Typing— Part 1 Informe

Sugerencia: 主要问题是含糊不清和填充词过多（umm, uh），句子表达不准确（“by pain” 用词错误）。建议练习用清晰的主题句直接回答，并用1-2个具体理由和一个简短例子支撑。去掉多余的停顿词，注意词汇准确性（例如用“by hand”或“in a notebook”而不是“by pain”）。

Ejemplo: I prefer handwriting. It helps me express my feelings more naturally, and I like keeping handwritten notes because they feel more personal. For example, I write a diary to remember special moments.

Sugerencia: 回答逻辑有些混乱（先否定再说明实际上用手机），并且有很多停顿词。建议开始用直接句子表明事实，然后给出简短理由和频率说明；注意主谓一致和单复数（my phone/s）。

Ejemplo: I don't usually type on a desktop or laptop. I mostly type on my phone because I use messaging apps every day, so I tap messages and emails on my phone.

Sugerencia: 这部分非常不清晰，时间信息混乱且语法错误多。建议直接给出年龄或时间点（例如“when I was 12”），并用简短的背景句说明在学校首次接触电脑课。避免长时间的停顿和不完整句。

Ejemplo: I learned to type when I was about twelve. It was during my first computer class at school, where the teacher taught us basic keyboard skills.

Sugerencia: 答案含糊且重复（“I I”, “finish finish”），缺少具体改进方法。建议说明具体练习方法（如使用打字练习软件、练习正确指法或每周练习时间），并用一两句说明效果。

Ejemplo: I improve my typing by practising regularly on typing websites and doing assignments on my laptop. For example, I spend 20 minutes three times a week on typing exercises, which has increased my speed and accuracy.

× Actually, I prefer, umm, handwriting because, umm, I think if I want to express my feelings, I like to record some, uh, some memories by pain.

✓ Actually, I prefer handwriting because I think if I want to express my feelings, I like to record some memories in a diary.

句中使用了“by pain”是不正确的介词短语搭配。应使用“in a diary”或“in writing”等表达“通过写日记/写下来记录记忆”的意思。建议：用合适的介词短语（例如 in a diary / in writing / on paper）来表达“用写作记录”。

× Uh, no, why don't type on any laptop, But actually I type on my phone uh, because we always chat on some apps. So I, I just tap on my phones.

✓ Uh, no, I don't type on any laptop. Actually I type on my phone because we always chat on some apps. So I just tap on my phone.

原句中有代词和主谓结构错误（"why don't type" 和 "phones" 的复数不当）。应为“I don't type on any laptop”。“phones”应为单数“phone”与前文一致。建议：注意主语与助动词的完整出现（I don't），以及名词单复数与上下文一致。

× Looking back, umm, maybe I just, uh, turn years old, uh, like, uh, I'm on the street ground. It's the first time I have a computer class, so that's my 1st 20, uh, type on keyboard.

✓ Looking back, maybe I was about twenty years old. I was on campus when I had my first computer class, so that was the first time I typed on a keyboard.

原句结构混乱，时态和词语搭配不正确（例如“turn years old”“I'm on the street ground”“my 1st 20”）。改为过去时描述过去经历：使用“was about twenty years old”、“had my first computer class”及“typed on a keyboard”。建议：描述过去经历时使用过去时，避免直译或含糊的短语，保证时间、地点和动作表达清晰。

× Usually I tap in on the keyboard. I I have a laptop when I was in university, so I often type in the words of. I use the laptop to finish finish my assignment.

✓ Usually I tap on the keyboard. I had a laptop when I was at university, so I often typed my assignments on it.

原句中介词和时态使用错误：应说“tap on the keyboard”而不是“tap in on”；描述过去拥有应使用过去时“I had a laptop when I was at university”；“type in the words of”不自然，改为“typed my assignments on it”。另外去掉重复单词“finish finish”。建议：注意固定搭配（tap on / type on），保持时态一致，并用简洁自然的表达。