Typing— Part 1 Informe

Sugerencia: Говорите более ясно и структурированно: начните с прямого утверждения, затем приведите 1–2 конкретные причины, используя связки (for example, because, however). Избегайте повторов и лишних слов, исправьте ошибки (например, «photo typing» неуместно). Максимальная длина ответа — до 5 предложений.

Ejemplo: I prefer typing to handwriting because I type frequently when chatting with friends and practising English. However, I also value handwriting since writing notes at school helps me remember information better. For these reasons, I use both methods depending on the task.

Sugerencia: Сделайте ответ прямым и завершённым: сначала скажите, что вы обычно используете, затем объясните причину с связкой (because/so). Избегайте незаконченных фраз и повторов; используйте корректную грамматику (например, «practice exercises»).

Ejemplo: I usually type on my phone, but when I study English I use my iPad because its larger screen and keyboard make it easier to write longer notes and practice exercises. So for short messages I use my phone, and for studying I prefer the iPad.

Sugerencia: Начните с чёткого указания времени (e.g., as a child/in primary school), затем приведите последовательность действий как причины улучшения. Избегайте слов-ошибок («temperature lessons» — неверно) и используйте множественное число/формы (typing exercises).

Ejemplo: I learned to type as a child in primary school, where we had regular typing lessons and practice. Since then I have improved by practising every day while studying English, doing typing exercises and writing essays on the computer.

Sugerencia: Дайте последовательный план: скажите, какие методы вы используете и как часто, используя связки (for example, by, so, therefore). Избегайте пауз «uh» и грамматических ошибок (например, «when I bought iPad» → «since I bought an iPad»).

Ejemplo: Since I bought an iPad, I have improved my typing by practising every day: I write essays, complete online typing exercises and use typing apps to increase my speed and accuracy.

× I prefer photo typing because I'm already typing with my friends in chat or when I learned English I am always typing.

✓ I prefer photo typing because I already type with my friends in chat, and when I am learning English I am always typing.

The original mixes tenses and verb forms incorrectly. Use 'I already type' (simple present) for habitual actions and 'when I am learning English I am always typing' for ongoing activity; ensure subject-verb agreement and consistent tense usage. Suggestions: Use simple present for routines and present continuous for ongoing actions, keep structure parallel.

× But I but also I like handwriting some because at school I usually write by hand and it helps me remember things better.

✓ But I also like handwriting because at school I usually write by hand and it helps me remember things better.

Redundant conjunction 'but' and misplaced 'some' create ungrammatical structure. Remove the extra 'but' and 'some' and use 'also' to connect contrasting ideas. Suggestions: Avoid duplicating conjunctions and place adverbs like 'also' before the main verb.

× No, I usually use my phone but when I study English I type on my iPad.

✓ No, I usually use my phone, but when I study English I type on my iPad.

Missing comma between independent clauses affects clarity. Add a comma before the coordinating conjunction 'but' joining two independent clauses. Suggestions: Use commas to separate independent clauses joined by coordinating conjunctions.

× The larger screen and the keyboard and on the iPad make it easier to write longer notes and practice exercise.

✓ The larger screen and the keyboard on the iPad make it easier to write longer notes and practice exercises.

Extra 'and' is incorrect and 'exercise' should be plural for general activities. Remove the extra 'and', place 'on the iPad' correctly, and pluralize 'exercises'. Suggestions: Ensure modifiers attach to the correct noun and use plural for countable plural activities.

× Actually I every day use my phone and I.

✓ Actually, I use my phone every day.

Sentence contains redundancy and incorrect word order. Remove the extraneous 'and I' and place 'every day' after the verb 'use'. Add a comma after 'Actually' for natural rhythm. Suggestions: Keep sentences concise and follow normal adverb placement: subject + verb + adverb.

× I learned to type when I was a child in temperature lessons at school, where we practiced typing regularly.

✓ I learned to type when I was a child in computer lessons at school, where we practiced typing regularly.

Likely typo 'temperature' should be 'computer'. Past tense 'learned' is correct; only word choice needed correction. Suggestions: Check for incorrect words that change meaning; ensure vocabulary fits context.

× After that, I continued to improve by practicing every day while studying English, doing typing exercise, and writing essays on the computer.

✓ After that, I continued to improve by practicing every day while studying English, doing typing exercises, and writing essays on the computer.

Parallel gerund forms are correct, but 'exercise' should be plural 'exercises' to match countable activities and parallel structure. Suggestions: Maintain parallel gerund phrases and use plural for countable nouns in lists.

× I improve my typing when I bought iPad, uh, because I'm every day learning English and uh, I often write essays by keyboard.

✓ I improved my typing when I bought an iPad because I learn English every day and I often write essays using the keyboard.

Mixed tenses: 'I improve' with past event 'bought' is inconsistent. Use past 'improved' to refer to the moment of purchase. Add article 'an' before 'iPad' and prefer 'using the keyboard' for natural phrasing. 'I'm every day learning' is ungrammatical; 'I learn every day' or 'I study every day' is better. Suggestions: Keep tense consistent when referring to past events; include articles before singular nouns and use natural adverb placement.