Views— Part 1 Informe

Sugerencia: Pronunciation and grammar need correction; make answers more natural and concise. Start with a clear topic sentence, then add one specific supporting detail using a linking word. Avoid redundancy and keep it under five sentences.

Ejemplo: Yes, I do. When I travel, I always take photos of landscapes and city scenes because I enjoy capturing places I’ve never seen before. For example, last year I photographed coastal villages in Portugal to remember their light and colours.

Sugerencia: The answer is unclear and contains grammatical errors and repetition. Give a clear topic sentence (state preference), then explain with specific reasons using linking words. Use correct vocabulary (e.g., ‘feel peaceful’, ‘natural scenery’) and avoid repeating words.

Ejemplo: I prefer rural areas because the countryside feels peaceful and less crowded. For instance, I enjoy walking among fields and forests where the natural scenery and fresh air help me relax.

Sugerencia: Grammar and word choice need improvement; make the response more precise and natural. Begin with a direct statement, then give one clear reason with a concrete example. Replace vague phrases like ‘keep your horizon’ with ‘broaden your horizons’.

Ejemplo: I prefer views in other countries because travelling exposes me to different landscapes and cultures, which broadens my horizons. For example, seeing terraced rice fields in Asia taught me about different farming traditions and changed how I think about countryside life.

× Yeah, I like take some pictures.

✓ Yeah, I like taking some pictures.

The verb 'like' when followed by another verb requires a gerund (verb + -ing) to indicate the activity you enjoy. Use 'taking' instead of the base form 'take'. Suggestion: use 'I like doing' or 'I enjoy taking'.

× For example, when I was traveling, I would like to take some pictures at the different country, at the different field that I haven't seen before.

✓ For example, when I was traveling, I liked to take pictures in different countries and in places I had not seen before.

Multiple issues: 'would like' is modal and implies present polite desire; in narration about past habitual actions use past tense 'liked to' or 'would' with care. 'At the different country' is incorrect preposition and article use: use 'in different countries' (plural) rather than 'the different country'. 'Field' is odd; use 'places' or 'areas'. 'I haven't seen before' mixes present perfect with past narrative; use past perfect 'I had not seen before' or simple past 'I had not seen' for past context. Suggestion: keep tense consistent and use correct prepositions and plurals.

× So I will totally say yes.

✓ So I would definitely say yes.

In the past description and opinion context, 'would' or present 'would' for hypothetical is better; 'totally' is informal—'definitely' fits better. 'I will totally say yes' is awkward and mixes future 'will' with a present preference. Suggestion: use 'I would definitely say yes' or 'I would certainly say yes'.

× I would prefer rural areas because the countryside is more make people feel clean and also the scenery scenery is more close to Nitro.

✓ I would prefer rural areas because the countryside makes people feel refreshed, and the scenery is closer to nature.

'is more make people feel clean' is ungrammatical: use active verb 'makes' + object 'people' and an appropriate adjective 'refreshed' or 'cleaner feeling'. 'Scenery scenery' is repetition; remove duplicate. 'more close to Nitro' likely intends 'closer to nature'—'closer' is comparative; use 'closer to nature'. Suggestion: avoid repetition, use correct verb agreement 'countryside makes', and choose suitable vocabulary.

× I would prefer in other countries because you have to go outside to see different world, different landscape that you can open your mind and also just keep your horizon more.

✓ I would prefer other countries because you have to go abroad to see different worlds and landscapes that can open your mind and broaden your horizons.

Do not use 'prefer in other countries'—say 'prefer other countries' or 'prefer traveling to other countries'. 'Go outside' is vague; 'go abroad' fits. 'Different world' should be plural 'different worlds' or 'a different world'; 'landscape' plural 'landscapes'. 'That you can open your mind' is ungrammatical; use 'that can open your mind'. 'Keep your horizon more' is incorrect collocation—use 'broaden your horizons'. Suggestion: correct prepositions, use plurals, and common collocations like 'broaden your horizons'.