Views— Part 1 Informe

Sugerencia: حاول أن تتكلّم بصيغة صحيحة وبجمل كاملة وواضحة. استخدم تعابير طبيعية مثل "I'm interested in" بدلاً من "I'm so interesting to"، واحذف الأخطاء النحوية مثل توافق المفرد والجمع (a beautiful view). قدّم جملة موضوعية قصيرة ثم تفاصيل داعمة محددة وباستخدام رابط مثل "because" أو "for example".

Ejemplo: Yes, I enjoy taking pictures of different views because it helps me capture memorable moments. For example, I often photograph sunsets and cityscapes when the light is especially beautiful.

Sugerencia: استجب مباشرة بجملة موضوعية واضحة وادعمها بتفصيل موجّه وسبب واحد على الأقل. تجنّب عبارات غامضة مثل "for no reason" و"it's just preferring". استخدم رابط مثل "because" أو "so" لتوضيح السبب وقدم مثالاً قصيراً.

Ejemplo: I prefer views in urban areas because I like the energy and architectural variety. For instance, I enjoy photographing tall buildings and busy streets at night.

Sugerencia: تجنب التعميمات السلبية عن بلدك ووضّح رأيك بأدب وبأسباب محددة. ابدأ بجملة واضحة ثم قدم سببين موجزين يدعمان رأيك، مستخدماً روابط مثل "because" و"for example". استخدم مفردات أدق لوصف الاختلافات في المشاهد مثل "scenery" أو "landscapes".

Ejemplo: I prefer views in other countries because I enjoy diverse landscapes and historic architecture. For example, I would like to visit Europe to photograph old towns and scenic countryside.

× Yeah, I'm so interesting to take pictures of different views, especially when it's a beautiful views for me or something ridiculous.

✓ Yeah, I'm so interested in taking pictures of different views, especially when they are beautiful to me or something unusual.

The student used 'interesting' (an adjective describing something that causes interest) instead of 'interested' (an adjective describing a person). 'Interested in' is the correct collocation. 'To take pictures' should be the gerund phrase 'taking pictures' after 'interested in'. 'A beautiful views' mixes singular article 'a' with plural 'views' — change to 'they are beautiful' or 'beautiful views'. 'Ridiculous' is awkward here; 'unusual' or 'interesting' fits better. Suggestion: use 'interested in taking' and match number agreement between article and noun.

× I prefer views in urban areas for no reason actually. It's just preferring.

✓ I prefer urban views for no particular reason. It's just a preference.

The phrase 'views in urban areas' is grammatically correct but wordy; 'urban views' is more natural. 'For no reason actually' should be 'for no particular reason' (idiomatic). 'It's just preferring' is ungrammatical because 'preferring' is a verb form needing an object; use the noun 'preference' and the adjective structure 'It's just a preference.' Suggestion: replace awkward quantifier/phrase with idiomatic expressions.

× I prefer views in other countries because my country is in Middle East and it's, uh, it's not a good place in views.

✓ I prefer views in other countries because my country is in the Middle East and, uh, it doesn't have good scenery.

'In Middle East' needs the definite article 'the' -> 'the Middle East'. 'Not a good place in views' is ungrammatical and awkward. Use 'doesn't have good scenery' or 'doesn't have many attractive views.' Also avoid repeating 'it's' unnecessarily. Suggestion: use 'the Middle East' and a natural expression for scenery, such as 'good scenery' or 'attractive views.'

× I would like to go to Europe, European countries for views.

✓ I would like to go to European countries for the scenery.

Saying 'Europe, European countries' is redundant; choose one form. 'For views' is understandable but 'for the scenery' or 'to see the scenery' is more natural. Suggestion: use 'European countries' or 'Europe' singularly and 'the scenery' for natural phrasing.