Part 1
Examinador
Do you like taking pictures of different views?
Candidato
Yes, I like taking picture of different views, so I like going to take a picture with my friends and share the pictures after that so I can see how it's different.
Examinador
Do you prefer views in urban areas or rural areas?
Candidato
MMM I think I prefer in rural areas because I more like the nature than cities, so I really enjoy being in quiet places.
Examinador
Do you prefer views in your own country or in other countries?
Candidato
Actually I put it for a view in other countries. So I really love traveling other countries and free the atmosphere. How different to my country?
Do you like taking pictures of different views?
Puntuación: 68.0Sugerencia: Be more concise and natural: start with a clear topic sentence, then add one or two specific details using linking words. Correct grammar (singular/plural, verb forms) and avoid repetition. For example, say you enjoy photographing landscapes and mention a specific situation or reason.
Ejemplo: Yes, I enjoy taking photos of different views. For example, I often go on short trips with friends to photograph coastal sunsets and then we compare our shots to learn from each other.
Do you prefer views in urban areas or rural areas?
Puntuación: 72.0Sugerencia: Give a clear topic sentence and support it with a specific reason and an example. Remove filler sounds like “MMM” and fix grammar (e.g., “I prefer rural areas because I prefer nature to cities”). Use a linking word to connect reason and example.
Ejemplo: I prefer rural views because I enjoy being surrounded by nature. For instance, hiking in the countryside lets me relax in quiet fields and photograph wildflowers away from city noise.
Do you prefer views in your own country or in other countries?
Puntuación: 60.0Sugerencia: Respond directly and clearly: state your preference, give a reason and one specific example. Correct sentences and avoid vague phrases like “I put it for a view.” Explain how views differ and use linking words (because, for example).
Ejemplo: I prefer views in other countries because they offer different landscapes and cultures. For example, I love photographing coastal towns abroad since the architecture and light there feel very different from the scenes in my country.