Part 1
Examinador
Do you prefer typing or handwriting?
Candidato
Well, actually I prefer typing because it is, uh, time consuming and uh, everyone can type if he or she has a phone. Uh, typing is uh.
Examinador
Do you type on a desktop or laptop keyboard every day?
Candidato
Well the situation will depend. If I work every day I will type on a desk or desktop or laptop keyboard every day. But now I I have I haven't I have no job. I usually type on my mobile phone every day.
Examinador
When did you learn how to type on a keyboard?
Candidato
Well, let me see. It's about in 2019. It's already, uh, seven years ago when I was first time to go to college. Uh, it is my first time to type in the on, on keyboard in the computer classroom. Uh, that's a really exhausting, uh, work.
Examinador
How do you improve your typing?
Candidato
Well, actually the way I improve my typing is to practice more. Uh, at first I practice very slow and hard because my practice very little, but with the time and practice more, I pray I type very fast.
Do you prefer typing or handwriting?
Puntuación: 40.0Sugerencia: 回答要直接且准确。首先纠正意思错误:若想表达“节省时间”应使用“time-saving”或“saves time”,不是“time consuming”。避免频繁使用“uh”和重复词。给出1-2个具体理由并用连词衔接,例如说方便、速度快或易于编辑。总长度控制在最多5句。
Ejemplo: I prefer typing because it saves time and is easier to edit. For example, I can quickly correct mistakes and rearrange sentences on a phone or computer. Also, typing is more convenient when I need to share notes with others.
Do you type on a desktop or laptop keyboard every day?
Puntuación: 50.0Sugerencia: 答案要更简洁并直接回答问题的常态(present habit)。避免语法错误和重复(如“I I have I haven't I have no job”)。使用连接词(however, but)来表明对比,并给出具体频率或场景。控制句子数并注意主谓一致。
Ejemplo: It depends on the situation: when I have a job I usually type on a desktop or laptop, but at the moment I’m unemployed so I type on my mobile phone every day. However, I still prefer a laptop for long documents because it’s more comfortable.
When did you learn how to type on a keyboard?
Puntuación: 45.0Sugerencia: 回答要时间表达准确并语法正确。避免自相矛盾(2019不是七年前如果当前是2026)。用简单句说明时间和场景,提供一两个细节(如学习方式或感受)。减少填充词“uh”。
Ejemplo: I learned to type on a keyboard when I first entered college in 2019, during computer classes. At that time I found typing tiring because I wasn’t used to the keyboard, but I improved with regular practice.
How do you improve your typing?
Puntuación: 50.0Sugerencia: 回答要更具体,说明具体方法(如每天练习多少分钟、使用哪些练习软件或练习内容)。修正词汇错误(如“pray”应为“now”或“gradually”)。使用连接词说明过程(at first… then… now…)。最多5句,避免重复。
Ejemplo: I improved my typing by practicing for 20 minutes every day using an online typing tutor. At first I was very slow, but after a few weeks of daily drills and focusing on accuracy, I gradually became much faster and more confident.
× Well, actually I prefer typing because it is, uh, time consuming and uh, everyone can type if he or she has a phone.
✓ Well, actually I prefer typing because it is time-saving, and everyone can type if they have a phone.
使用“time consuming”描述喜欢打字不合适,通常想表达“节省时间”应使用“time-saving”。另外“everyone”作为不定代词,常用单数they来避免冗长的“he or she”,在现代英语中是可接受的。建议:学会区分形容词短语的含义并使用合适的代词(使用they作泛指单数)。
× If I work every day I will type on a desk or desktop or laptop keyboard every day.
✓ If I work every day, I will type on a desktop or laptop keyboard every day.
原句中“desk or desktop or laptop keyboard”结构冗余且“desk keyboard”不自然,应为“desktop or laptop keyboard”。另外条件句主从句动词需一致,保留原句时态没错,但需加逗号以分隔条件状语。建议:简化并使用常见搭配“desktop or laptop”。
× But now I I haven't I have no job.
✓ But now I don't have a job.
原句多次重复且用法混乱。英语中表示现在没有工作应使用“don't have a job”。“haven't”通常与过去分词连用(现在完成时),单独用“haven't”后面需宾语或省略会造成不完整。建议:使用简单现在时否定形式“don't have”。
× It's about in 2019.
✓ It was around 2019.
英文中表示大约某年常用“around/in/around 2019”,但不能使用“about in”。同时考虑时间点已是过去,故应使用过去时“was”。建议:用“around 2019”或“in 2019”。
× It's already, uh, seven years ago when I was first time to go to college.
✓ It was seven years ago when I first went to college.
原句结构混乱且时态与词序错误。“It's already seven years ago”与“when I was first time to go to college”都不符合自然表达。应使用过去时“was seven years ago”并改为“when I first went to college”。建议:将时间状语置于主句并使用正确的动词短语“first went”。
× Uh, it is my first time to type in the on, on keyboard in the computer classroom.
✓ It was my first time typing on the keyboard in the computer classroom.
“first time”之后常接动名词(typing),而不是不定式“to type”。此外介词搭配应为“typing on the keyboard”,并把时态改为过去时“was”。建议:使用“first time + -ing”结构,并注意介词“on”。
× Uh, that's a really exhausting, uh, work.
✓ That was really exhausting work.
“exhausting”作为形容词修饰名词“work”时不需要逗号,且时态应与叙述一致用过去时“was”。“a really exhausting work”在习惯用法中更自然为“really exhausting work”或“a really exhausting job”。建议:去掉多余逗号,并选用自然搭配“exhausting work/ an exhausting experience”。
× Well, actually the way I improve my typing is to practice more.
✓ Well, actually the way I improve my typing is by practicing more.
表示改善的方式时,常用“by + -ing”结构而不是不定式“to practice”。保持一般现在时可以,但结构应改为“by practicing more”。建议:使用“the way ... is by + -ing”。
× Uh, at first I practice very slow and hard because my practice very little,
✓ At first I practiced very slowly and worked hard because I practiced very little,
动词时态需为过去时“practiced”;“slow”应为副词“slowly”修饰动作;“hard”可以用“worked hard”或“practiced a lot”;“my practice very little”非完整句,需改为“I practiced very little”。建议:注意时态一致,使用副词修饰动词,并保证句子完整。
× but with the time and practice more, I pray I type very fast.
✓ but with time and more practice, I now type very fast.
原句中“pray”显然是错误词,应为“now”或“gradually”;时态应表现在现在的结果用现在时“type very fast”。“with time and more practice”比“with the time and practice more”更自然。建议:使用“with time and more practice, I now type very fast”或“I became faster”。