Views— Part 1 Informe

Sugerencia: Your answer is positive and relevant, but it has some unnatural phrasing and redundancy. Improve by using a clear topic sentence, reducing repetition, and giving one or two specific supporting details. Use linking words (for example, “because” or “so”) to connect ideas and keep responses within 3–4 sentences.

Ejemplo: Yes, I really enjoy photographing different views. I especially like taking photos of the landscapes and my family because they remind me of happy moments and beautiful scenes. For example, on weekends I often walk to a nearby park to capture sunrise and birds, which helps me relax and practice my composition.

Sugerencia: Good content and a personal example, but grammar and coherence need improvement. Use a clear topic sentence, correct grammar (plural/singular, prepositions), and linking words such as “because” and “so” to connect reasons. Be specific about what you like in rural views and keep it concise (3–4 sentences).

Ejemplo: I prefer rural views to urban ones because rural areas have more green space and wildlife. For instance, I moved from the city center to the outskirts of Patiala so I could enjoy birds, fields, and quieter scenery. This peaceful environment also gives me better opportunities to take nature photographs.

Sugerencia: Your answer expresses enthusiasm but is long and contains grammatical errors and repetition. Start with a direct topic sentence (your preference), then add one reason and a specific supporting detail. Use linking words like “however,” “because,” or “so” to make ideas flow, and avoid run-on sentences.

Ejemplo: I appreciate views both in my country and abroad, but so far I prefer my own country because I know it better. However, I’m fascinated by foreign landscapes I see online, which makes me want to travel. For example, photos of Scandinavian fjords and Japanese gardens have inspired me to plan a world trip someday.

× Definitely yes.

✓ Definitely.

'Definitely' already functions as a full response; adding 'yes' is redundant and informal. Use 'Definitely.' or 'Yes, I do.' to be concise.

× Taking pictures, especially of my surrounding, makes me extremely enthusiastic and courageous where I am living.

✓ Taking pictures, especially of my surroundings, makes me extremely enthusiastic and confident about where I live.

Use plural 'surroundings' (area around someone). 'Courageous' is not appropriate for being eager or happy; 'confident' or 'excited' fits better. Use 'where I live' (simple present) instead of 'where I am living' for general statement.

× It is also one of my favorite pastime hobbies.

✓ It is also one of my favorite pastimes.

'Pastime' is usually countable and plural 'pastimes' is correct. 'Hobby' is redundant with 'pastime'. Remove 'hobbies' and use 'favorite pastimes.'

× Whenever I have free time, I love to take pictures of landscapes and my family.

✓ Whenever I have free time, I love taking pictures of landscapes and my family.

After 'love', the gerund form 'taking' is more natural for habitual activities than the infinitive 'to take.'

× I enjoy rural areas view more as compared to urban area because it has a lot of green space and rich in biodiversity.

✓ I enjoy rural views more than urban areas because they have a lot of green space and are rich in biodiversity.

Use 'rural views' or 'views in rural areas' and 'more than' to compare. Match plural 'areas' with plural verb 'have' and complete adjective phrase 'are rich in biodiversity.'

× I can enjoy different kind of animals and birds in the surroundings.

✓ I can enjoy different kinds of animals and birds in the surroundings.

Use plural 'kinds' when referring to multiple types. 'Different kinds of animals and birds' is the correct noun phrase.

× So this is the only reason I shifted from city center to the outskirt of Patiala just to have more.

✓ So this is the main reason I moved from the city center to the outskirts of Patiala: I wanted more green space.

Use 'main reason' instead of 'only reason' unless exclusive. 'Moved' is more natural than 'shifted.' Use article 'the city center' and plural 'outskirts.' The original 'just to have more' is incomplete; specify what 'more' refers to.

× I enjoy views in my nation as well as across the globe and moreover I have never been to any other nations so watching their landscape with the help of Internet make me more curious to explore their landscapes and I really have dream to go on world tour and enjoy the diverse nature.

✓ I enjoy views in my country as well as around the world. Moreover, I have never been to any other country, so watching their landscapes on the Internet makes me more curious to explore them. I really dream of going on a world tour to enjoy diverse nature.

Multiple issues: use 'country' (singular) for one's nation and 'around the world' is more natural than 'across the globe.' 'Nations' should be 'any other country' for singular reference. Use 'landscapes' plural and 'on the Internet' as the correct preposition. Subject-verb agreement: 'watching... makes' (singular gerund subject) so verb 'makes' is correct. Use 'dream of' rather than 'have dream.' Also split into sentences for clarity and correct tense and articles.