Views— Part 1 Informe

Sugerencia: Be more concise and correct tense and article use. Start with a clear topic sentence, then add one specific supporting detail using a linking word. Avoid repetition (e.g., “something”).

Ejemplo: Yes, I do. I often take photos with my phone when I see interesting or eye-catching scenes, because it helps me remember places and share them with friends.

Sugerencia: Use a clear comparison and correct word choice. Begin with a direct topic sentence stating your preference, then give one or two specific, linked reasons without repetition. Correct collocations (e.g., “rural views,” “watch” -> “see” or “hear”).

Ejemplo: I prefer rural views to urban ones because you can see natural scenes like sunsets, singing birds and fields of flowers, which feel more peaceful.

Sugerencia: Answer directly in present tense and avoid hesitations. State your preference clearly and give a specific reason with one supporting example. Fix grammar (e.g., “there is no river,” “abroad,” “countries like Turkey or in Europe”).

Ejemplo: I prefer views in other countries because Uzbekistan has few rivers, so I enjoy visiting places like Turkey or Europe to see rivers and coastal landscapes with my own eyes.

× I quite often take some photos with my phone's camera when I saw something interesting and when I saw something beneficial or eye-catching and save it my photos.

✓ I quite often take some photos with my phone's camera when I see something interesting or eye-catching and save them to my photos.

The sentence mixes past tense 'saw' with present habitual 'take', creating a tense inconsistency. Use the verb + -ing form rule indirectly by keeping the verb in base/present for habitual actions: 'when I see'. Also 'save it my photos' is incorrect; use the object pronoun 'them' for plural 'photos' and the correct preposition 'to' with 'photos'. Suggestion: maintain present tense for habitual actions and match pronouns and prepositions ('see', 'save them to my photos').

× Well, I think the view of rural areas is much more easy, much easier, because you can easily watch any kind of any kind of scenes like the sunset or the birds singing and also flower.

✓ Well, I think the views of rural areas are much easier to enjoy because you can easily watch scenes like the sunset, birds singing, and flowers.

There are several present-tense and agreement issues: 'the view of rural areas is' should be plural 'views ... are' because 'rural areas' implies multiple views. 'Much more easy' is unidiomatic; use comparative 'much easier' or 'easier to enjoy'. Repetition 'any kind of any kind of' is redundant. 'Watch any kind of scenes' is awkward; use 'watch scenes' or 'see scenes'. 'Also flower' needs plural 'flowers'. Suggestion: use plural subjects with matching verb forms and natural comparative phrasing ('views ... are much easier', 'birds singing, and flowers').

× Well, I opted for foreign countries view because, uh, as you know, in Uzbekistan there there is not any kind of river, but in the countries in the abroad like Turkey or Europe, I want to see the river with my own eyes.

✓ Well, I prefer views of foreign countries because, as you know, in Uzbekistan there is no river, but in countries abroad like Turkey or in parts of Europe, I want to see rivers with my own eyes.

Multiple article and article-related errors: 'opted for' is awkward for preference—use 'prefer'. 'foreign countries view' needs 'views of foreign countries' or 'foreign views'. Double 'there there' is a repetition error. 'there is not any kind of river' is unidiomatic; use 'there is no river'. 'in the abroad' is incorrect; use 'abroad' without 'the'. 'the river' suggests a specific river; use plural 'rivers' if speaking generally. Suggestion: use natural collocations ('prefer', 'views of foreign countries', 'there is no river', 'countries abroad', 'rivers').