Part 1
Examinador
Do you prefer typing or handwriting?
Candidato
I prefer handwriting 'cause as a university student I need memory a lot of things, you know how to make a 3D models and some important things about my reports. So handwriting is a good way to help me remember these important things.
Examinador
Do you type on a desktop or laptop keyboard every day?
Candidato
MMM yeah definitely laptop because it's very convenient I can bring in my laptop, I everywhere and uh for me laptop keyboard uh is smaller than you know, com uh desktop desktop, so I use it every day but.
Examinador
When did you learn how to type on a keyboard?
Candidato
Yeah, maybe my primary school 'cause in China we, uh, had to learn how to type in words in computer. But, umm, actually I can't remember very clearly, maybe in my primary school or secondary school.
Examinador
How do you improve your typing?
Candidato
Well it's very hard to me because my typing is so slow. Just just use my 2 fingers to type in words. So I really don't like typing on my laptop. Uh, actually every time when I using my laptop I feel so pressure.
Do you prefer typing or handwriting?
Puntuación: 65.0Sugerencia: 回答要更直接且语法更准确。开头先给出明确主题句,然后用一两句具体理由和例子支持,避免重复和口语填充词(如 'you know')。注意时态和冠词(a/an/the)的使用。
Ejemplo: I prefer handwriting. As a university student who often sketches 3D models and takes notes for reports, I find writing by hand helps me remember details better. For example, when I draw a diagram on paper I recall its steps more easily than when I type.
Do you type on a desktop or laptop keyboard every day?
Puntuación: 60.0Sugerencia: 回答要简洁并纠正语法错误。先给出明确选择,再用一两句说明原因,避免重复和停顿词(uh, you know)。注意语序和完整句子(e.g., I can bring my laptop everywhere)。
Ejemplo: I usually type on a laptop keyboard. It's more convenient because I can take the laptop anywhere, and the smaller keyboard suits my workspace, so I use it every day.
When did you learn how to type on a keyboard?
Puntuación: 70.0Sugerencia: 回答需要更流畅并减少不确定的词。可以先给出大致时间,然后补充简短背景。尽量用明确表达替代模糊词(maybe, umm)或把不确定性用清晰短语表达(e.g., I think it was in primary school)。
Ejemplo: I think I learned to type in primary school. In China, basic computer lessons usually include typing, so I probably started during those early classes, though I don't recall the exact grade.
How do you improve your typing?
Puntuación: 55.0Sugerencia: 回答应包含具体改进方法而非仅表达困难。先简短描述现状,再提供具体计划或已采取的措施(如练习软件、在线课程、定时练习等)。同时纠正语法(e.g., it's hard for me; I use two fingers; I feel pressured)。
Ejemplo: My typing is currently slow because I use only two fingers, so I'm working on improving it. For example, I practice with online typing programs for 20 minutes a day and follow touch-typing lessons to build speed and accuracy, which helps reduce my anxiety when using the laptop.
× I prefer handwriting 'cause as a university student I need memory a lot of things, you know how to make a 3D models and some important things about my reports.
✓ I prefer handwriting because, as a university student, I need to remember a lot of things, like how to make 3D models and other important points for my reports.
问题类型:句子结构错误。错误原因:原句中短语次序混乱,动词使用错误(用“memory”作动词不正确),名词单复数错误(“a 3D models”混用冠词和复数),并且缺少逗号使从句不清晰。改进建议:将句子分成清晰的部分,使用正确动词 remember,去掉多余冠词并使名词单复数一致,使用逗号分隔插入语。
× MMM yeah definitely laptop because it's very convenient I can bring in my laptop, I everywhere and uh for me laptop keyboard uh is smaller than you know, com uh desktop desktop, so I use it every day but.
✓ Mm, yeah — definitely a laptop, because it's very convenient. I can bring my laptop everywhere, and for me the laptop keyboard is smaller than a desktop's, so I use it every day.
问题类型:人称代词及指示词使用错误。错误原因:原句代词和指示词混乱('I everywhere'缺少动词,重复词,缺少冠词和所有格,句子断裂)。改进建议:增加漏掉的动词(bring my laptop everywhere),使用冠词(a laptop)或所有格(a desktop's),简化重复并用标点分隔句子使意思明确。
× Yeah, maybe my primary school 'cause in China we, uh, had to learn how to type in words in computer.
✓ Yeah, maybe in primary school, because in China we had to learn how to type words on a computer.
问题类型:过去时使用问题。错误原因:介词和短语顺序不正确(应该是 'type words on a computer' 而不是 'type in words in computer'),此外缺少介词 'in' 的正确使用场景。改进建议:将时间状语放在合适位置,使用正确介词 'on a computer',保持过去时 had to。
× But, umm, actually I can't remember very clearly, maybe in my primary school or secondary school.
✓ But actually I can't remember very clearly — maybe primary school or secondary school.
问题类型:时态问题(表达回忆的时态一致性)。错误原因:句中先用过去时背景,接着用现在时 can't remember 表达当前记忆状态可接受,但原句中 'in my primary school' 的介词冗余且词序不自然。改进建议:去掉多余冠词和介词,使短语更地道: 'maybe primary school or secondary school'。
× Well it's very hard to me because my typing is so slow.
✓ Well, it's very hard for me because my typing is so slow.
问题类型:动词/介词搭配错误(Verb + -ing form/介词使用)。错误原因:短语 'hard to me' 搭配错误,应为 'hard for me'。改进建议:记住固定搭配 'hard for someone',因此改为 'hard for me'。
× Just just use my 2 fingers to type in words.
✓ I just use two fingers to type words.
问题类型:句子结构错误。错误原因:主语缺失(原句省略了 'I'),数字写法口语化('2' 改为 two),介词使用多余('type in words' 应为 'type words' 或 'type on the keyboard')。改进建议:补完整主语,使用文字形式的数字,并省略不必要的介词。
× So I really don't like typing on my laptop.
✓ So I really don't like typing on my laptop.
问题类型:现在时问题(确认正确或不需要修改)。错误原因:此句时态和用法正确,无需更改。建议:保持原句。
× Uh, actually every time when I using my laptop I feel so pressure.
✓ Uh, actually every time when I'm using my laptop, I feel so much pressure.
问题类型:现在进行时(present participle)和形容词/副词使用错误。错误原因:缺少助动词 'am'('when I using' 应为 'when I'm using'),'feel so pressure' 中 'pressure' 是不可数名词,应用副词修饰 'so' 后加 'much' 或改为 'feel so pressured'。改进建议:使用正确的进行时结构 'I'm using',并用 'so much pressure' 或形容词 'so pressured'。