Views— Part 1 Informe

Sugerencia: Be more concise and use complete, natural sentences. Start with a clear topic sentence, then add one or two specific details and a reason. Use linking words to connect ideas (for example, “for example” or “because”). Avoid fragmentary phrases like “Of different scenery” by integrating them into full sentences.

Ejemplo: Yes, I enjoy taking photos of different views. For example, I often photograph the sky, the sea and green mountains because natural scenes calm me down and help me relax.

Sugerencia: Make a clear direct statement and provide a logical, specific reason. Avoid unclear words and pronunciation errors reflected in writing. Use linking words such as “because” or “since” and give a concrete example to support your preference. Keep to 2–3 sentences maximum.

Ejemplo: I prefer views in rural areas because they are quieter and greener. For instance, I like walking by rice fields and forests, which feels refreshing compared with noisy city streets.

Sugerencia: Give a clear, direct opinion and justify it with specific reasons or a comparison. Avoid vague phrases like “I can’t say that.” If you mean both are good, say so and explain why. Use linking phrases like “however” or “on the other hand” to compare, and provide an example to illustrate your point.

Ejemplo: I think both have their own beauty, but I prefer the views in my country because they are very green and familiar. However, I also enjoy visiting other countries to see different landscapes, such as snowy mountains or coastal cliffs.

× Yes, of course I like taking pictures. Of different scenery such as a sky, sea, mountain, like green plants. It makes me comfortable.

✓ Yes, of course I like taking pictures of different scenery, such as the sky, the sea, mountains, and green plants. It makes me feel comfortable.

The main issue is incorrect sentence fragments and misuse of 'taking pictures' capitalization and separation. The phrase 'taking pictures of different scenery' requires the gerund phrase to connect directly to its objects (Verb + -ing form). Also articles and plural forms need correction ('the sky, the sea, mountains') and 'makes me comfortable' is acceptable but more natural as 'makes me feel comfortable.' Suggestion: combine fragments into one complete sentence, keep the gerund phrase directly followed by its objects, use appropriate articles and plural nouns, and include an explicit verb for the adjective 'comfortable' when clarity is needed.

× I prefer. Scenery in rural areas because there are also going and it's cream makes me crawl it out.

✓ I prefer scenery in rural areas because there are many peaceful places and the colors of nature make me relax.

This sentence contains multiple structural problems: an unnecessary period splitting 'I prefer' from its object, incoherent clauses ('there are also going', 'it's cream makes me crawl it out') and wrong word choices. According to the allowed error types, this is a sentence structure error. Suggest breaking into one complete sentence, supply the missing object after 'prefer', replace nonsensical phrases with clear vocabulary ('many peaceful places', 'colors of nature'), and use a correct verb phrase ('make me relax'). Ensure subject and verb are present and the clauses logically connect.

× I can't say that. That my country's view is more beautiful than other countries. To have encouraged, uh, green.

✓ I can't say that my country's views are more beautiful than those of other countries. My country has encouraged green spaces, which I appreciate.

The original is fragmented and unclear: a sentence fragment 'That my country's view...' and an isolated phrase 'To have encouraged, uh, green.' This is a sentence structure error. Corrections: combine fragments into a full comparative sentence, use plural 'views' to match 'other countries' and replace vague phrasing with a clear clause ('has encouraged green spaces'). Also use 'those of other countries' for correct comparison. Suggest practicing combining clauses and using comparative structures with proper reference words.