Typing— Part 1 Informe

Sugerencia: Be more concise and grammatical: start with a clear topic sentence, avoid fillers (“uh”), correct grammar (e.g. “I make a lot of mistakes”), and give one specific reason with a linking word. Limit to 2–3 sentences.

Ejemplo: I prefer typing to handwriting because I make fewer mistakes and it’s easier to correct them. Also, my handwriting is quite messy, so typing produces clearer, more readable work.

Sugerencia: Give a direct topic sentence (desktop or laptop), then add a concise reason with clearer grammar and linking words. Remove repetition and unclear references (e.g. “eyes test”). Keep to 2–3 sentences and be specific about the reason.

Ejemplo: I usually type on a laptop keyboard because I need to practice for a writing exam that now requires keyboard use. Therefore, I spend a lot of time rehearsing exam-style tasks on my laptop.

Sugerencia: Start with a clear time phrase, avoid repetition and fillers, and use correct sentence structure. Give one or two specific details about the class or teacher to enrich the answer. Keep it within 2–3 sentences.

Ejemplo: I learned to type in primary school when I was in third grade. It was taught in a compulsory computer class, and the instructor showed us basic typing techniques and exercises.

Sugerencia: Answer directly: say the methods you use to improve typing (courses, practice, online exercises). Remove fillers and repetition, use linking words (for example, after that, additionally) and be specific about what you practiced. Keep to 2–4 sentences.

Ejemplo: I’m not a strong typist, so I took a basic computer course a few years ago that taught typing and common shortcuts. Since then, I practice daily with online typing exercises and timed tests to increase my speed and accuracy.

× I generally prefer typing because uh I made a lots of mistake or during my typing and typing needs provide me to chance to improve my mistake.

✓ I generally prefer typing because I make a lot of mistakes when I type, and typing gives me a chance to improve my mistakes.

The original uses 'made' (past) and 'a lots of mistake' (incorrect plural). 'a lots of' should be 'a lot of' and 'mistake' should be plural 'mistakes'. Also tense should be present 'I make' to match habitual preference, and 'typing gives me a chance' is clearer than 'needs provide me to chance'. Use simple present for routines and correct plural forms. Suggestion: Use 'I make a lot of mistakes' for habitual actions and 'gives me a chance' for function.

× And also my handwriting is very bad, so I prefer typing or then handwriting.

✓ Also, my handwriting is very bad, so I prefer typing rather than handwriting.

The phrase 'or then' is incorrect. Use 'rather than' or 'instead of' to contrast preferences. Also avoid starting with 'And' in formal speech. Use 'also' or restructure the sentence.

× On daily basis I use laptop keyboard most because I'm recently I am practicing for my eyes test and it's required lots of practice on writing test and because of new rules, new rules are applied in examination so I have to practice on laptop keyboard.

✓ On a daily basis I use a laptop keyboard most because recently I have been practicing for my eye test, and it requires a lot of practice for the writing test. Because new rules have been applied in the examination, I have to practice on a laptop keyboard.

Problems: missing article 'a' in 'On a daily basis' and 'a laptop', 'I'm recently I am' redundant and incorrect tense—use present perfect continuous 'have been practicing' for recent ongoing action. 'eyes test' should be 'eye test' or 'eyesight test'. 'it's required lots of practice on writing test' should be 'it requires a lot of practice for the writing test'. 'new rules are applied' better as 'have been applied' to indicate recent change. Fix prepositions: 'practice on' vs 'practice for'—use 'practice for the writing test'. Suggestion: Use correct articles and prepositions and consistent tense for recent ongoing actions.

× During my primary school when I was in 3rd grade, it is in this school school time.

✓ During primary school, when I was in third grade,

The original mixes present 'it is' with past context. Use simple past or past reference: 'During primary school, when I was in third grade,'. Also remove the redundant 'this school school time'. Suggestion: Keep tense consistent with the time reference and avoid repetition.

× In the school there is a computer uh, computer class.

✓ At school there was a computer class.

The context refers to past events, so 'is' should be 'was'. Also 'in the school' is better as 'at school'. Suggestion: Match 'there be' verb to the time frame (use 'was' for past).

× It is a compulsory to attend attend this class in this in in this class section.

✓ It was compulsory to attend this class in that section.

'a compulsory' is incorrect because 'compulsory' is an adjective; use 'was compulsory' without 'a'. Also tense should be past 'was' to match story. Remove repeated words 'attend attend' and extra 'in this in in this'. Suggestion: Use adjective correctly (no 'a') and watch repetition.

× Uh, my uh guider taught me.

✓ My instructor taught me.

'Guider' is nonstandard in English; 'instructor' or 'teacher' is appropriate. Also remove filler 'uh'. Suggestion: Use correct noun for the role and avoid fillers in written responses.

× To be, to be honest, I'm not very good at typing, uh, even I'm not too familiar with computer too much, but uh, few years ago I did, uh, specialized in, uh, specialized, uh, triple C course, which is contained a basic knowledge about computers and how to type and basic function of the computer in this, uh.

✓ To be honest, I'm not very good at typing and I'm not very familiar with computers, but a few years ago I completed a specialized Triple C course, which contained basic knowledge about computers, how to type, and the basic functions of a computer.

Multiple issues: use 'I'm not very familiar with computers' (plural noun) and avoid double negatives like 'not too familiar ... too much'. 'few years ago I did specialized in' is incorrect—use 'I completed a specialized course' or 'I took a specialized course'. 'Triple C' should be capitalized as a course name. Use past simple 'contained' for course content. 'basic function of the computer' should be plural or 'a computer'. Remove fillers 'uh'. Suggestion: Use clear verbs like 'completed' or 'took', match nouns in number, and use past tense for past events.