Views— Part 1 Informe

Sugerencia: Cải thiện: Giảm tiếng ngập ngừng và lỗi ngữ pháp; trả lời trực tiếp, rõ ràng và tự nhiên trong tối đa 5 câu. Cụ thể: (1) Tránh từ đệm như “umm” và “uh”; (2) Sửa thì và động từ bị sai (“want to save the memories” → đúng; “I can saw it again” → “I can see them again”); (3) Bắt đầu bằng câu chủ đề rõ ràng, rồi thêm ví dụ cụ thể; (4) Dùng liên từ để nối ý (for example, when).

Ejemplo: Yes, I enjoy taking photos of different views because I like preserving memories. For example, when I feel bored I can look at the photos and remember the place and how I felt. Taking pictures also helps me notice small details I might otherwise forget.

Sugerencia: Cải thiện: Sửa từ vựng sai và cấu trúc câu; trả lời trực tiếp và tránh mơ hồ. Cụ thể: (1) Thay từ sai (“fuels”) bằng “views” hoặc “scenery”; (2) Chú ý mệnh đề và danh từ số ít/ nhiều (“it is peaceful” → nếu nói chung, dùng số ít hoặc ‘they are peaceful’); (3) Sử dụng liên từ ngắn gọn để nối lý do (“because” + clause); (4) Tránh lặp và dùng tính từ phù hợp (“it lightens my mood” hoặc “they lift my mood”).

Ejemplo: I prefer views in urban areas because I find cityscapes calming and interesting. When I look at the skyline or busy streets, I feel comfortable and my mood lifts. I also enjoy the variety of architecture and street life in cities.

Sugerencia: Cải thiện: Trả lời rõ ràng (yes/no) rồi giải thích; sửa lỗi nói lắp và lỗi ngữ pháp; tránh lỗi ngôn ngữ máy (“AI” không phù hợp). Cụ thể: (1) Bắt đầu bằng câu chủ đề rõ ràng như “I don’t have a strong preference” hoặc “I prefer views in other countries sometimes”; (2) Sửa câu thành phần giải thích với cấu trúc đúng (“they broaden my horizons”); (3) Cung cấp ví dụ cụ thể (ví dụ: kiến trúc, phong cảnh, văn hóa).

Ejemplo: I don’t have a strong preference; sometimes I prefer views in other countries because they expose me to different cultures and landscapes. For instance, seeing traditional architecture or unfamiliar natural scenery broadens my horizons and teaches me about other ways of life.

× For example, when I feel boring I can saw it again.

✓ For example, when I feel bored I can see it again.

The student used 'feel boring' (adjective with wrong meaning) and 'saw' (past tense) incorrectly. 'Feel bored' correctly describes a person's state; 'can' requires base form 'see', not past 'saw'. Suggestion: use 'feel bored' and use base verb after modal verbs (can see).

× For me I like fuels in urban areas because it is a peaceful and I when I look at the views I feel comfortable and it lighten my mood.

✓ For me, I like views in urban areas because they are peaceful, and when I look at the views I feel comfortable and they lighten my mood.

Multiple issues: 'fuels' is incorrect word choice; should be 'views'. 'It is a peaceful' is wrong: 'views' is plural so use 'they are peaceful'. 'it lighten' uses singular subject with plural verb form and wrong verb agreement; use 'they lighten'. Suggestion: choose correct noun ('views'), ensure subject-verb agreement (plural noun -> 'they are', 'they lighten'), and simplify sentence structure by removing extraneous words.

× Not really. Sometimes I also prefer views in other countries because when I look at the view in the other. Country I can have AI can broaden my horizons about the world.

✓ Not really. Sometimes I also prefer views in other countries because when I look at views in other countries I can broaden my horizons about the world.

Errors: unnecessary article and broken sentence 'the view in the other. Country' and stray 'AI'. Use 'views in other countries' (no 'the' before 'other countries' and plural consistency). Remove 'AI' which is extraneous. Suggestion: keep prepositions simple ('in other countries'), maintain plural consistency, and avoid inserting unrelated words.