Part 1
Examinador
Do you prefer typing or handwriting?
Candidato
I prefer typing because handwriting is time more time consuming than typing. Typing is beneficial for us to deduce time to write something.
Examinador
Do you type on a desktop or laptop keyboard every day?
Candidato
Yes, when I send emails I use umm keyboards every day on my laptop. e-mail is very beneficial way to communicate with others anytime, anywhere and also keyboard is very useful practice to do so.
Examinador
When did you learn how to type on a keyboard?
Candidato
When I became a university student, I gradually learned how to use keyboard or type something because in my college there were a lot of paper tasks to hand on.
Examinador
How do you improve your typing?
Candidato
As I said before, I learned about typing when I was in college. Because there were a lot of written tasks and I have to deal with a lot of tasks in uh yeah, quickly.
Do you prefer typing or handwriting?
Puntuación: 60.0Sugerencia: 回答は直接的だが不自然な表現や繰り返しがある。文法ミス("time more time consuming"、"deduce time")を修正し、1〜3文で明確に理由と具体例を述べると良い。接続詞(because, so, therefore)を使って論理的につなげ、語彙は "prefer" に続く具体的な利点(faster, more editable, easier to share)を挙げると効果的。発音が不明瞭だった場合はゆっくりはっきり話す練習を。
Ejemplo: I prefer typing to handwriting because it is much faster and easier to edit. For example, when I write essays on my laptop I can quickly correct mistakes and rearrange sentences, which saves me a lot of time.
Do you type on a desktop or laptop keyboard every day?
Puntuación: 55.0Sugerencia: 答えは肯定しているが冗長で曖昧な表現("umm keyboards"、"very beneficial way"、"useful practice to do so")がある。まず簡潔に "Yes, I use my laptop keyboard daily" と述べ、続けて具体例(emails, reports, messaging)を1文で付け加える。接続詞(because, for example)を用いて理由を明確にし、冗長表現を避ける。
Ejemplo: Yes, I use my laptop keyboard every day because I often type emails and reports. For example, I usually write several emails each morning to coordinate with my classmates and professors.
When did you learn how to type on a keyboard?
Puntuación: 65.0Sugerencia: 回答は時制と語順がほぼ適切だが、表現がやや不自然("use keyboard or type something"、"paper tasks to hand on")。"When I started university" など自然な導入を使い、学んだ方法や期間(self-practice, courses)を具体的に説明すると良い。接続表現(as, because, so)で理由を明確にすること。
Ejemplo: I learned to type when I started university because I had to submit many assignments online. I practiced daily and gradually became faster over the first year.
How do you improve your typing?
Puntuación: 50.0Sugerencia: 答えが繰り返しと断片的な文で構成されており、改善方法(具体的な練習方法や頻度)が示されていない。質問は現在の改善方法を問うているので、現在行っている練習(タイピングソフト、毎日練習する時間、正確さを意識するなど)を明確に述べる。短い文で理由と具体例を加え、つなぎ語(so, therefore, by doing this)を使うと論理的になる。発話のフィラー(uh, umm)は減らす。
Ejemplo: I improve my typing by practicing for 20 minutes each day with online typing programs that track speed and accuracy. By doing this regularly, I have increased my words-per-minute and reduced mistakes.
× I prefer typing because handwriting is time more time consuming than typing.
✓ I prefer typing because handwriting is more time-consuming than typing.
The phrase 'time more time consuming' is ungrammatical. Use the adverb 'more' with the compound adjective 'time-consuming' to compare two activities. Hyphenate 'time-consuming' when used as a modifier before a noun. Suggestion: 'handwriting is more time-consuming than typing.'
× Typing is beneficial for us to deduce time to write something.
✓ Typing helps us save time when writing.
The original sentence uses 'deduce' incorrectly and has awkward structure. 'Deduce' means infer, not save. Use a clear verb phrase 'helps us save time' and 'when writing' to express purpose. Suggestion: 'Typing helps us save time when writing.'
× Yes, when I send emails I use umm keyboards every day on my laptop.
✓ Yes, when I send emails I use the keyboard on my laptop every day.
Using plural 'keyboards' with 'my laptop' is inconsistent; singular 'the keyboard' matches the single laptop. Also place 'every day' at the end for natural word order and remove filler 'umm'. Suggestion: 'I use the keyboard on my laptop every day.'
× e-mail is very beneficial way to communicate with others anytime, anywhere and also keyboard is very useful practice to do so.
✓ Email is a very useful way to communicate with others anytime and anywhere, and the keyboard is also useful for doing this.
Errors: missing article before 'very useful way', inconsistent capitalization, and awkward phrases 'useful practice to do so'. Use 'a very useful way' and 'the keyboard' with 'for doing this'. Also combine 'anytime, anywhere' with 'and'. Suggestion: 'Email is a very useful way to communicate with others anytime and anywhere, and the keyboard is also useful for doing this.'
× When I became a university student, I gradually learned how to use keyboard or type something because in my college there were a lot of paper tasks to hand on.
✓ When I became a university student, I gradually learned how to use the keyboard and type because my college assigned a lot of paper tasks.
Missing article 'the' before 'keyboard', awkward 'type something', and 'to hand on' is incorrect. Use 'assign' for tasks given by college. Maintain past tense. Suggestion: 'I gradually learned how to use the keyboard and type because my college assigned a lot of paper tasks.'
× As I said before, I learned about typing when I was in college. Because there were a lot of written tasks and I have to deal with a lot of tasks in uh yeah, quickly.
✓ As I said before, I learned to type in college because there were a lot of written tasks and I had to deal with them quickly.
Fragment: sentence starts with 'Because' producing a sentence fragment; combine into one sentence. Use past tense 'had to' to match 'learned' and replace redundant phrases 'a lot of tasks' with 'them'. Remove fillers 'uh yeah'. Suggestion: 'I learned to type in college because there were a lot of written tasks and I had to deal with them quickly.'