Typing— Part 1 Informe

Sugerencia: Be more concise and structured. Start with a clear topic sentence stating your preference, then give one or two specific reasons with linking words. Reduce filler words (um, uh) and avoid repetition. Also correct minor grammar (e.g., "handwriting is more expressive" instead of "handwriting A handwriting").

Ejemplo: I prefer handwriting to typing because it helps me express my thoughts more creatively. For example, when I keep a journal I can draw and vary my handwriting, which makes my writing feel more personal and reflective.

Sugerencia: Give a direct answer, then add one or two clear details using linking words. Avoid vague phrases like "doing my online" and fillers. Use correct noun forms (paperwork) and combine similar ideas to avoid repetition.

Ejemplo: Yes, I type on both a desktop and a laptop every day because my job requires a lot of online communication. For instance, I write reports and answer emails, so I spend several hours daily at the keyboard.

Sugerencia: This answer is clear but can be improved by polishing grammar and adding a short reason or a specific memory. Remove fillers and replace informal phrases like "very techie" with clearer expressions such as "technologically advanced."

Ejemplo: I learned to type at about five years old; my father taught me because he wanted us to be comfortable with technology. I remember practicing simple games and exercises together, which made learning fun.

Sugerencia: Structure the answer: state methods then give a brief result. Remove repetition and fillers. Use precise verbs (practice, track progress) and mention frequency or a specific tool for credibility.

Ejemplo: I improve my typing by practicing regularly and using online typing tests to track my progress. For example, I do 20-minute typing exercises three times a week and check my words-per-minute score to see improvements.

× I prefer handwriting but obviously I'm doing typing because of my work.

✓ I prefer handwriting but obviously I'm typing because of my work.

The phrase 'doing typing' is unnatural; use the verb 'type' or the progressive 'I'm typing'. Remove the article 'doing' before 'typing'. Use 'I'm typing' to match present continuous action.

× But handwriting A handwriting it makes me more expressive doing my journals.

✓ But handwriting makes me more expressive when I write in my journal.

The original repeats 'handwriting' and has unclear structure. Remove repetition and use 'when I write in my journal' for clarity and correct verb phrase. 'Doing my journals' is incorrect; use 'write in my journal' or 'write my journal entries.'

× Umm. It is more OK to express.

✓ It is better for expressing myself.

'More OK' is ungrammatical and vague. Use comparative 'better' and a gerund phrase 'for expressing myself' to show purpose and include the reflexive pronoun for clarity.

× Yes, I do type on a desktop or and a laptop keyboard every day because of my work.

✓ Yes, I type on a desktop or a laptop keyboard every day because of my work.

The phrase 'or and a' is redundant. Use 'or a' and the auxiliary 'do' is unnecessary in affirmative present simple; 'I type' is more natural.

× That's the main thing I do at work.

✓ That's the main thing I do at work.

This sentence is grammatically acceptable; no article change needed. Included here to indicate it is correct and requires no correction.

× Hmm typing a lot of umm paperworks and just doing my online.

✓ I type a lot of paperwork and do my work online.

'Paperworks' is incorrect; 'paperwork' is an uncountable noun. 'Doing my online' is incomplete; replace with 'do my work online' to make a complete, natural sentence.

× At the age of five, I learned how to type on a keyboard and my father taught me how to use it because it's very techie and he doesn't want us to be left out.

✓ At the age of five, I learned how to type on a keyboard; my father taught me because he is very into technology and didn't want us to be left out.

Mixes past and present awkwardly. 'It's very techie' is informal and unclear; use 'is very into technology.' Match tenses: learning and teaching happened in the past, so 'didn't want us to be left out' is appropriate. Keep some present for father's interest if intended: 'he is very into technology' is acceptable.

× I improved my writing by memorizing all the keys and by, umm, using a typing test online so that I know that I, I am progressing with what I I am doing and, uh, just enjoying what to do.

✓ I improved my typing by memorizing all the keys and by using online typing tests so that I can see I am progressing and enjoying it.

Use 'typing' instead of 'writing' when referring to keyboard skill. 'Typing test online' should be 'online typing tests' for natural word order and agreement. Replace 'so that I know that I, I am progressing with what I I am doing' with 'so that I can see I am progressing' for clarity and correct modal use. Remove stuttering and redundant words.