Typing— Part 1 Informe

Sugerencia: Be more concise and natural: start with a clear topic sentence, avoid fillers (uh, umm), correct grammar (easier, on paper), and add one specific reason or brief example. Keep answers to max 3–4 sentences and use a linking word for coherence.

Ejemplo: I prefer typing to handwriting because it is faster and more convenient. For example, when I write essays on my laptop I can edit quickly and send them by email. Also, typed text is easier to read than handwritten notes.

Sugerencia: Improve grammar and conciseness: use a clear topic sentence, correct collocations (daily, for study and work), remove repetition, and finish your thought. Add one specific detail about the type of tasks you do and use a linking word.

Ejemplo: I usually type on my laptop every day because I use it for both study and work. For instance, I write essays, prepare presentations, and answer emails on it, which saves me a lot of time.

Sugerencia: Remove fillers and simplify structure: open with a direct time reference, use correct verb forms (we joined an extra computer class), and give one specific detail (age or grade). Keep to 2–3 clear sentences with a linking word if needed.

Ejemplo: I learned to type at school when I was about 10 years old. We joined an extra computer class where we practiced touch-typing and basic computer skills, and I improved gradually through regular practice.

Sugerencia: Be specific and use correct tense and phrasing: start with a topic sentence, explain methods you used to improve (practice, online courses, exercises), and include a linking word. Avoid repetition and fillers.

Ejemplo: I improved my typing mainly through daily practice on my laptop, especially during college when I had to type many assignments. In addition, I used online typing exercises to increase accuracy and speed, which helped a lot.

× it's more easy and convenient to type.

✓ it's easier and more convenient to type.

Use comparative form 'easier' instead of 'more easy'; 'more convenient' is correct. When comparing adjectives, short adjectives typically take -er; use parallel structure for clarity.

× rather than writing in the paper,

✓ rather than writing on paper,

Use 'on paper' not 'in the paper' for the medium of writing. 'In the paper' would imply inside a specific newspaper or document.

× do you type on a desktop or laptop keyboard every day?

✓ do you type on a desktop or a laptop keyboard every day?

When presenting alternatives with countable singular nouns, include the indefinite article 'a' before the second noun for parallelism: 'a desktop or a laptop keyboard' or 'a desktop or laptop keyboard'.

× In my everyday basis, I usually type on my laptop as I use it for my studies and work purpose.

✓ On a daily basis, I usually type on my laptop because I use it for my studies and work.

Replace incorrect phrase 'in my everyday basis' with 'on a daily basis'. 'Work purpose' is unnatural; use 'work' or 'work purposes'. Rephrase for natural English and correct preposition use.

× I have to complete all of my assignments and work duties on laptop by typing various kinds of documents on it and it has made my life much.

✓ I have to complete all of my assignments and work duties on my laptop by typing various documents, and it has made my life much easier.

Add the possessive 'my' before 'laptop'. 'Various kinds of documents' can be simplified to 'various documents'. Finish the comparative thought with 'much easier'.

× When did you learn how to type on a keyboard?

✓ When did you learn how to type on a keyboard?

This question is already grammatically correct in past tense; no change needed. (Included for completeness.)

× I vividly remember that, uh, the first time when I learned typing was when I, when in school, umm, uh, we had join an extra class for computer to learn typing skills and some other basic computer knowledge.

✓ I vividly remember that the first time I learned to type was in school when we joined an extra computer class to learn typing skills and other basic computer knowledge.

Use 'learned to type' not 'learned typing'. Remove redundant 'when' and filler words. Use past tense 'joined' not 'had join'. 'An extra class for computer' should be 'an extra computer class'.

× And that's how I learned typing and eventually with time, umm, my time.

✓ And that's how I learned to type, and eventually over time I improved.

Use 'learned to type' instead of 'learned typing'. The original ends abruptly; complete the idea with 'I improved' and use 'over time'.

× My typing was improved when I kept on using more and more laptops on my day day-to-day tasks.

✓ My typing improved when I kept using laptops more and more for my day-to-day tasks.

Use active form 'My typing improved' rather than passive 'was improved'. Remove duplicate 'day day-to-day' and correct preposition: 'for my day-to-day tasks'.

× When I joined uh college, I had to finish all my assignments on laptop.

✓ When I joined college, I had to finish all my assignments on my laptop.

Remove filler 'uh'. Add possessive 'my' before 'laptop' for clarity. Structure is past tense so 'had to finish' is correct.

× That's how I got used to typing and it get faster.

✓ That's how I got used to typing and it got faster.

Maintain past tense throughout: use 'got' for both clauses. 'It get faster' is incorrect verb form; use 'it got faster' or 'my typing became faster'.