Typing— Part 1 Informe

Sugerencia: 문장 구조를 더 자연스럽게 정리하고 불필요한 반복을 줄이세요. 예를 들어 ‘smartphones and computer’ 대신 복수·단수 일치와 관사 사용을 교정하고, ‘keep write the diary’처럼 어색한 표현을 ‘write in my diary’로 바꾸세요. 또한 한두 개의 구체적 이유(속도, 편리함 등)를 연결어로 자연스럽게 연결하면 더 논리적으로 들립니다.

Ejemplo: I prefer typing to handwriting because I grew up using smartphones and computers, so typing feels faster and more convenient. I only handwrite occasionally when I write in my diary.

Sugerencia: 문법(전치사, 관사, 주어-동사 일치)을 바로잡고 문장을 간결하게 만드세요. 'because of I'm an office worker'는 잘못된 구조이므로 'because I am an office worker'로 수정하세요. 또한 예시를 나열할 때 연결어를 사용해 흐름을 부드럽게 만드세요.

Ejemplo: Yes. I use my laptop almost every day because I am an office worker and most tasks are computer-based. For example, I attend video meetings, write emails, and do some design work.

Sugerencia: 시제와 관사 사용을 수정하고 문장을 자연스럽게 연결하세요. 'when I was elementary school'는 'when I was in elementary school'로 고치고 'Basic computer was a compulsory curriculum'는 'basic computer classes were compulsory'처럼 가산·불가산 처리와 수일치를 맞추세요.

Ejemplo: I don't remember exactly when, but I learned to type when I was in elementary school. Basic computer classes were compulsory, and during those lessons I practiced typing.

Sugerencia: 대명사 순서와 어순을 고치고, 이유를 더 자연스럽게 표현하세요. 'me and my friend'는 'my friend and I'로 고쳐야 하며, 'because that at that time I had to win'은 어색하므로 'because I wanted to win'처럼 간결히 표현하세요. 또한 현재 개선 방법(연습, 온라인 타자 연습 등)을 추가해 내용을 풍부하게 하세요.

Ejemplo: In computer class, my friend and I used to have typing competitions, which helped me improve both speed and accuracy because I wanted to win. Now I also practice with online typing exercises to maintain my skills.

× I grew up using smartphones and computer, so typing is easier for me and feels more convenient.

✓ I grew up using smartphones and computers, so typing is easier for me and feels more convenient.

'computer' should be plural to match 'smartphones' and the general idea of using multiple devices; use 'computers'. Keep noun number consistent. Suggestion: Make nouns parallel and consistent: 'smartphones and computers'.

× I usually hand write only when I keep write the diary.

✓ I usually only handwrite when I keep a diary.

Use the single-word verb 'handwrite' rather than two words 'hand write'. 'keep write the diary' is ungrammatical: use 'keep a diary' to mean regularly writing a diary. Word order: 'usually only handwrite' or 'only usually handwrite'—place 'only' before the verb phrase for clarity. Suggestion: Use 'handwrite' and 'keep a diary'.

× Yes, I use the laptop almost every day because of I'm an office worker so almost every tasks are computer based.

✓ Yes, I use a laptop almost every day because I am an office worker, so almost every task is computer-based.

Do not use 'because of' followed by a clause; use 'because' + clause. 'the laptop' implies a specific device; 'a laptop' is more natural. 'almost every tasks' should be singular 'almost every task' and 'computer based' needs a hyphen as a compound adjective: 'computer-based'. Also 'I am' should be written as 'I am' not 'I'm' if keeping formal; contraction is acceptable but keep consistency. Suggestion: Use 'because I am', 'a laptop', 'almost every task', and hyphenate compound adjectives.

× Yes, I use the laptop almost every day because of I'm an office worker so almost every tasks are computer based. For example attending a video meeting, writing some emails and designing something.

✓ For example, attending video meetings, writing emails, and designing things.

List items should be parallel and plural where appropriate: 'attending video meetings' (plural), 'writing emails' (plural), 'designing things' or 'designing materials' is more natural than 'designing something'. Add commas for clarity and parallel structure. Suggestion: Make list items parallel and consistent in number and avoid vague 'something'.

× I don't remember exactly when, but I learned to type when I was elementary school.

✓ I don't remember exactly when, but I learned to type when I was in elementary school.

Use the preposition 'in' with 'elementary school' to indicate being at that level. 'when I was elementary school' is missing the preposition and sounds ungrammatical. Suggestion: Use 'in elementary school'.

× Basic computer was a compulsory curriculum and during that lessons I learned how to type.

✓ Basic computer was a compulsory course, and during those lessons I learned how to type.

'curriculum' refers to the overall set of courses; use 'course' for a single subject. 'during that lessons' is incorrect: match number and use 'those lessons'. Suggestion: Use 'course' and 'those lessons'.

× During my computer classes, me and my friend used to have typing competition.

✓ During my computer classes, my friend and I used to have typing competitions.

Subject pronoun order should be 'my friend and I', not 'me and my friend'. 'typing competition' should be plural 'typing competitions' to reflect repeated events. Add article or plural as appropriate. Suggestion: Use 'my friend and I' and pluralize if events were repeated.

× Those contests helped me improve both my speed and accuracy because that at that time I had to win.

✓ Those contests helped me improve both my speed and accuracy because at that time I had to win.

'because that at that time' is ungrammatical; use 'because at that time'. The extra 'that' is unnecessary and incorrect. Also reorder phrase to flow naturally. Suggestion: Remove extra 'that' and keep phrase 'because at that time I had to win'.