Views— Part 1 Informe

Sugerencia: Be clearer and more concise. Start with a direct topic sentence (Yes/No and brief reason), then add one or two specific supporting details using linking words. Avoid filler words (like, you know) and correct basic grammar (tense, articles, plurals). For example, mention the device type and the technical limitation briefly.

Ejemplo: I used to enjoy taking photos, but I don't much now because my old camera is outdated. Moreover, it is bulky to carry and uses an obsolete memory format, so I rarely bother to take it out.

Sugerencia: Answer directly and give a clear preference or say that you like both, then support it with specific reasons linked logically. Use linking words such as 'because' or 'however' and avoid unclear phrases like 'brilliant homes' and 'take short of both'.

Ejemplo: I prefer both urban and rural views because each offers something different. Urban areas have interesting architecture and street life, while rural areas offer peaceful landscapes, so it depends on my mood and what I want to photograph.

Sugerencia: Be specific about reasons and use correct sentence structure. Start with a clear statement of preference, then give concrete reasons and avoid vague or repetitive phrases. Use linking words like 'because' and provide one specific example of what you like to explore in other countries.

Ejemplo: I prefer views in other countries because they offer new cultures and landscapes to explore. For instance, I enjoy seeing different architectural styles and local markets abroad, whereas I feel I've already visited most sights in my own country.

× I used to, but nowadays I don't 'cause like I used to have a teaser and it is pretty bad dated and you have to like carry it and like carry it is a lot of hassle 'cause it have plans I have to clean it and in a particular effort and it's a old format memory cut, so it cannot like.

✓ I used to, but nowadays I don't, because I used to have a camera and it was pretty badly dated and you had to carry it, which was a lot of hassle because it had parts I had to clean and required particular effort, and it used an old-format memory card, so it doesn't work well.

Errors include incorrect past participle and verb forms ('have a teaser' -> 'have a camera'; 'pretty bad dated' -> 'pretty badly dated'; 'it have plans' -> 'it had parts'; 'memory cut' -> 'memory card'; 'so it cannot like' -> 'so it doesn't work well'). Use past tense and correct past participle/adjective/adverb forms to describe past routines. Suggestion: use correct noun ('camera'), correct adverb for modifying 'dated' ('badly dated' or 'very dated'), and correct past-tense verbs for past situations. Break long run-on sentence into clearer clauses.

× Too honest I prefer both cause like both of them I have their brilliant homes. So depend on your mood, you can take short of both you know.

✓ To be honest, I prefer both because they both have brilliant views. It depends on your mood; you can take a bit of both, you know.

Errors include wrong phrase 'Too honest' (should be 'To be honest'), incorrect use of 'cause' (use 'because'), incorrect reference and word choice ('both of them I have their brilliant homes' -> 'they both have brilliant views'), and awkward phrase 'take short of both' -> 'take a bit of both'. Also sentence fragments and punctuation need fixing. Suggestion: use 'to be honest' for opinion statements, ensure subject and verb agree, and choose appropriate nouns ('views' not 'homes').

× I prefer other country calls like other country have a lot of things that I can explore.

✓ I prefer other countries because other countries have a lot of things that I can explore.

Error: singular/plural mismatch ('other country' should be plural 'other countries') and awkward verb agreement ('other country have' -> 'other countries have'). Suggestion: use plural when speaking generally about more than one country and ensure subject-verb agreement.

× But in my country I've been, I've been to old places.

✓ But in my country I've been to old places.

Redundant repetition 'I've been, I've been' is unnecessary. The present perfect 'I've been to old places' correctly indicates experiences up to the present. Suggestion: remove the repeated phrase and keep a single correct present perfect construction.

× So I don't think uh, if exercising me anymore.

✓ So I don't think it excites me anymore.

The original is ungrammatical and unclear. 'If exercising me' is incorrect structure and word choice. Likely intended meaning is 'it doesn't excite me anymore' or 'it doesn't interest me anymore.' Suggestion: use 'excites' or 'interests' with the subject 'it' to express lack of interest.