Part 1
Examinador
Do you prefer typing or handwriting?
Candidato
I prefer handwriting because we can't type at school, especially in some exams.
Examinador
Do you type on a desktop or laptop keyboard every day?
Candidato
I type on a laptop because laptop is more convenient. So I actually don't buy a desktop. A laptop is enough for me.
Examinador
When did you learn how to type on a keyboard?
Candidato
About six years old at school. To be honest, I can't still type right now, but just my science teacher, technology teacher taught me before.
Examinador
How do you improve your typing?
Candidato
Wow that's a good question. I am practicing typing right now. I type accountant every day and just type it in English and type it in Chinese. I Ji Shi.
Do you prefer typing or handwriting?
Puntuación: 60.0Sugerencia: 回答直接,但不够自然和详尽。建议:用一句话直接回答偏好,然后补充一至两句具体原因或场景,使用连接词使表达更连贯。例如说明为什么考试不能打字、以及你因此更习惯手写。注意句子数量控制在5句内,避免重复“can't type”。
Ejemplo: I prefer handwriting because in my school most exams require written answers. For example, final tests and in-class quizzes are all handwritten, so I'm more used to writing by hand. Because of that, I feel more comfortable organizing my thoughts on paper.
Do you type on a desktop or laptop keyboard every day?
Puntuación: 70.0Sugerencia: 回答清晰但稍显重复和非正式。建议:用一两句说清每天使用的设备及原因,使用连接词(because/so/therefore)并给出具体便利之处(如便携、长电池寿命)。避免口语化短句如“I don't buy a desktop”。
Ejemplo: I type on a laptop every day because it is more convenient and portable. For instance, I can easily take it to classes or cafés, and the battery lasts long enough for most of my tasks. Therefore I haven't needed to buy a desktop.
When did you learn how to type on a keyboard?
Puntuación: 50.0Sugerencia: 信息不够连贯且有语法错误。建议:先给出时间点,再说明学习场景和现在的技能水平,使用连接词(although/but)来对比。注意语法(例如“I still can't type well”)。尽量具体说明哪些技能不熟练(速度或准确性)。
Ejemplo: I started learning to type at school when I was about six years old, and it was taught during our computer classes. However, I still can't type very quickly or accurately, although I remember the basic finger positions from those lessons.
How do you improve your typing?
Puntuación: 45.0Sugerencia: 回答含糊、不够具体且有无关填充词(如“Wow”及中文碎片)。建议:直接说明改进方法,列举具体练习方式(练习软件、每天练习时长、练习内容如速度或准确性)并举例说明进步情况。去掉无关语言并保持句子连贯。
Ejemplo: I am improving my typing by practising for about 20 minutes each day using online typing tutors to increase speed and accuracy. For example, I practise common words and bilingual typing drills in both English and Chinese, and I track my words-per-minute to see gradual improvement.
× I prefer handwriting because we can't type at school, especially in some exams.
✓ I prefer handwriting because we can't type at school, especially in some exams.
原句语法本身没有明显的“there be”结构错误。但句子可接受,无需更改。
× I type on a laptop because laptop is more convenient.
✓ I type on a laptop because a laptop is more convenient.
在英文中,当泛指某类事物时,单数可数名词前需使用不定冠词“a/an”。原句缺少冠词,可能导致不自然。建议在可数名词前加冠词。
× So I actually don't buy a desktop.
✓ So I actually don't buy a desktop.
原句语法上可接受(现在时表示一般事实或习惯)。根据上下文也可以改为“I didn't buy a desktop”表示过去决定,但原句不违反主谓一致规则,因此不改。
× A laptop is enough for me.
✓ A laptop is enough for me.
句子语法正确,单复数使用恰当,无需更改。
× About six years old at school.
✓ I was about six years old at school.
缺少主语和谓语动词。描述过去年龄时应使用过去时并包含主语,例如“I was about six years old at school.” 建议补全主语和适当时态。
× To be honest, I can't still type right now, but just my science teacher, technology teacher taught me before.
✓ To be honest, I still can't type very well right now, but my science and technology teachers taught me before.
原句中“can't still”词序错误,且“just”用法不当,老师应使用复数或并列形式。应将副词“still”放在情态动词之后的助动词前(I still can't... 或 I can't ... still 不常用),并修正“science teacher, technology teacher”为“science and technology teachers”。此外“taught me before”可保留过去时。建议调整词序并复数化教师。
× I am practicing typing right now.
✓ I am practicing typing right now.
现在进行时使用正确,符合正在进行的动作,无需修改。
× I type accountant every day and just type it in English and type it in Chinese.
✓ I type the word "accountant" every day and type it in English and in Chinese.
动词后应接宾语,这里应为“the word 'accountant'”。另外表述语言时通常在“in English”前省略重复的“type”,但可保留并在中文前加介词“in”。建议明确宾语并规范介词用法。
× I Ji Shi.
✓ I mean, "ji shi" (actually).
原句“I Ji Shi.”缺乏语法结构且混用了中文拼音与英文句子,造成不完整。若想表达“即是”或“其实”,建议使用英语短语如“I mean”或“actually”,并把中文解释放在引号内或翻译为英文。