite countries to visit for its views is Switzerland. I come from a state that includes Kashmir, which is famous in my region.

The original sentence has multiple problems: 'most favorite' is incorrect (use 'favorite' or 'most favorite' is redundant), 'country' should be plural ('countries') when used after 'one of my favorite'), and 'to get a view of it in Switzerland' is ungrammatical. Also the relative clauses are tangled. Break into two sentences and correct noun forms and clause structure. Suggestion: simplify to 'One of my favorite countries to visit for its views is Switzerland. I come from a state that includes Kashmir, which is famous.'