Typing— Part 1 Informe

Sugerencia: Be more concise and fluent: start with a clear topic sentence, avoid filler words (uh, um), and give two specific reasons with linking words. Use more precise vocabulary (e.g., "auto-correct," "editing," "reorganize"). Aim for 2–4 sentences.

Ejemplo: I prefer typing rather than handwriting because it is faster and the auto-correct feature reduces spelling and grammar mistakes. Furthermore, typing makes editing and reorganising text much easier, which is helpful when drafting reports or essays.

Sugerencia: Provide a clear direct answer first, correct grammar and avoid repetition. Use linking words to explain reasons and give one specific example (e.g., commuting, meetings). Keep it within 2–4 sentences.

Ejemplo: I usually type on a laptop every day because my company provided one for official work. It is more convenient than a desktop since I can carry it to meetings or work from home, making my workflow much more flexible.

Sugerencia: Answer directly with a clear time expression, correct grammar, and avoid unnecessary repetition. Use linking words to describe where and how you learned and give one specific detail (e.g., course, practice exercises).

Ejemplo: I learned to type during my school days when we had a computer class that taught touch typing. In that class we practised on QWERTY keyboards with timed exercises, which helped me become faster and more accurate.

Sugerencia: Give a concise strategy with specific methods and correct common phrases. Start with a topic sentence, then list 1–2 concrete ways you practise (timed tests, typing software, regular tasks) and mention results. Avoid clichéd expressions like "practice makes a man perfect."

Ejemplo: I improve my typing mainly through regular practice: I use online typing tests to track my speed and accuracy, and I practise daily by preparing reports and spreadsheets at work. Over time this routine has increased my speed and reduced my errors.

× I prefer typing on a laptop or a desktop because it, uh, helps me to auto correct my spelling mistakes or grammatical mistakes or something like that, and also which uh, makes me, uh, write faster and more efficient.

✓ I prefer typing on a laptop or a desktop because it helps me auto-correct my spelling and grammar mistakes, and it also makes me write faster and more efficiently.

The original sentence uses unclear pronoun references ('which' and 'it' used incorrectly) and redundant phrasing. Replace 'which' with 'it' to refer to typing, remove filler words, and use parallel noun phrases ('spelling and grammar mistakes'). Use the adverb 'efficiently' to modify 'write'. Use hyphen in 'auto-correct'. ID:12

× It is also easier to edit and to reorganize the text on screen to somewhere where we actually want the text.

✓ It is also easier to edit and reorganize the text on the screen to the place where we actually want it.

Missing definite article before 'screen' and awkward phrasing. Use 'the screen' for a specific screen and replace 'somewhere where we actually want the text' with 'the place where we actually want it' to avoid repetition and improve clarity. ID:17

× I used to type on a laptop keyboard every day because in my company I was given with an laptop 2 for my official work.

✓ I used to type on a laptop keyboard every day because my company gave me a laptop for my official work.

Incorrect passive construction 'was given with an laptop 2' and article error. Use active voice 'my company gave me a laptop'. Use 'a laptop' (not 'an laptop') and remove extraneous '2'. ID:9

× So it is actually easy and efficient way to type in an laptop than in a desktop because laptop it is easily accessible and flexible.

✓ So it is actually an easier and more efficient way to type on a laptop than on a desktop because a laptop is easily accessible and flexible.

Missing and incorrect articles ('an laptop' incorrect), comparative structure needs 'easier' and 'more efficient'. Preposition should be 'on a laptop'/'on a desktop'. Also need article before second 'laptop' and remove extra pronoun placement. ID:22

× We can take anywhere we want, sit and work.

✓ We can take it anywhere we want, sit down, and work.

Object 'it' (the laptop) was omitted; add 'it'. Add 'down' after 'sit' for natural phrasing and include commas for list structure. ID:26

× When did you learn how to type on a keyboard? I learned to type on a keyboard from my during my school days because there we had a special computer class and every individual is given within computer.

✓ I learned to type on a keyboard during my school days because we had a special computer class and each student was given access to a computer.

Remove extraneous 'from my', correct tense and voice: 'every individual is given within computer' is ungrammatical. Use past tense passive 'was given' and 'each student' for clarity. ID:5

× So that is where I first practiced with the kwarty layout which makes me type more faster and more efficient and it also autocorrect sometimes so I used it learned in my school days.

✓ That is where I first practiced with the QWERTY layout, which helped me type faster and more efficiently, and it also sometimes autocorrected, so I learned to use it in my school days.

Use correct term 'QWERTY', remove double comparative 'more faster' (should be 'faster'), use adverb 'efficiently'. Verb tense consistency: 'helped' and 'autocorrected' in past. Rephrase final clause to 'learned to use it'. ID:13

× I would say practice makes a man more perfect because everything what we do needs more practice so that you eventually improve even when you start from scratch.

✓ I would say practice makes a person better because everything we do needs practice so that you eventually improve even when you start from scratch.

Avoid gendered idiom 'makes a man more perfect' and awkward 'what we do'. Use 'practice makes a person better' and remove redundant 'more' before 'practice'. ID:4

× So in my office I used to type everything in Excel or Microsoft and day by day I improve my typing skills.

✓ In my office I used to type everything in Excel or Microsoft Word, and day by day I improved my typing skills.

Maintain past tense consistency: 'used to' indicates habitual past, so follow with 'improved' rather than 'improve'. Specify 'Microsoft Word'. ID:5