Typing— Part 1 Informe

Sugerencia: Be more concise and natural: start with a clear topic sentence, then give one or two specific reasons using linking words. Reduce hesitations and avoid repeating words.

Ejemplo: I prefer typing to handwriting because it allows me to edit easily and correct mistakes quickly. For example, when I write reports I can rearrange sentences and use formatting like bold to highlight key points.

Sugerencia: Use a direct topic sentence and improve grammar and fluency. Remove filler words, correct tense and word choice, and add a brief reason using a linking word.

Ejemplo: I use a desktop keyboard every day at work because there is no laptop available. As a result, I find the desktop comfortable and efficient for long typing sessions.

Sugerencia: Start with a clear time reference and avoid fillers. Use past simple or present perfect correctly, and give one specific detail about what you learned using a linking word.

Ejemplo: I learned to type when I joined computer classes a few years ago. There, my tutor taught me proper hand positioning and exercises to gradually increase my typing speed.

Sugerencia: Give a clear, concise answer with specific methods and sequencing words. Use consistent tense and eliminate repetitions and fillers.

Ejemplo: I improve my typing by practicing daily and using passages of varying difficulty. For instance, I start with easy texts, then move to medium and difficult paragraphs, and I track my speed and accuracy to measure progress.

× I prefer typing instead of writing because, uh, in typing we can erase the text and we can uh, recorrect our mistakes of typing and also we can edit in the uh, paragraph, we can make it bold.

✓ I prefer typing to writing because when typing we can erase text and correct our typing mistakes, and we can also edit a paragraph and make text bold.

Incorrect prepositions and phrasing: 'prefer typing instead of writing' is acceptable but 'prefer typing to writing' is more idiomatic (preposition choice). 'in typing' should be 'when typing' to indicate time/condition. 'recorrect our mistakes of typing' is incorrect: use 'correct our typing mistakes'. 'edit in the paragraph' is wrong preposition; use 'edit a paragraph'. Suggestions: use 'prefer X to Y', use 'when' for activities, and place adjectives/nouns in natural order (e.g., 'typing mistakes').

× Actually, uh, I'm regularly used desktop keyboard every day, uh, in my office, uh, laptop is not available.

✓ Actually, I regularly use a desktop keyboard every day; in my office a laptop is not available.

Verb form error: 'I'm regularly used' incorrectly uses passive/continuous; the speaker intends simple present 'I use' for habitual action (third person singular rule not needed here but misuse of verb form). Also article missing: 'a desktop keyboard' and punctuation for clarity. Suggestions: use simple present 'I use' for routines and include articles before countable nouns.

× Uh, so I work on the desktop keyboard and it's very comfort and easy to work.

✓ So I work on the desktop keyboard and it's very comfortable and easy to use.

Wrong word forms: 'comfort' is a noun; the adjective is 'comfortable'. Also 'easy to work' is unnatural; use 'easy to use' for devices. Suggestions: choose correct adjective forms and pair verbs/phrases commonly used with objects (e.g., 'easy to use').

× Actually, uh, I have joined the computer, uh, learning classes and my tutor, uh, has told me uh, how to type and uh, how to make position of your hands on keyboards and how to increase your speed at typing.

✓ I joined computer classes and my tutor taught me how to type, how to position my hands on the keyboard, and how to increase my typing speed.

Tense and form issues: 'I have joined' suggests present perfect but a simple past 'I joined' is more natural if referring to a past completed action. 'has told me' should be simple past 'taught me' for a completed teaching event. Phrasing errors: 'make position of your hands on keyboards' is incorrect; use 'position my hands on the keyboard'. 'speed at typing' should be 'typing speed'. Suggestions: use simple past for completed past events, use correct verbs ('teach' -> 'taught'), and use natural noun phrases ('typing speed').

× I had practice a lot every day of typing and I have used different types of paragraphs and essays to type and uh different, different uh, uh, practices, uh, of paragraphs I have tried such as difficult, medium, and easier paragraphs.

✓ I practiced a lot every day and used different types of paragraphs and essays to type; I tried practice passages of varying difficulty, such as difficult, medium, and easy paragraphs.

Incorrect verb tenses and forms: 'I had practice' is wrong; use simple past 'I practiced' for habitual past action. Mixing 'I have used' with past narrative is inconsistent; use simple past 'used'. Repetitive and awkward phrasing 'different, different ... practices of paragraphs' should be condensed. Comparative form 'easier paragraphs' is awkward in the list; use 'easy'. Suggestions: maintain consistent past tense when describing past routines, use correct verb forms ('practice'->'practiced'), and simplify redundant phrasing.