Views— Part 1 Informe

Sugerencia: Your answer is clear and relevant, but it's a bit wordy and contains some grammatical issues. Aim for a concise topic sentence, then one or two specific supporting details. Correct minor grammar (e.g., “cherish when you grow up” → “cherish later” or “cherish as I grow older”), avoid repetition ("remember and to reminisce" is redundant), and keep sentences varied. Use a linking word to connect idea and detail (e.g., “because” or “so”).

Ejemplo: Yes, I enjoy taking photos of different views because they help me remember places I’ve visited. For example, I often photograph sunsets and city skylines so I can look back at them later and relive the experience.

Sugerencia: Your response answers the question but is overly long and has some awkward phrasing and redundancy ("always" repeated, "blinding nights"). Begin with a direct topic sentence stating your preference, then give two concise, specific reasons linked with connectors (e.g., “because” / “for example”). Use correct collocations ("beautiful architecture", "city lights at night") and avoid informal or exaggerated adjectives like "blinding" unless clarified.

Ejemplo: I prefer urban views because I enjoy the city’s architecture and the vibrant night lights. For example, tall buildings and modern bridges create interesting photo subjects, and the lively streets offer many opportunities for candid shots.

Sugerencia: The idea is understandable but the response is repetitive and contains grammar and word-choice errors ("not the very easy", "thickets"). Start with a clear topic sentence stating your preference, then give a concise, specific reason and an example. Avoid repeating the same point and correct vocabulary ("tickets", "hard to visit"). Use a linking word like “because” and finish with a short consequence or example.

Ejemplo: I prefer views in other countries because they feel more special and harder to reach. For example, visiting the Eiffel Tower or a remote temple requires planning and travel, so photos from abroad are more memorable to me.

× Yes, definitely. Taking pictures can serve as something that you can cherish when you grow up.

✓ Yes, definitely. Taking pictures can serve as something you can cherish when you grow up.

Redundant use of 'that' is unnecessary; this is not a grammatical error type listed but fits Verb + -ing form context because 'Taking' is used correctly. Remove 'that' for natural phrasing. Suggestion: omit unnecessary relative pronouns for conciseness.

× So it's really a good habit to take pictures of views to remember and to reminisce about what are the places that you've been to when you were still young.

✓ So it's really a good habit to take pictures of views to remember and reminisce about the places you visited when you were young.

Original sentence has awkward word order and unnecessary words ('what are the places that you've been to when you were still young'). Use simple past 'visited' to match 'were young' and remove 'what are' and 'still' for clarity. Suggestion: use 'remember and reminisce about the places you visited'.

× Yes, I honestly prefer views in urban areas since when I was a child I always dream of living in the city as I can always look for the beautiful architectures, tall buildings, blinding nights when I see them at night and also the greatness and the opportunities that a city can offer.

✓ Yes, I honestly prefer views in urban areas because when I was a child I always dreamed of living in the city, as I could admire beautiful architecture, tall buildings, and dazzling night scenes, as well as the advantages and opportunities a city can offer.

Mix of tenses: 'when I was a child' requires past tense 'dreamed' not 'dream'. 'Can' vs 'could' should be consistent with past time frame. 'Architectures' is incorrect plural; 'architecture' is uncountable. 'Blinding nights' is awkward; use 'dazzling night scenes'. Suggestion: match past tense for past time references and use correct noun forms.

× I prefer views in other countries to be honest because it's not the very easy to see them as you need to buy thickets or plane tickets just to visit there and see about these places.

✓ I prefer views in other countries to be honest because it's not very easy to see them; you need to buy tickets or plane fares just to visit and see those places.

Several issues: 'the very easy' is incorrect article and adverb order; correct phrase is 'not very easy'. 'Thickets' is a misspelling of 'tickets'. 'Plane tickets' fine but 'plane fares' or 'flight tickets' better. 'Visit there' and 'see about these places' are awkward — use 'visit and see those places'. Suggestion: correct articles, spelling, and phrasing for natural expression.

× Unlike in this country or in my own country, I can easily just book a ticket and see them in person.

✓ In my own country, I can easily book a ticket and see them in person.

'Unlike in this country or in my own country' is redundant and awkward. Maintain present tense 'can' as it refers to a general ability now. Remove 'just' if unnecessary for conciseness. Suggestion: simplify the contrast by explicitly saying 'In my own country' and keep present tense.