Views— Part 1 Informe

Sugerencia: Make a clear, concise topic sentence that directly answers the question, avoid fillers and repetition, and add one brief supporting detail using a linking word. Use specific vocabulary (e.g., landscapes, cityscapes) and correct tense. Aim for 2–3 sentences, no filler words like "uh" or repeated words.

Ejemplo: Yes, I do like taking pictures of different views. For example, I often photograph cityscapes and coastal landscapes and then post the best shots on Instagram.

Sugerencia: Answer directly with a clear topic sentence, correct grammar (subject–verb agreement), and avoid repeating words. Give one specific reason with a linking word (e.g., because, since). Do not mention irrelevant details or use slang; focus on precise vocabulary like "urban landscapes," "amenities," or "connectivity."

Ejemplo: I prefer urban landscapes because I find the architecture and vibrant street scenes more interesting. Also, cities usually have better connectivity, so I can upload my photos quickly.

Sugerencia: Give a direct, natural reply and correct grammatical errors (e.g., word order, adjectives). Use one or two supporting details with linking words (e.g., because, for example) and specific vocabulary (e.g., landscapes, cultural landmarks). Keep it concise and avoid repeating phrases like "my country" repeatedly.

Ejemplo: I prefer photographing views in my own country because I want to showcase its beautiful landscapes and cultural landmarks. For example, I often capture sunsets over the coastline to highlight our natural beauty.

× It depends on when I want to take the views, uh, if it is in modern, I would like to uh, take different picture, different, different places views and post it in Instagram.

✓ It depends on when I want to take photos; if it is in the daytime, I would like to take pictures of different places and post them on Instagram.

Errors: vague time word 'in modern' and inconsistent noun forms. Used 'take the views' and 'take different picture' (singular/plural mismatch) and incorrect preposition 'in Instagram'. Suggestion: use 'photos' or 'pictures', match plural forms ('take pictures', 'post them on Instagram'), and use correct time expression ('during the daytime' or 'if it is daytime'). Grammar problem type ID:6

× I prefer to capture urban area landscape because urban area views is more attracting to me and and some rural rural areas you is places is didn't have Wi-Fi for me to use and posted on Instagram.

✓ I prefer to capture urban landscapes because urban views are more attractive to me, and some rural areas don't have Wi-Fi for me to use to post on Instagram.

Errors: subject-verb agreement ('urban area views is' should be 'views are'), adjective form ('attracting' used instead of 'attractive'), incorrect pronoun use and verb forms ('you is places is didn't have' is ungrammatical). Suggestions: pluralize nouns consistently ('urban landscapes'), use 'are' with plural 'views', use adjective 'attractive', and use negative auxiliary 'don't have' for rural areas lacking Wi-Fi. Grammar problem type ID:27

× Yes, I like to prefer. I prefer to capture my own country because I want to show how my country beautiful is, how gorgeous my country sunset do like.

✓ Yes, I prefer to capture scenes in my own country because I want to show how beautiful my country is and how gorgeous its sunsets are.

Errors: redundant phrasing ('I like to prefer'), incorrect word order ('how my country beautiful is'), and incorrect noun/adjective agreement ('my country sunset do like'). Suggestions: use 'I prefer' alone, correct adjective order ('how beautiful my country is'), and possessive 'its sunsets' with correct verb 'are'. Grammar problem type ID:6